I agree with the Max X guy, anda have something but it needs some work. probly try not to sound exactly like the who ever your trying to sing and control your voice, anda sound like your trying to hard
Honestly, not bad... Could use a lot of work, but still not horrible atau anything. I think anda should try to put lebih passion into it. Dont be afraid to SMILE, use your eyes to tunjuk that anda are actually FEELING the song and what it means.