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posted by DietCokeGirl

This is written about the perfect silence only found in the dead of night, and the feelings it inspires.
The tajuk comes from the huraian a friend of mine gave when we were stuck in the middle of nowhere at midnight and I found it sort of beautiful.
Enjoy (I hope) :)

Weighted air and winking stars,
darkness draped, tension wrought.
This night, this hour, is ours.
Silence chimes unspoken thoughts
that choke my mouth.
Silver moonbeams in glittering outline
surround you, and in our youth
this night, this hour, we intertwine.

I'd Cinta to hear what anda like atau hate.
Thanks for reading.

DietCokeGirl

medouri, Nice-Guy and 9 others like this

Cinders Wow, that was beautifully simplistic. The good kind of simple. The to-the-point kind of simple. You know? Great word choice, you used a lot of descriptive verbs, fantastic! It has a wonderful sacred or holy tone, which I believe is what you were going for. Very interesting. I have no constructive criticism. Bravo.

whitelion great poem, nice job

DietCokeGirl Thank you! You're observation is completely spot-on Cinders, I was definitely trying to convey a feeling of an almost spiritual awe, without drawing on god or religion per se. Also, thank you! :)

karolytea just... beautiful... awesome!!! love it!

sweet_n_silly oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo wow

vans01 The book the dead of night? I think Chris wrote that!!!! Oh by the way i love it

Chapter one of a story... That doesn't have a name. Yet.

posted by tsmith120

My name is Timothy Roger Cole III. This is lebih atau less my story.
Well, mine and about a half dozen others. So for the sake of convenience I'm going to tell this story to anda from a third person perspective, and not always narrate it from my own point of view - since I wasn't present for some of the important stuff, and it'd be easier to tell anda what happened than recount the tedious discussions on this stuff that I had to go through to get anything remotely resembling a full picture of the events.
I hope anda appreciate the things I go through for you. Anyhow, let us begin.

Timothy Roger Cole...

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Nightfall #1 COMPLETE REWRITE: CHAPTER THIRTEEN

posted by adamk

CHAPTER THIRTEEN:
OCTOBER 30, 11:22 PM
I feel nothing but fury towards pike as I continue on towards Harold’s house. Danny, of course is against the idea, however, I have not told him I healed Harold’s condition, and unless I can find a way to make it with everyone surviving the seterusnya twenty-four hours, I decide that information is best left secret. As I near the exit that will take me back into the suburbs, I realize is less than an jam until Halloween, I drift back off into my memory of that fateful night all those years ago.
ALBANY,OCTOBER 31, 1850:
We are less than a mile from exiting...

A Land Divided - Chapter 1

posted by StarPotterRings

Hows it going do anda think?

Our story begins with an elf gliding through the trees. His lean body let him jump from pokok to pokok as if he were flying.
It was spring, his kegemaran time of the year. The daffodils and forsythia were in bloom, and the trees were once again turning green. He stopped on a particularly large branch and looked up into the clear sky. His dark blue eyes without the memories of the horrors of war, his skin without the scars of the torture it brings. For he was yet young, and all the time he has been alive has been peaceful.
He flew once lebih through the trees. He loved...

Mana and the Pet, Chaper 2

posted by queenpalm

Chapter 2
"Please! Please! Please!" I begged. My parents exchanged glances, then looked back at me.
"You want a lemur, Mana?" Mr. Walker asked.
"Yes! Please! I'll take really good care of her!" I pleaded.
"How much would it cost to take care of it?" Mrs. Walker asked.
"Well, they eat fruit, and not much because they're so small. Plus, this lemur was circus trained, so she shouldn't need anything special."
"What about health, and the veterinarians?"
"I'll turn 12 in a week, so I can babysit lebih often. I can use that money to pay for the vet's bill," I said, really having no idea. I just agreed to...

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Nightfall #1(COMPLETE REWRITE) Chapter 9

posted by adamk

CHAPTER NINE:
On the drive back to my apartment, I cannot help but feel something is amiss. What it is, I don’t have a clue. As I continue the drive, I once lebih delve into my past…
CRYSTAL FALLS: 1850
I awaken an jam later, still in pain from the sun’s rays. I feel Perry’s dried blood on my face, and find myself disgusted at what I have done. I cannot believe the situation I’ve landed myself in. About ten minit later, Perry returns to the cave. From where I do not care, atau even want to know. I feel nothing but burning hatred and contempt for him. I still do not know what prevented...

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Nightfall #1:(COMPLETE REWRITE) Chapter Seven

posted by adamk

CHAPTER SEVEN:
I return to my apartment, and turn off the police radio, which is only reporting the incident I was involved with earlier that night. I suddenly feel tired once again, and this shocks me. As I lay back on the couch, I continue thinking of Pike, and my first night of being a vampire.
CRYSTAL FALLS: 1850
I hesitate, and then follow Perry outside. Only moments ago, I found myself full of anger, yet at the same time, worry, although not for my own sake, but for my father’s, who is still asleep in the other room. For some odd reason, I am in pain, not from my wound, which has disappeared...

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Nightfall #1 (Complete Rewrite) Chapter 4:

posted by adamk

CHAPTER FOUR:
As I near the parking lot of Crystal Falls High School, my supersonic hearing picks up on hundreds of voices. As I pull into a parking space, I note how many people are already there. As I walk into the office, the ten minit warning loceng rings. I walk up to the desk, and the secretary looks up at me. “Yes?” she asks. I quickly explain that I am new to the school, and that I am a senior. She looks up my name in the student records, and nods. “Ashley Garland. Age seventeen? Transferring from Santa Barbara?” she asks. I nod, and hear the hum of the printer as it prints out...

The Guardian of Zamari chapter 1

posted by ITF

A shadowy figure silently brushed the silken curtains aside as she slipped through the open window and stepped into the dark chamber. Passing a small meja, jadual and a bed, the fox quickly headed towards a cabinet that stood against the far wall.
Beaded necklaces hung above a oval mirror that was set in the center. Her eyes rested on a miniature strongbox half hidden behind the mirror.
Paying no heed to the deafening clatter coming from the oblivious guest downstairs, she skillfully picked the tiny lock and raised the lid. It was hard to tell what was what in the darkness, so she emptied it into...

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Annabelle (warning... this story is very depressing, does not end happy) (also very intense)

posted by CatiePotter

My name is Annabelle. I am sixteen and I am beaten.

I lived with my dad and mom in that trailor park on the edge of town between the bar and the strip of stores everyone avoids. We lived happily until my mom, Mary, died in that car crash five years ago. My dad became depressed, drinking alcohol and gambling. He was soon unemployed, so to keep the trailor I had to drop out of school. He is now a deep alcoholic and gambles with his buddies every other day.

Whenever we run out of spirits he hits me. He keeps hitting me until I go to the bar nearby and get more. This happens every two days sejak his...

Chapter 1 of My New Story (I Dont Have a Name Yet...)

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

My breath came out in a white, Frozen awan before me and smelled heavily of my mint gum. My footsteps’ sounds were wet on the sidewalk. It had rained just before I left the bookstore and, just sejak my luck, someone mencuri my car (boy, was my dad going to have a cow when he hears that…), so I had to walk all the way utama in the wet night, all sejak myself. I prayed silently that I would be able to find my way because I was new in town and barely knew where everything was. I had to use a crappy GPS to find the bookstore. I was just lucky I found it.
The town was Cassidy....

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Keep Breathing, Just Keep Breathing

posted by brandonaz

Hiya! First stab at adding something I wrote to the Penulisan spot. This is a cliche little story inspired sejak the Mayday Parade song "One Man Drinking Games." komen-komen would mean the world. (:

And anda swore anda saw me laughing, and I swore I saw anda smile
And the time we've spent together was meant to last us quite a while
As I take this piece of anda with me I'll carry to my grave
Knowing that for someone you're an Angel sent to save

He touched the tip of his index finger to each of the freckles that dotted her arm. He drew patterns, connecting the delicate dots into hearts and Rama-rama and lopsided...

Super-natural chapter 1 Nowhere to hide.

posted by fiestagirl12345

Scarlet's P.O.V

I woke up feeling the rough but smooth texture of my worn down bed. I looked around tiredly yawning getting up to change I got my things and headed out. The village was mostly quiet rarely its loud. Our village was very poor. I went in the woods we were banned from going in their. I went in anyways I went alone I had no buddies at all. I was in woods shooting some arrows It was like 98 degrees out I was sweating. Their was a ant on my arm I tapped and hit my hand and shacked it when water swooshed up. I curiously tried again I moved my arm up and the water rose up. I smiled in...

Trapped - Chapter One

posted by Insight357

“I want to go home,” I groaned noisily, smacking my head onto the gray meja, jadual my Friends and I sat at. I was in my first period physics class with my group of friends. It was the saat hari of the school tahun and all looked as it had for the past three years.

Chris glanced over at me with dull blue eyes. “Yeah, well I do to, so shut up,” she replied with a grumpy sigh. No one was in a particularly good mood this time of morning, well Jeydon was, but that probably had something to do with the fact that she was used to getting up at the crack of dawn.

“Who pissed in your Cheerios this...

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Sneak Peak of My Book/Novel "Remembering You"--Chapter 1

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

Chapter 1
October, 1964

I lied awake on my bed.

I couldn’t sleep.

My mind was wandering, racing to different topics at the same time. I couldn’t stay on one subject in my mind for lebih than ten seconds. I was restless.

Just then, out of nowhere, I remembered something that I particularly didn’t want to remember. But I did anyway. It was something that I hated thinking about, and something that I thought about all the time. I got up, clad in only a pair of jeans, and walked over to my closet and turned on the light. I pulled down old, dusty boxes and yellowed papers off of the closet’s shelf....

Manga Review:The Art of Vampire Knight

posted by ZekiYuro

Vampire Knight is one of Viz's top-selling series, and it's not hard to see why: While it's not for everyone, the Cinta triangle, Supernatural romance, and hint of forbidden Cinta are like catnip for some readers. The Art of Vampire Knight, released earlier this bulan sejak Viz, is a beautifully produced art book that will be pure heaven to Vampire Knight junkies (but probably a bit boring for everyone else).
The book collects the full-color art that manga-ka Matsuri Hino created for the chapter openings in LaLa magazine and the tankoubon covers. Some have been published as part of the English-language...

Hunter-gatherers and Subsistence Societies

posted by ZekiYuro

Very few people in the modern world obtain their Makanan supply sejak hunting and gathering in the natural environment surrounding their homes.This method of harvesting from nature's provision is the oldest known subsistence strategy and has been pratised for at least 2 million years.It was,indeed,the only way to obtain Makanan until rudimentary farming and the domestication of wild Haiwan were introduced about 10 000 years ago.

Because hunter-gatherers have fared poorly in comparison with their agricultural cousins,their numbers have dwindled,and they have been forced to live in marginal environments,such...

Why are anda still alone?

posted by ZekiYuro

Some reasons will explain why anda don't have any lover now,according to Horoscope.
Aries(21/3-20/4):Because anda always make argument and never make up your mind carefully.
Taurus(21/4-20/5):Because anda are really really lazy.
Gemini(21/5-21/6):Because anda can't make someone believe in you.
Cancer(22/6-22/7):Because anda always worry too much.
Leo(22/7-22/8):Because anda want to be a superstar.
Virgo(23/8-22/9):Because anda are never pleased with your choice and just want to choose a PERFECT one-an impossible thing.
Libra(23/9-23/10):Because anda Cinta too much people,and then finally anda have no one.
Scorpio(24/10-22/11):Because...

Best of the Thrills: Chapter One

posted by hgfan5602

Hi. My name is Jake Gartner, and right now, basically a huge mutant serpent is coming to menelan me whole, tear me to pieces of flesh, so I have no time to talk right now. Oh, um...you want to follow me? Sure, just accept that everyday will be the best of the thrills. Right now, we are not getting any help from the immortal world, so just know that we have a horrible system of magic right now, and we have an extremely low supply of weapons, thus, the chance that anda will get out of this mess is around eighty-six percent. (because of me, the master of war) Oh yeah, the serpent. Enough talk. (ROARS) Off to kill a mutant serpent!!! (stabs, deflects, cuts a gash in its head, dies) That's only our first one, trainee. Whatever your name is. seterusnya time, I invite anda to sertai with us on our battle. And it will be even lebih life-consuming, if anda know what that means.

My saat Shadow (dark short-story)

posted by msbass

Well..I guess I am not realy good at Penulisan stories..but I Cinta doing it so I guess I can post one short story here~~~
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I knew nightmares pretty well. Those sick, little, messed-up dreams, which anda can never forget. No matter how much anda try they stuck in your head unwilling to set anda free. But I guess, I'm used to that. I had nightmares since I was a little child and some of them lebih than once. After I reached the age of seven they became my saat shadow. It was like I had an alter-ego. I became so intoverted that in the end people were afraid to touch...

oliver - let the ceri, ceri, cherry blossoms flutter pt. 1

posted by narlyvamp1234

When I first met him, I could not comprehend anything… why he was here, where he was from, what had happened to his eye… my name is Nora Fushigi, I am sixteen years old and I live with my little sister, Bloom, in a mansion in England. The tahun is 1940. World War II was going on then, so I called for Bloom to come live with me out in the country because I was worried about her in the big, huge city of London. When she got here, she was overly happy to see me. “Sissy,” she said, “I’m glad to see anda again!” Bloom is only six years old, and she still needs to learn some proper manners,...