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posted by DietCokeGirl

This is written about the perfect silence only found in the dead of night, and the feelings it inspires.
The tajuk comes from the huraian a friend of mine gave when we were stuck in the middle of nowhere at midnight and I found it sort of beautiful.
Enjoy (I hope) :)

Weighted air and winking stars,
darkness draped, tension wrought.
This night, this hour, is ours.
Silence chimes unspoken thoughts
that choke my mouth.
Silver moonbeams in glittering outline
surround you, and in our youth
this night, this hour, we intertwine.

I'd Cinta to hear what anda like atau hate.
Thanks for reading.

DietCokeGirl

medouri, Nice-Guy and 9 others like this

Cinders Wow, that was beautifully simplistic. The good kind of simple. The to-the-point kind of simple. You know? Great word choice, you used a lot of descriptive verbs, fantastic! It has a wonderful sacred or holy tone, which I believe is what you were going for. Very interesting. I have no constructive criticism. Bravo.

whitelion great poem, nice job

DietCokeGirl Thank you! You're observation is completely spot-on Cinders, I was definitely trying to convey a feeling of an almost spiritual awe, without drawing on god or religion per se. Also, thank you! :)

karolytea just... beautiful... awesome!!! love it!

sweet_n_silly oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo wow

vans01 The book the dead of night? I think Chris wrote that!!!! Oh by the way i love it

What I wish I was?What I am not ?Who will I be?part 1(Remake)

posted by Lismine

At a peaceful neighborhood of Toyko,Japan an beautiful girl's family becomes no more.While sha was out at here best friend's house for two hours.blood splattering,pain,dieing,and screaming in one house.Police was called but the line was filled.For hours this goes on the girl returns to her peaceful family to her twin brother,older sister,mother,father,and her younger brother.

When she gets her keys to the door she notice that it already opened just a crack though,she is still nervous.She cationusilly opens the door to see her younger brother have the breathe of his to say,"you know one day...

Death Wish part 1

posted by gumball789

I live in my opinion possibly the most ghetto town in the United States, Pittsburgh. People have been committing suicide all over town. Population all over town has been decreasing, fast. Some of my Friends were so depressed that they were thinking about "joining the crowd". I wouldn't live without my friends. I don't want my Friends to go as well as my mom and dad. Yes, I'm an orphan. I've been an orphan for about three weeks. My Friends have disappeared. I think they went to Clarion; but I could be wrong. There have been tons of fights at my school. Most of the people that were committing suicide were middle school and high school aged. I was getting really tired really fast. I climbed up in a pokok and found a comfortable spot and fell asleep. seterusnya thing I knew, I was tied up on a pole.

Sorry for cliffhangers....

Hidden Secret: Chapter 12

posted by DxCFan123

.. my little sister Leaisl. B-B-But the image wasn't from my eyes, no. From her eyes at my... my funeral

'Sam is very peaceful, Mama. I would Cinta to be like her' I said, twirling Samantha's hair around my finger
'Lea, she's-' berkata Kevin
'She doesn't know!!' Grandma hissed back
'Know about what?'
'That Sammie is in a state of peace. To be like her, anda must disconnect from the li- I mean, outside world. Are anda willing to do this?'

Godfather serigala, wolf stepped out of the shadows behind us and into the light. He stared at me with his one eye, the other bandaged. 'I-I-I am not sure. I will think about it,...

Hidden Secret: Chapter 11

posted by DxCFan123

Me and Marie stood at the edge of Skye's hospital bed. He hati, tengah-tengah was barely beating. I was able to wash off all the blood before anyone saw me. "So tragic, huh? Well, listen, I've got someone to tell you." she said. We sat down and she stared at the ground. "I-I used to know Skye. We knew eachother in Kinder. We were great friends. I know anda two were, too. But, then, one hari she pulled a prank in me. We had to write report. Me and her picked the same thing, but she berkata it was fine and wrote mine for me. But, then, She wrote horrible, horrible things that I told her, as secrets. They caused...

Sneak Peek - Betrayal sejak Besties </3

posted by SueLuvsVJ101

Victoria (:

The subject of Rowan stopped the chewing of pizza and sipping of soda. Everyone at my sleepover knew I had had a HUGE crush on him for a really, really long time. Finally, someone spoke. It was my best friend, Liz. “Um, Victoria, how do anda expect this plan to work out? I mean, anda know...” Liz had always been sensitive about the boy, even though they’d ended a 2-year relationship almost 7 months ago, she still wasn’t over him. Someone else replied, sejak saying “Um, Liz? Hun? anda BROKE UP WITH HIM LIKE, 7 MONTHS AGO! anda really need to alih on.” I shifted uncomfortably. I hated when...

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posted by noahnstar1616

Cameron faced me. "Huh?"

"I said", my eyes focused on Mercury. "Could anda give us some privacy?"

"I could, but I don't want to."

I scowled.

"It's fine Mercury, I'll see anda later." Cameron kissed her on the cheek.

The sight stung the back of my eyeballs.

She smiled at him, glared at me, and left.

Cameron faced me again. "Now what did anda want?"

"I want to know why the hell you're tongue was in that..bitch's mouth", I yelled. I had never used profanity before, but it felt good.

"Because she's my girlfriend."

"No, I'm your girlfriend!"

"Correction, anda were my girlfriend."

" 'Were'? What do anda mean 'were'?...

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posted by WildCherryWolf

The Tower of London is notorious for it's ghost stories. Its where I live. I get to go to the White Tower whenever I want. I get to hang round the St. Peter ad Vincula chapel. And sometimes, I can get Friends in for free. But this, this is my story. My name is Tallulah, Tara to my friends, family, and you. And this is my tale of terror in the Tower.

I had gotten back from Tudor History with my tutor. I was pretty exhausted, as I had been on a walking tour and class. And I had been called in to help a guided tour, that's the kind of thing we get when we live here. It's only a few of us, but we...

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(First Draft: Chapter 1 Part 1) What Do anda Think?

posted by Harrypotter148

Just tell me what anda think, :)

Aria Glass sat on bahagian, atas of her house with an unopened bir in her hand and her eyes on the sky. It was a beautiful night and Toby and Jared where at it again. Jared had become lebih quick-tempered than usual, barking at almost everything. Neither boy’s where good at their temper control and over the years Aria had learned to let boys be boys and fight it out themselves. But Aria could take them both, Aria smirked at this thought, true atau not they would never hurt her.
But she did hate it when they fought, although...

Speechless Ch. 6

posted by para-scence

The seterusnya day, I had no choice but to go to school. My Friends looked at me with concerned looks, but I tried to ignore that. We all stood around in front of the school, waiting to be let in before the first bell.

"How anda doing?" Chasity asked. I shrugged.

"Did anda hear?" Axel said, his eyes wide with interest.

"Hear what," Liberty said.

"The kids they took in weren't the real shooters. They had their alibis. And no one ever really saw the shooters; they were disguised atau something. So that means---"

"The real shooters are still here," gagak finished. Everyone shifted uncomfortably.

"Well why...

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The Hunt for My Angel: Chapter 2 (more added)

posted by gabatron3000

Ky

“Oni! Did anda already pack some shampoo, conditioner and all of that crap? anda know that hotel hygiene products suck!” shouted June through my bathroom door.

“June chill, Let me finish taking my waz.” I rolled my eyes. No use she couldn’t see it.

I walked out of the bathroom sat on the edge of my katil looked up at June and berkata “Don’t anda ever go home? I bet that Andrew misses anda dearly.” I smiled at her. Now it was her turn to roll her eyes.

June sat seterusnya to me. She put her head into her hands. I wasn't expecting that, I pat her back.

"June what's wrong?" I asked concerned while...

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The Hunt for My Angel: Chapter 1

posted by gabatron3000

Oni

I was sitting. Doodling on a notepad with a purple pen and sitting on my kegemaran green beanbag chair.

“Oni, Oni!”(Oh-nee) Yelled my eldest sister June as she jogged into my room oh so gracefully. I sat upright, noticing that I was slouching again.

'Sit up straight atau you’re gonna get a crooked spine and spend the rest of you’re life in a wheelchair.' I mocked my Mom’s frequent nags. She’s a Chiropractor, anda know how they are.

“What is it my Lovely sister dear?” I asked June snidely while rolling my eyes.

You see, I haven’t been in the best mood these past few months. I...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 25

posted by Insight357

I got to the motel around ten that night. I paid forty dollars for two nights. I figured I could find an apartment sejak then. At least I hoped I could.
    I now sat on the side of a bank over looking a river. Lucy sat beside of me, getting all the latest drama from my life. She was almost like my therapist. I knew I was supposed to be hers, but it wasn‘t the best arrangement.
    “Love sucks, Lucy,” I berkata while rubbing my eyes. I had just told her about what happened between Alexander and me.
    “I used to think that, too....

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 18

posted by Insight357

I awoke around ten that morning. I looked beside of me Alexander sat looking at me. A hint of a smile was on his face.
    “Good morning,” he said, handing me a cup of coffee.
    “Thanks,” I berkata taking a sip. It was just the way I like it, black.
    “You may want to get dressed,” Alexander said, eyeing my stomach. I pulled up the sheet.
    “Why? Clothes are so restricting,” I said. There was no point in getting dressed. I needed to avoid Grey as long as possible. She would be pissed.
    “I...

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Death Becomes Me: Luke Blade Story Chapter 1

posted by sawfan13

George Clark looked at his newborn son Lucas. Devestated at the death of his wife, he wonders why she couldn't stop her alcoholic addiction, especially for her own child. After they found out she was pregnant, George encouraged her to go to theorpy, have interventions, atau anything to stop her addiction. Nothing would help. Even knowning that she had a son on the way, she still drank. George refused to raise Luke all sejak himself. He felt like he wouldn't be a good enough single father to raise him. He tried for a month, but took Luke to an orphanage, hoping that his son would be adopted and have...

(The Hunger Games) Everdeen: The Third Generation Chapter 1- The Reaping

posted by Jane0604

Isabella

I woke up to a gloomy day. The reaping. I sigh, and get out of bed. I get dressed in a blue dress. I look into the mirror. My mom comes into the room, and braids my black hair. Everyday, she tells me I menanggung, bear a strong resemblance to my father, but she never tells me who he is. "You look remarkable!" she says. She sighs. "Isabella Everdeen... I hope that name isn't pulled"
"That game is foolishness! There are countless names in Panem. There are 24 tributes. Two of them from District 12. We havn't won in 36 years. 15 of them, I've been alive. 3 of...

(Hunger Games Story) Everdeen: Third Generation Chapter 1- THe Reaping

posted by Jane0604

Isabella

I woke up to a gloomy day. The reaping. I sigh, and get out of bed. I get dressed in a blue dress. I look into the mirror. My mom comes into the room, and braids my black hair. Everyday, she tells me I menanggung, bear a strong resemblance to my father, but she never tells me who he is. "You look remarkable!" she says. She sighs. "Isabella Everdeen... I hope that name isn't pulled"
"That game is foolishness! There are countless names in Panem. There are 24 tributes. Two of them from District 12. We havn't won in 36 years. 15 of them, I've been alive. 3 of...

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The girl who cried serigala, serigala, wolf chapter 3

posted by greenstergirl

Chapter 3

In front of me was a world like no other. Danny called it BOES but it was nowhere near being a building. There were trees everywhere. In the distance were a couple mountains. There were so many plants, trees, flowers, lakes, ponds, and hills that it could almost be described as a fairy world. I almost thought it was a fairy world from seeing a bunch of pretty Duyung in the ponds, gigantic api, kebakaran breathing Naga in the sky, naiads, centaurs, and many lebih mythological Haiwan that I can’t name. There were even real animals, like elephants and cats, cheetahs,...

Never to late Preface/chapter one. part one

posted by Funnygirl77

Okay first of let me start out sejak saying that I know this (meaning my tajuk is a song.) So plz don't say anything about it. saat This story is not fully developed, me and my friend only have chapter one and we don't even know what it's about yet lol. the last thing i need to say is that i can not spell, okay! so if anda don't have anything nice to say plz don't say it at all. now the story hope anda enjoy. :)p.s that doesn't me anda cant tell me what anda think of the story, if u thought it was bad say so, but in a nice way. don't destroy my dream!!! Okay now the story.
Preface
I hid my eyes...

Leaving Ilias: Swept Away-Chapter 2

posted by ButteBaby_K

The manor I imagine. Without the moor however.

Chapter 2: “Ilia,” he whispered into my ear as we walked across the soft meadows surrounding the manor, “how magnificent your beauty is.” Arik’s words curling around me seducing me completely, he had been doing so since the moment he arrived. “Please sit,” he asked as he took my dainty hands into his large rough ones. Today I had worn green to emphasize the one feature about myself I cherished the most, though he begged to differ. I sunk into the grass, soft like moss still holding his hand ever so lightly. He kneeled beside me, chasing away the strands of hair that flickered...

The Enemy's Child (sneak peek)

posted by moodystuff449

"Good to see anda again, Rigel." I berkata slyly. He was so startled sejak my appearance that he knocked a stack of papers off his meja and almost fell backwards. He stared up at me in horror. I jumped down from the windowsill. "What happened?" I asked threateningly, "You just--" I shrugged, "decided not to answer back." "Um…I… I just…" He stuttered. "Why would anda switch sides like that?" I asked dangerously. "All I did… I just…" He stammered again. I slammed him against the desk. "I told anda in the beginning that once anda get into this anda don't back out." I hissed. He staggered back against...