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#1 ~ Find a subject
Find a subject that anda like. Such as fantasy, historical fiction, sci-fi, atau any other genre anda like.
#2 ~ Find a topic
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#3 ~ Think of a topic sentence
If anda don't have a juicy topic sentence, readers will generally lose interest.
#4 ~ Plan ahead
It's always a good idea to plan ahead. Make sure that your story doesn't lead to a dead end, become boring over time, and make sure that anda have enough time in your daily life to type this story. anda never want to leave them hanging.
#5 ~ Dedication
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Spelling and grammar
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Use juicy words
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Always re-read
Never siarkan your story without re-reading. Most writers make some casual errors, and don't notice unless they re-read.
Punctuate
Punctuation are your friends. It's great to punctuate, just don't overdo it.
Emphasizing
It always looks like a lebih interesting story if some of the words are bolded, italicized, underlined, atau anugerah LOCKED.
Advertise
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posted by Grintforever
Alone!

There once was a girl who biked and ran
with her best friend who had a bright orange tan
But then one hari she when biking alone
and thats when she fell along way from home.

She lay still on the ground
not makeing a sound,and thats when she found
that she could not talk
let alone walk

As she slowly made her way home
she wished that she had a phone
so she could call for help
insted of put up with the pain that made her yelp.

She pushed her bike down the dusty track
with a sore haed and an acking back
Then she came to the place where her and her best friend met
just as the sun was begining to set

The seterusnya hari at school she was no where in sight
which gave her best frined a very big fright
but she was a utama tucked up in bed
with a sore leg and an acking head

Thats when she remebered what her best friend had berkata
about not going out bikeing alone
along way from home.

What do anda think?(I think it is very bad) and sorry of the spelling.
posted by theanimemaster
You
It's the middle of the night,



And I can't sleep




Your face, planted with a smile



Are the only things I see




Your voice calling my name



Is the only thing I hear




I can feel your hand rubbing my back



Hearing anda whisper ''good night''




I jump and look around,



And soon realize anda are not there




I sob, tightly holding the gift anda once gave me



It's right here, on my bed, in perfect condition.




30 minit later, I wipe my face and go back to sleep…




I wake up once again



And the cycle starts all over again…
added by zanhar1
posted by zutaradragon
your mistakes don't define you, now. they don't tell anda who you're not, atau who anda can never be. what's it take to get anda to say you'll try? you've got to live this life like it's the only one you've got. what would anda say, what would anda do, if this was your last day? so, anda found out today that life's not the same. not quite as good as yesterday.
and, yes, i know it hurts & i know your pain, but u never gave up this easily befor. such a beautiful thing to just throw away. i think anda need to know that, of all the Warna that anda shine, this is surely not your best, it's really not your style. anda should think about what anda do, befor anda do it, over and over again. i know anda feel alone, that know one can figure anda out, but anda sould know that we just Cinta to see anda smile.i know anda feel like you're lost, feel like you've drifted way to far away, but we can help anda come back.
posted by Buggie111
I wrote this yesterday when me and my boyfriend had a big fight and it's a fight that may go on for a long time. I know I am young to write something like this but, I guess it helps. Plus If anda don't like it just tell me, ok?

The Power of Words
anda and I had this big long fight,
It felt like the storm during the night.
It was verry sad and cold,

My Friends had to like anda a lot
and anda felt like I forgot,
forgot about you.
But I had a prodject due.

anda think you're mr. I'm so cool
but anda used to act like a ghool.
Not to the people anda love,
to the sensetive people like a dove.

How we spoke with eachother,
made anda feel much better.
But the fight we had,
anda berkata was nothing but it was bad.

See ya pal we're ova,
take the cell anda gave me and do me a fava.
Just don't ever,
Never...
Talk to me again!
posted by alicia386
Shane Gildmen stared at the roaring waves. In just a couple of days his girlfriend would be back from her trip to Europe. He had no idea how he was going to deliever the tragic news. His girlfriend was so fragile. He didn't want to crush her feelings.
A week after she left, he cheated on her with Emily Tones. Emily was there for him. While his girlfriend, Trinity, went on vacation. Emily talked with him when he thought Trinity was cheating on him with some european dude. He kissed Emily. He daydreamed about Emily. He even wanted lebih from Emily then just a kiss. Soon he depended on Emily....
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added by axemnas
Source: Lindsay Reddick, axemnas
posted by madening_mahem
 Example of the Maiden
Example of the Maiden
At night, far away, in ancient Japan...
A fair maiden slumbered, only to be awakened sejak blood curdling screams. She open her eyes to a frightening sight, the bodies of her most beloved servants and close relatives astray on the floor, lifeless, dead. She hastily slide open the doors to her room, and ran down the corridor, which was lit with the moonlight that seeped through the paper doors, which were now drenched in blood.
Though her limbs felt heavy, she ran as fast as her hati, tengah-tengah beat. Running away from the cries of her family still being slaughtered sejak an unknown murderer, away from what...
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posted by Epismatic
The Man With No Eyes Collection (1): The Actor




Sundown, sunrise.

Big smile!

(Tired eyes.)

I vanish into thin air.

An actor never fails.

(Lies.)

To give the world a rousing show

(While begging to be recognized.)

To shine as brightly as the sun

Upon the takhta that we’ve devised.

A patchwork-quilt protagonist

A villain from the shadow realm

The work of the illusionist

When I, the actor, take the helm.

“Hey, wouldn’t it be cool to see…”

The whisper marks my story’s birth.

The audience will gather ‘round.

(The jury to decide my worth.)


"The Man With No Eyes" is a series of poems, all of which are unfolding from one character's point of view. They are meant to represent an ongoing journey. So if anda liked this one, stay tuned for more. :)
A/N: I finished Penulisan this about five minit ago, lol. It's actually a song, but I figured it would fit as a poem as well.

This poem/song was inspired sejak two things: 1) A few of my kegemaran Anime couples, namely Ed x Winry from Fullmetal Alchemist and Hoshino x Tanabe from Planetes (AWESOME series). And 2) while my dad was in Iraq, he heard "My Immortal" for the first time and berkata he loved the idea behind it...but it was too sad/depressing because "the chorus was in past tense instead of present tense." So he asked me if maybe I could take the same concept and do my own thing with it. I...
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posted by vanelandsisters
I remember your books
In the hallway
I remember anda cracking up
Microscopes in the garage
Those old parts
I Cinta anda lebih than anything

I remember your blue eyes
Looking into my emeralds
Like we lived in our own world
I remember anda chasing
Our brother
Then falling asleep in my lap
I can still feel anda curled up sejak my side
Little man
And even through that night I knew
You fought it hard as anda could
Remember I
Held anda and whispered

Come on, baby
With me
I'm never gonna leave
You behind
You were
My best
Thirteen years

I remember the first night
When my hope
Turned to crying and screaming your name
Flowers pile up in the...
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added by segafan
She was beauty woven into a living being... If only that were the case. But as I stepped towards her, opening my mouth to speak, she faced me, never moving her feet to turn. We held eachother's gaze for a few agonizing moments. It seemed as though she was just going to stare at me until I did something.
When I reached this conclusion, i decided to take a step forward. As I did so, she began to shiver. Another step, and she began to twitch anxiously. Another step, this one seemed to be all she could take. Yet, I had to know. So I took one last step, and she broke.
Her eyes flashed and her hair...
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posted by dragonsmemory
Creating your own universe is a great way to pass time. It will also give anda a rough outline for your writings. These are the steps I follow in creating Eden.
Step 1: Establish main geographical features. This will be crucial in establishing the settings in your stories. If a certain river has magical properties, anda have to knw where the sumber of the river is to be able to pinpoint the sumber of the power.
Step 2: Establish lifeforms present on your world. anda have to know what creatures live there before anda can write their histories. If the Naga had not attempted to merge themselves with...
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posted by sasuhia4ever
    “It all started about six years ago…my mom and dad were at the park playing with my younger brother, Tyler, on his fourth birthday. I had decided to hang out with my Friends instead… now I wish that I had never made such an idiotic decision. Cause of that hari at the park, someone came and murdered my parents and mencuri away my little brother. I know all of this because that dirt bag left a letter saying “ I murdered both of your parents and mencuri your little brother because when I went to kill him I just couldn’t bring myself to do it. So, I haven’t decided...
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added by khaledodeh
posted by uniquezandy
Sams POV
I am your normal, typical everyday teen who is 16 years old. Samatha is my real name; say it to my face and I will bite your head off. People say when there young, (girls anyway,) "Look mummy, I want to be a princess when I grow up, and I'm going to marry a handsome prince." To tell the truth, I used to be a girl like that. A girl who read every fairy tale she could get her hands on, and believe that they are real. It is a load of poison now. I had to learn that in real life, true Cinta is rubbish and anda won't grow up to be want anda want. And in life, change happens quite alot and...
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added by Nostariel510
Source: Google
Taylor Mali lovingly mocks his own genre.
video
parody
funny
comedy
poems
slam puisi
taylor mali
i could be a poet
posted by para-scence
**6 months later...***

Bride laughed and giggled as I bounced her on my leg; just another hari at the park. It was summer, finally, a break from school. I guess I was looking ke hadapan to being a sophomore. School wasn't that bad anymore now that I had my friends. Felicity wasn't that bad either. We're not exactly the greatest of friends, but we can tolerate each other now. Also, Trace and I started dating. It was great; he's really sweet and funny. I couldn't ask for a better guy.

"Come on, Harley! Gail berkata to be utama sejak three!" Aspen called. Everyone else was already at the sidewalk, starting...
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