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Find a subject that anda like. Such as fantasy, historical fiction, sci-fi, atau any other genre anda like.
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Spelling and grammar
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Use juicy words
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Always re-read
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Punctuate
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Emphasizing
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Advertise
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posted by Insight357
sejak the time, I reached Social Services noon had come. I walked inside the one-story, brick building. I looked around the large, blue-walled room the door had revealed. I didn’t see Lucy.
    A curvy, dark-toned woman come up to me. She had curly black hair, and brown eyes.
    “You must be, Damien,” berkata the woman. I nodded.
    “And anda are?” I knew she was a social worker, but that’s all.
    “I’m Stacey, Stacey Sterns,” she said.
    “You’re Lucy’s worker, right?”
    “Yes,...
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posted by Insight357
I needed more, more! I threw the book across the dimly lit, wooden attic. The book hit a stack of old newspapers. I tore open yet another book. Nothing would give me my answers.
    Why did I feel the need to care for Lucy? Why could I not get Alexander out of my head?
    There were pages, and pages of the thought process, but nothing to explain what I felt! Why could no one manage to capture these feelings, and explain them?
    A knock on the door interrupted me. “What?” I snapped.
    “It is past midnight, Damien. Come to bed,” berkata Grey through the door.
    “I’ll come when I want to. Now, go away!” Could she not understand I was confused, and angry? She possessed such naivety.
    “Fine!” Grey yelled. I heard her storm down the steps. Then I heard her bedroom door slam. I let out a puff of air.
    Then I threw another book against the wall. I kicked the whole stack of books, and watched as they toppled over. I threw myself onto the floor, and began crying.
It all started out as an ordinary day, man. Mrs. Krabaple, my stupid teacher wanted us to do a
project on the most intense, exciting hari of our vacation. Truth is, I actually DID my project, instead
of getting my dog, Santa's Little Helper to eat a piece of paper with the alphabet and some made
up curse words Milhouse made up that I thought were dumb. Anyway, all these kids had these boring
stories, while I was remembering mine:
It started two weeks ago, when Homer came home, not miserable atau went to Moe's before coming
home. He seemed so giddy and excited.

Homer: Marge! Kids! Come to the living...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 15




Jax felt he had been pounding on the door of Bone’s garaj for an hour. Finally, he heard the click of the lock and they door opened and he was greeted sejak the barrel of a shotgun.
“Whoa Bone come on its just me,” Jax berkata quickly with his hands up in surrender as Bone stepped closer to him without lowering his gun.
“Yeah I know it’s you, the hell anda doin’ here?” Bone replied. His voice was raspy like he had a sore throat.
“I’m not drunk if that’s what you’re thinkin’.”
“No? Then why are anda here?”
Bone kept his shotgun pointed at Jax.
“Look, I just escaped...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 14







The serigala, wolf did not alih but Koda was already on the attack. His teeth grew into their long and dangerous bite, the claws tore through his fingers and black bulu sprouted from his arms to his hands.
Before Iah knew it, Koda was on him but he was well prepared for the young Skinwalker.

Why do are they always go for a fight first? He thought to himself biting into Koda’s neck careful not puncture his skin.
Iah was much lebih powerful than Koda expected as the serigala, wolf easily threw him and pinned him to the ground.
Koda growled and bit at him but Iah lunged for his neck and locking his jaws around...
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posted by sawfan13
I woke up the seterusnya day, and I didn't see Howl on the balcony. I didn't know where he was at. I looked around for him, and then he just popped up behind me just like that! "Howl, anda gotta stop doing that! anda scared me!" "I'm sorry. I didn't mean to make my Queen unhappy." There he went again. The Queen thing. It's sweet, but....odd. Maybe that's just his way of calling me his girlfriend.

Earlier, I showed Howl where the pancuran, pancuran mandian was at, and how to use it, since he's never used an actual pancuran, pancuran mandian before. He calls it a waterfall, since the only thing he's used to clean himself. I left him alone...
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posted by dawnisbeauty
Hey, so this is a poem Ive been thinking of for a long time,please read and comment!



The Spirit

The spirit rushes on,
Swifter than the wind,
To find answers,
To seek the way.

The spirit flows on,
Like the river.
Flowing on to find the ocean,
A utama for all its dreams.

The spirit shines on,
Brighter than a thousand suns.
Shining on to clear the darkness,
To find the path.

The spirit lives on,
lebih eternal than the sea,
Living on to find its home,
Where all the ends shall meet.
posted by sassygirl26640
clearly justin bieber the famous pop teen idol. is being down graded for 98% of girls lives to 20%. its been taking forever for 1 song to come out of his mouth these days. plus no girl likes his new hair cute from cute and shaggy to a short cut. now he sung with a wanobe kid whos daddy paied for his songs to come out janeh smith. oops did i spill the beans on him i think i did but thats a differnt story about him and his sister. but i Cinta his sisters's Muzik but there they been edited!! what is going to happen to are once loved justin bieber now. o and something i think all the people who...
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posted by Insight357
    Elizabeth went back into the main room. She hoped Wyatt was as good of a peacemaker, as he was a lover. Lucifer and Xavier can fight dirty. She knew Wyatt had plenty of work cut out for him.
    A loud crash made Elizabeth look over at the other side of the room. Standing there was a ten-foot tall red creature. In a low, eerie, crackling voice the creature spoke.
    “I am Barzane, head demon’s right hand man. I was sent here to warn anda of an impending attack on the Blind Dimension, unless anda give me a particular warlock girl....
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posted by Insight357
    Wyatt, and Elizabeth returned to the Temple two hours before the dance. She picked a black dress, with one long sleeve, and one short one. The dress came to her knee. They ran to her room to get ready.
    Elizabeth put on her dress, and pulled her hair up in an elegant twist, along with dark make-up. Wyatt wore a suit, his hair geled to the side. He had put on dark make-up, too.
    They went down the stairs to the room with the pentagram. Lucifer, Xavier and Xavia, Eli, Adam, and Adara were all elegantly dressed. They stood inside...
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posted by nomblahnom
“We’ve got him this time,” berkata Special Agent in Charge Sheelia Tanner of the FBI. She sat in the passenger kerusi, tempat duduk of a plain blue sedan belonging to her partner, Special Agent Scott Carver. Scott was a fit, trim, athletically-built man with short blond hair, blue eyes, and chiseled features. He was average height and had a generally serious, but approachable look. Sheelia was only slightly shorter, still quite tall for a woman, also very fit but sleekly built like a dancer. Her father and mother were of mixed heritage, including black, white and Asian, and she seemed to draw all her features...
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posted by Insight357
Memories,
Confusion,
So many thoughts,
The end is near,
The darkness coming,
Now its here,
The tunjuk is over,
The lights are off,
We now say goodnight,
Goodbye,
As we begin 2 open the new chapter

It hurts at first,
Will the changes be extreme?
Please, just tell me,
This was only a dream,
I want to go back,
To relive this again,
This high point in life,
It can't end.

The stage lights dimmed,
The leaving spoke,
With happy faces on,
But tears in their eyes,
This tunjuk is over,
Now go home.
posted by samuraibond005
Young Sumiko Yamakawa, a modern samurai in training, and no lebih than 15 years of age. Like most samurai in training she carries around a wooden sword, a bokken, and a dagger, a Tanto. Sumiko’s older brother, Itsuki, was a samurai, one who had recently graduated from the Shinto Ryu School of swordsmanship; not only was he trained to use a sword but a short 4 foot staff as well.
    It was the hari Itsuki was to be promoted to the rank of a samurai, the only thing he ever wanted, naturally his sister Sumiko was able to attend. Sumiko was the youngest of her family, Takashi...
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posted by sawfan13
My stuff has already been moved down here to the jungle. I still can't shake off what happened yesterday, but Howl's been very sweet to me, assuring me everything's okay. Debbie has been helping me unpack my stuff and everything. Some people are still thinking that I'm crazy for moving down here, but I wanted to. Howl couldn't really adjust very well to my world, but with a little bit lebih time, I'll get used to his world more. Debbie ran up to me and hugged me and asked," Lil, I know this may sound ridiculous and silly, but is it okay if I may stay with anda guys?" "Deb-" "I know it sounds...
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posted by sawfan13
Adam started to snicker,"You think anda can defeat me again. I have a gun now, and I shot at your little serigala, wolf buddy earlier. I tied your little girlfriend up there. Yeah, she's good at shutting up, especially with this gun pointed at her. Ha!" I berkata nothing else. I started attacking him. I threw the gun out of his hands, as he started to fear. I grabbed him sejak the wrist, and started crushing the Bones in his wrist with my bare hands. I wouldn't stop growling and yelling. I have never felt so angry and strong in my life. He whined and pathetically tried to get away. I attacked him, as if I were...
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posted by sawfan13
Running. Running as fast as I can and I can never stop, until I find her. I'm still in New York, but I'll ride a plane back to get her. But first I have to ask her parents for it. I don't know if they'll let me, since they wanted Adam to marry her. But I don't know. I just hope they say yes. I walked up to the door, and knocked on it. Lilith's mom answered it,"Howl? What are anda doing here?" "I need the plane. I know where Lilith's at. I can feel it in bones." "Okay, but I have to send Debbie with you. She was the first person to help find Lilith as soon as she found out where she was at. I'll...
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posted by sawfan13
He was waiting for my reply, until I finally spilled out,"I Cinta anda too. I Cinta anda lebih than anything! I wanna be with you! Forever." He berkata nothing. All he did was smile, as he got up. He lifted me, as we both went back to the waterfall cave-area. We sat in the same place as we did before, except Howl wanted to do something else,"Remember what anda told me about making-out?" I looked at him oddly and said,"Yeah?" He winked at me, as he got closer to me. He started Ciuman me, like making out kissing. We started making out very heavily, but I was wondering if this was okay atau not? I mean,...
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Twas midnight in the warm summer. The stars so bright and lovely, along with the full moon lingering in the sky. She looked out of her window, sighing about what she is missing out on. The outside world. Oh how Lacrymosa wanted to be in the outside world. Mother never allowed it. Lacrymosa cringed and shuddered at the thought of Mother. What a monster of a being she was. Horrid woman. Very overprotective of her little Lacrymosa. A widowed woman with only one child is usually very protective of her children, but Lacrymosa's mother was quite different. She was overbearing. The Queen of Lithiumina....
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posted by magicgirl123
Alex paced her room, bored. It was just another summer Thursday in the city of Verona, Italy. Her mom was in her utama office, reviewing a book for publishing, and Alex's little brother Sam was at the park with his friends. Alex would do the same, but she didn't have many friends, and her best friend was in Paris for the summer. Alex stopped pacing, stomped her foot and quietly cursed her bordom in Italian. Then she slipped on her ballet rumah pangsa and bonded out into the hall.

"Mom! I'm going to check the mail! Be right back!" She shouted in American English into the apartment and grabbed the keys....
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posted by MissMuffin38
Daniel stepped onto the streets ahead of him, packed with different families doing their regular thing. One of the families Daniel knew. A familiar face stepped out of the car - his best friend Jonathan. Jonathan's mother caught a glimpse of Daniel in the corner of her eye. She turned round with a smile on her face. "Hello Daniel! How are anda today?"
"I'm fine thanks, how about you?" Daniel answered politely. "I'm very good thank you. I suppose you'll be wanting to see Jonathan?" she asked him.
"Er, yes please." He walked over to greet Jonathan.

"How are anda Dan?" Jonathan asked. "Your mother...
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