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posted by alicia386
Crime: Dectetive Story




Chapter 6: Two Missing People Makes A Certain Someone Happy

      Simone Rivers wore her blue strapless dress which made her look taller. She was already tall but she needed that extra height. She had her long blonde hair curled and wore the black wedges she recently bought. The whole outfits was around a seven hundred dollars but she wouldn't mention that to her cheap dad. She looked dazzling atau at least that is what all the boys thought when they whistled when she walked by. She took pleasure on having their attention. Nothing could stop her now. She felt powerful and delighted. Maybe a little anxious about Marco but he was a grown man, he is okay. He could take care of himself. All that mattered right now was to walk inside that church looking amazing. So what if Faye was upset, she'll get over it. Faye should stop worrying about her missing gun.
      Simone sat in the very front of the church. It had to be the best view of the new and young pastor. Paster Carter was unbelievably hot. His stunning blue eyes and wavy dirty blonde hair that always fell in the right place. His chiseled features were only complements of his silky white skin. Could it be impossible for one man to look so much like a god? He may be 23 but she was 16 which means they were only 7 years apart. They could make it work. It wasn't like it was illegal, was it? Besides her father was lebih wrapped up in his work then to see her drooling over the new pastor. She would corner him after church and see if he would talk about whatever they talk about in church. Someday she will have him. He will be hers.
      Immediately after church, she did what she promised she would do. She caught up to him right before he went inside his truck. "Um, Pastor Carter," Simone began. The ugly green color of the truck and the rust almost made her feel discourage but still continued.
      "Please, call me Shawn," He smiled. The rumor was true, his teeth were extremely shiny. They could blind anyone within a mile.
      She giggles, "Okay Shawn. Do anda think we could have some coffee. I need help on this lapor for school. They gave us a winter assignment. The topic is, My kegemaran Person and I chosen God." That was a major lie. Simone wasn't religious like that. She barely attended church.
      "I'm so joyful to see that anda are interested in the workings of god. I'd be honored to guide anda towards the lord." He pulled out his iPhone and began typing. "Lets meet at McDonalds say 1pm?" She nodded and he finished typing. They berkata their goodbyes and he drove off. 
      She was twirling on her heels. Right in that moment, she wasn't caring about how she looked atau if her heels would be ruined. She cared about the wonderful things her and Shawn would do together once they started dating. She wasn't thinking about the stress her Friends were going through.
      The seterusnya thing she new was that a brown sack was being placed over her body. She was brutally thrown inside a van while some guys were talking.
      "Hey boss, are anda sure this Martinez guy was right?" asked a rough voice.
      "If he wasn't, he's dead!" answered an even rougher, deeper voice. Simone held her breathe as they began the rocky journey on the road.
posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~     
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    Zaria
    We came to an agreement, if anything…unusual happened, we’ll check it out. If it happens to be another thing then we’ll comw to the conclusion that we and the book caused this. So on the seterusnya day, sadly where school wasn’t cancelled, I’d kept an open eye for anything weird.
    “Status report?” Stilere asks as she walks with me around school.
    “Nothing,” I sigh. “You?”
    “Same.” Stilere shakes her head....
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Three: New School, New Worries

      "You're lying," I berkata but then again, who would lie about something like this. "My father would have told me if he was in danger. We have a strong relationship."
      "That maybe, but would he really want anda to worry when your spy exams are coming up? Would he want to add lebih to your plate of stress?" Darrell raised one eyebrow for my response but he didn't need one. He already knew what I was going to say.
      "You have a point but," I said. "What is the school going to do about it? Surely, they wouldn't let one of the most bahagian, atas notch...
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posted by 1999jacko
Ron was waiting outside the school building for the MI6 agent that was being sent for him. A small, black car turned round the corner, it slowed to a stop in front of him, the door slowly opened an instead of the small agent the commenter had told him would come 3 men in odd black suits, white ties and black sunglasses stepped out and shoved a bantal case over his head, blocking his line of vision so he couldn't see what happened after that but he felt the smash of a cricket bat against his head while being roughly pushed into the back kerusi, tempat duduk of a car. Slowly his head started to hurt a lot and...
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just a warning every other chapter will be dark with a murder happening in almost all of them so if anda don't like dark stuff don't read this one

Jameson was rushing around the room his eyes blood shot with tiredness, he had received the results of the prints hours lalu and had been working on it for the whole night. And when he had discovered who the killer and his little gang were he had instantly knew he was screwed, but tried to type it up so hopefully chief detective James would discover it and start arresting the people as soon as he was killed. When he finished his little message to James...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
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Alex
    “Are anda okay?!” I asked as I rushed to Zaria and Iris.
    “Somewhat,” Iris berkata giving me a shaky smile, while Zaria replied. “Define okay.”
    I helped them out of the water, they were soaked, and kept on slipping. Which led me to fall into the water.
    “Sorry,” Iris said, looking at my now wet clothes sorrowfully.
    “It’s okay let’s just get out of here.” I said, pulling them toward the ground.
    “Wait!”...
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posted by 1999jacko
Dark Fantasy(I think)

Drake and Sam stood at the edge of the road waiting for the cars to stop zooming past. drake was starting to get really impatient so she started to shout," oh come on! how long does it take for us to be able to menyeberang, cross the road," his face going red and all the while Sam was laughing his head of at the rants that drake was going on about until finally he said," come on man lets just go under the bridge it may be the long way but its easily quicker than this, so come on." Sam had already started jogging towards the entrance to the little path that lead under the bridge sejak the...
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Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?





Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked strawberi red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm Ciuman on the check and saying, “I Cinta anda dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I Cinta anda two.” As he turned into the seterusnya road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s...
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Chapter (13):
"So, are we gonna walk utama atau is Noah gonna pick us up?" asked Leo, as they descended the school steps, "I'm calling Noah" replied Abbie, "Okay then" berkata Leo, he shoved his hands in his pockets and started rocking back and forth on his heals, Abbie fumbled her messenger bag for her phone,and found it just before she could dial Noah's number, it vibrated lightly signaling that she had a text, "I got a text" berkata Abbie, "Who's it from?" asked Leo, "Noah" replied Abbie after she'd checked the name, she read the text, 'Stay where anda are I'm picking anda and Leo up, From ur 'Also...
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posted by hgfan5602
Run now. Run fast. We all have a place that we desire to be, and that place is not utama for me, unlike most people. My parents have started to torture me since last December, and I have had enough of it. My hati, tengah-tengah is racing, and I know I have to get away now. I can't take any lebih of this. My parents have been holding me in my room, locking me under chain and key, beating my head against the wall. Not your normal kid, the kid who thinks doing homework is torture. This is what I call real torture. Yesterday past midnight, I was thinking, "Why do my parents do this to me? Why? Why? I'm definitely...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the review!!! :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 9
    The Seven Deadly Sins
    Greed, gluttony, envy, lust, sloth, pride, and wrath. The seven deadly sins, we all know what they are. Commit one and anda are sinner, commit all, anda are very bad sinner.
    If I have ever believed I committed one it would be wrath, I have a good temper, believe me, but when it is broken. When I’ve met my breaking point, that is when I am at my most unpleasant.
    In the bible, it tells us about...
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I dropped the bat and ran the two steps to his side. “Brett, what happened?! Who did this to you?!” His leg looked like it was torn apart. The skin was hanging in shreds, there was blood everywhere and I could see the bone. His arm was hanging at an odd angle and his face was covered with claw marks and a deep gash could be seen above his right eye. I grabbed some cloths from beside me and turned on the sink. Wetting one of the cloths, I began to clear some of the blood away. Brett gasped in pain. “I'm sorry. I should take anda to the hospital.” I was getting up to leave the room to...
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posted by kitty190123
One day, a girl was walking through a forest. Her name was Rachel, and she was looking for a friend. Her and her friend, Misty, were camping, but then Misty disappeared. She then saw a dim white light. She walked towards it and saw a face, a body, arms, and legs. It was wearing a white dress. anda know, when she thought about it, it looked a bit like... "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!"

That's all for chapter 1! Please tell me if it needs to be a little longer and feel free to post your soalan and comments!
added by sawfan13
Source: Twitter atau Photobucket
added by alicia386
After days of debating, I decided to post some of my first attempt at fan-fiction. In this case the "Silent Hill" franchise. For those of anda that have never played the games, anda could always look up spoilers for them, since this takes place in the game canon. Anyway, here's the prolouge & Chapter One, please komen and let me know what anda think! :)
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PROLOUGE:TOLUCA COUNTY, MAY 2001
Frank was asleep when he heard the knock on his door. After forcing himself out of bed, he looked out to see someone he hardly ever saw. Nathan and his father. Nathan was...
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posted by rory2011
she slept for three hours near Kat ,the ground felt harsher and colder than before ,but Kat's body made Hayley feel worm
she felt the door opening and someone is walking over her ,he grabbed her strongly ,she opened her eyes screaming " mom ... mom ... please " she was trying to escape from Mac's hand but she's too young and small to fight a 36 years old man
Kat finally felt something ,her head was killing her ,she can hardly stand cause she Lost a lot of blood ,but all she wanted is respond to her daughter's scream
after she stood up she can see very clear ,she saw Mac taking Hayley ,she heard...
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posted by rory2011
Hayley was lying on the ground without any alih ,David was watching his daughter being tortured between Mac's hand

he slapped her three times then he hit her head with the dinding ,in somehow ,Kat could get out of Mac's hand ,she took three steps back but everything she was seeing is dark with red and black vision ,she couldn't run away atau find a way out cause her head hurt her so much
Mac walked fast after she stood away ,and he pushed her against the dinding
he was holding something in his hand
" let's see if anda can handle this " Mac berkata , he looked at Kat for a minit then he looked at David...
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I deny the truth,
But really,
That is nothing.
I do that just to protect myself.

I cannot let the truth overcome me
All at once,
I must let it come at me
Pieces sejak pieces.

The truth is always shocking,
At many times sad.
But I must accept the truth
Even after a while.
Because denying the truth
Is like lying to myself

Denying the truth hurts my soul
But it also protects my soul at the same time.
I don't know what to believe.
It's all too shocking for me.

I deny the truth.
I protect my soul.
I protect myself.
But I also hurt myself.
posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and Fantasi :)~
Chapter 32
My best friend was murdered sejak my other best friend
    I awoke again to find myself lying on a cold stone floor, I felt just as cold, emoty inside. My head throbbed lightly, but painful, and my chest hurt when I breathed. But that couldn’t compare to the betrayal I felt when I learned that Jessica was the one that killed my sister, and Dorothy’s so called friend were the accomplices.
    “Help,” I croaked. “Help.”
    “I don’t know why anda bother, Des. Your voice is weak...
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One day. A girl named Rachel was camping with her friend, Misty. Later, they climbed trees. When Rachel fell from 5 feet, Misty went into the deep, dark forest to look for the ranger. After 2hours, Rachel decided to look for her friend. After searching, she found a row of what looked like cottages. Curious, she stepped into a newly built one. She saw a girl with long whitish-blonde hair and a white dress, slightly torn.You know, it kind of looks like..."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!"

Please tell me if it needs any other revisions. If not, I will alih on to chapter 2. Note: For Chapter one, I will not go farther than "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"