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GG: Spotted an arguement between Georgina sparks and a certain bass. why did anda return G? we all want to know it is a little odd. also spotted blair listening in on the conversation tell us what they're saying B.

Blair had been wondering all week about why georgina was back. of course she knew she was looking revenge but that was two years ago. she was on her way to chuck's when she heard yelling around the side of the palace and decided to listen in. she could tell the female voice was georgina.

G: look the only reason im doing this is because im with you. if i had wanted revenge i would have done it two years lalu but i dont feel like losing my hair again. it wasnt pleasent then and it still wont be now. so whatever your problem is with chuck, do what anda need to do so we can go back to australia.
J: look if i win this war with chuck i get bass industries and me and anda alih here and i'll spoil anda with things georgina. and anda can do whatever tricks anda want on serena and blair and anda wont be forced to leave manhattan.
(as soon as he spoke blair recognised the evil voice of who was behind georgina's return)
B: hello jack... georgina
J: blair how long have anda been there?
B: long enough to know that anda and georgina are together. eww. and that your the reason behind her return and are still making awful attempts to get bass industries.
G: anda caught up on alot.
B: he's just using you.
G: what?
B: if i know jack bass. and as painful as it is to say i do, he will use anda as his ticket in to the upper east side and have a failed attempt of trying to get bass industries nearly rape someone and leave anda and go back to australia so he can make lebih plans and come back and try again
J: anda know me so well but unfortunate for anda you're wrong me and georgina have been together for about 3 months now and... we are having a excelent time together.
G: yes it has been... fun!
B: eww. good luck with your thirty some tahun old playboy.
(blair leaves and enters chuck's suite.)

B: your uncle jack is behind everything.
C: what?
B: he is why georgina is back. i over heard their arguement. their dating and he is still trying to get bass industries. and she is so blind she doesnt see he is using her. (blair spoke fast)
C: blair slow down ok. so jack and georgina arre together.
B: yeah it's... gross.
C: it is. and it is still another plan to get bass industries. you'd think after such a failed attempt he would give up.
B: excatly. georgina didnt even plan to come back she came back for jack. again gross.
C: my uncle is such a loser.
B: (laughs) i agree! so what are we going to do about it.
(Smiles at each other)
C: Right now... nothing.
B: but chuck what if he actually suceeds. what if...
(she was cut of when chuck kissed her lips so gently but letting his tongue gently touch the inside of her mouth)
C: nothing. we'll think about it later, right now we're just going to relax and have a little fun (Smiles at her)
B: (Returns the smile) sorry for going a little crazy.
C: (Laughs) anda wouldnt be blair waldorf if anda didnt.
B: i Cinta you.
C: i Cinta anda too. now why are anda still dressed? get into that room right now.
B: (Giggles) yes sir (She says so seriously followed sejak the sound of her laughter)
(Chuck kisses blair and they make there way to chuck's room and have sex)

10 minit later:

Chuck and blair are lying in the katil his arms wrapped around her and kissed down the back of her neck and just above the start of her spine.

C: i Cinta anda blair waldorf.
B: i Cinta anda too chuck bass. (She turned to face him and smiled) i must be special if anda Cinta me chuck bass doesnt usually do love.
C: anda are special, and i do when my girlfriend is blair waldorf.
B:(smiles) i Cinta anda (Kisses him) i Cinta anda (kiss) i Cinta anda (Kiss)
C:(smirks his usual chuck bass smirk) good! i Cinta anda aswell.
KNOCK KNOCK.
C: i'll get the door. (Gets up and puts on his bath robe)
B: im coming too (Smiles and puts on his baju which is past her thigh and covers her underwear)
C:(smiles back) very stylish.
B: lets go get the door (Pushes him out of the room giggling)
(Answers the door)
C: hell... georgina! (Looks very confused)
B: what are anda doing here. anda look like shit. (Sees her mascara is all running and smirks)
G: anda were right about jack (Gulps)he was using me... i... i dont know what im going to do.
B: get over it, it's just jack bass.
G: it's not that simple. normally i wouldnt care and why would i come to anda if it wasnt important. (breaths in deeply and breaths out)
C: then why did you? (Gets suspicious)
G: i'm pregnant.
(Blair's mouth drops in shock, chuck's eyes widen)

van der bass apartment:

Jack enters the apartment looking for lily. luckily spots her sitting on the kerusi, tempat duduk Membaca a book. but not so lucky to see rufus humphrey sitting beside her.

R: jack what are anda doing here?
J: nice to see anda aswell. look i need to talk to lily not you.
L: if you're here to talk to me it better come with an apolgie for what anda did when i adopted chuck.
J: i'm sorry i over reacted but this is important i need to talk to anda alone.
L: rufus do anda mind?
R: yes i dont want him alone with anda in a room.
L: rufus i'll be ok. if i need anda i'll shout.
R: (Gets up and walks past jack) dont touch her.
J: i wont i have a problem of my own.
(Rufus leaves and jack sits down)
L: so what are anda here for jack.
J: i've been dating someone recently.
L: well that's good isnt it?
J: she's serena's age.
L: oh jack an 18 tahun old.
J: she's nearly nineteen if that helps.
L: who is she and whats the problem?
J: georgina sparks!
L: well that explains a good bit of why an 18 tahun old would tarikh someone your age she did out my son at dinner.
J: well she is crazy but back to why im here.
L: oh yes go on.
J: georgina recently found out she is...(Interupted)
L: anda got an 18 tahun old pregnant (raises her voice)
J: i know im so stupid but i actually do care about her and i know anda probably wont believe me when i say that but i do.
L: i believe everyone can fall in Cinta even if it is jack bass. what did anda say to her when she told you?
J: to leave and that i never want to see her again.
L: jack thats horrible!
J: i know but its not true i do want to see georgina again. i panicked i cant be a dad. i'd screw it up.
L:(laughes) call georgina tell her anda want to speak to her and you're sorry. you'll be fine every parent panicks at the start but anda learn the responsabilty of being a parent. its scary finding out that you'll have someone elses life to look after but i great.
J: what if i mess up and georgina and the baby hate me?
L: this is the first time i seen jack bass vunerable. you'll be fine looking after a baby is only difficult if anda make it difficult. take it from someone who has had two.
J: thanks lily. i really am sorry i tryed to rape you.
L: its in the past. you're going to be a changed man anda have a child and a girlfriend to look after.
J: well the change will probably happen after it's born i still have a whole nine months.
L: girl atau boy?
J: what?
L: do anda want it to be a girl atau a boy?
J: a girl.
L: not for weird reasons i hope.
J: no because i want to stop boys thinking weird thoughts about her and most girls are daddy's girls right.
L: anda can actually be human jack.

chuck's suite:

Chuck and blair are dressed and sitting in his living room with georgina.

G: so then he told me to leave and i never want to see anda again (She finished her story)
B: how do we know anda two didnt make all this up. i heard anda two this morning remember.
G: im telling the truth blair i swear. do anda think i would go to ths much bother anda know i only came back for jack as anda heard. i'll take another test if anda want.
C: why did anda come to the people who wouldnt trust anda then? and dont say because he is my uncle because i dont trust him as much as i dont trust you.
G: i came to anda because blair had over heard us this morning. and because as much as anda dont trust me and jack i trust anda two. serena is hardly going to listen to me she's right i was a horrible friend, i would take it back if i could but i cant. anda two are the most minipulative people i know but anda are the best to talk to.
B: i told anda he is a Playboy he doesnt do parenthood.
G: i know that now. i have a baby and no boyfriend and i dont even have a friend. anyone who is my friend i find someway to turn them against me. i thought it was fun and that i didnt need friends, but at times like these anda need anyone anda can get.
(Blair and chuck look at each other still not sure if georgina is telling them the truth)
B: me and chuck are going to go over there and talk.
(Get up and go into another room)
C: do anda think she is telling the truth.
B: she seems to be. and her story does seem rather jack like if anda think about it.
C: yes but anda berkata they were in on it together.
B: why georgina? we cant be her friend but we cant leave her on her own if she is pregnant.
C: georgina doesnt have a hati, tengah-tengah im sure she wont care.
B: chuck this is serious and there is only on real expert on georgina. someone who can tell us if it is the truth atau a lie.
C: serena!
B: i'll call her.
(Rings serena)
S: hei B what's up?
B: umm... can anda come to chuck's suite in the palace and i'll explain everything.
S: sure (She is a little confused but comes anyway)

5 minit later:

(serena arrives)

S: so whats wrong (spots georgina) what is she doing here.
B: jack was trying to get bass industries again and georgina is... was dating him so thats why she's back.
C: she also berkata she's pregnant and jack broke up with her we arnt sure if she's telling the truth atau not.
B: thats why we need you. you're the only one who knows her well enough to tell if she is lying atau not. please S if she is pregnant we cant leave her to do this alone.
S: thats true. i'll find out. (Smiles at blair) so georgina tell me this story.
(Georgina explains the story to serena the exact one she told chuck and blair)
G: do anda believe me S, i know i have been horrible and especially when i was at your graduation thing but im desperate to make it up to anda please. please say anda believe me.
S: i cant believe im saying this but i know you're telling the truth. georgina sparks has two different desperate faces. the real one and the fake one. im so sorry anda are going through this. if anda had came to me i would have listened.
B: so she is pregnant?
S: yeah i can tell.
G: if anda want me to take another test i will.
S:(laughs) that wont be nessicary.
C: i think it is. i still dont believe her.
S: chuck she's telling the truth.
(Then georgina's phone rang she jawapan it straight away)
G: jack.
J: im sorry, can we meet up.
G: pick me up at chuck's suite.
J: why are anda there?
G: i needed Nasihat from blair.
J: i'll see anda soon.
G: ok (Smiles and hangs up)
S: what did he want?
G: he berkata he was sorry and he wanted to meet up.
B: jack bass berkata sorry. what jack do anda know.
G: (laughs) blair, me and jack are like anda and chuck. i bring out the best in him.
B: how did anda know that?
G: anda always did, strangly enough i was the only one who noticed. chuck may still have been sleezy around anda but he was kinder to anda that anyone.
S: how come anda never mentioned it to me?
G: because anda would mention it to blair and it would mess with fate. blair would notice that chuck doesnt insult her back when she insulted him he would cover it up with a slezzy comment. she would avoid him and then this would happen differently.
B: georgina the Cinta maker (Smirks)
C: even i didnt know i liked blair back then.
G: of course anda did but anda were in denial, chuck bass didnt do girlfriends and feelings right.
KNOCK KNOCK
G: he's here. (Goes to the door and opens it)
J: im sorry (jack hands her a single red rose)
G: (Smiles and looks at the rose, notices something sparkly inside the petals) what's this?
J: georgina marry me (She looked and seen him on one knee)

Blair nearly choked, serena's jaw droped to her knees and chuck pinched himself to make sure he wasnt dreaming.

G: we have only been dating three months?
J: i dont care. marry me.
G: yes

jack takes the ring of georgina and slides it on her finger, and they hug.

B: did that just happen? (She asked when they left)
S: (laughs) yes jack bass just propsed to georgina. (Still in shock)
C: this isnt good for me.
S: why?
C: well getting a cousin from georgina is one thing but her being my aunty is a whole lot lebih disturbing.
B: omg i didnt even think about that.
S: im still in shock. he just proposed to georgina. thats crazy.
(Serena starts to laugh histerically, blair then joins her and chuck finally started laughing aswell)

one week later:

chuck had took over bass industries and found jack a place to work as geogina wanted to raise there baby in new york. jack had matured quite a bit since the engadgment and so had georgina. blair and serena always came over to see georgina because she had became so mature because of the pregnancy. chuck had grew a bit closer to his uncle but was still feeling weird about the fact that georgina was going to become his aunty.

C: it's still weird.
B: but it's sort of sweet.
C: no it's weird.
B:(laughs and kisses him and sit on his knee faceing him) is this weird.
C: definatly not (Pulls her closer if thats possible)

they start to make out on his sofa and then chuck and blair have sex on the sofa.

serena is shopping and bumps into an old friend of hers.

Ca: serena van der woodsen?
S: thats not carter baizen is it?
Ca: the one and only.
S: omg carter i havent seen anda in a lifetime (hugs him)
Ca: now i wouldnt say that long. so how is your dream for the future going?
S: what?
Ca: anda wanted to katil as many billionaires as anda could.
S: omg i remember that. no sadly i havent started that.
Ca: still the same serena.
S: do anda want to catch up im not doing anything atau at least give me anda number so we can text for when we can meet up.
Ca: im not busy now and we can still exchange numbers over lunch.
S: yay, i was so bored today.
Ca: come on my limo is just around the corner.

GG: spotted carter baizen and serena van der woodsen walking the jalan a little closly is there something going on. guess time will tell. and anda upper east siders never fail to suprise me. anda know anda Cinta me. xoxo. gossip girl.