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Can anybody tell me if this work is good enough to muat naik on FanFicion, atau if it's just crap? It's the first half of chapter 1 to a story I am writing, however I've always had a problem with writing. I'm Dyslexic, so my work always comes out as a jumbled atau scrambled mess, even though my story is clear in my head it just never comes out that way whenever I try to writeT_T So if anda have time, care atau interest please read this and tell me what anda think, all criticism is welcome, just don't be too harsh, okay. Thank you, and any help and atau Nasihat would be highly appreciated.

Chapter 1

‘I know this isn’t the way things are meant to be.’

The thought echoed in his mind. ‘It is not meant to be like this… I…’

‘I am…’

The thought stopped there. Really who was he really, a demon, a lord, someone with the potential to rule over vast lands with an army of demons unrivaled in the known world, all crying in salutation and praise for… Sesshomaru…. Sesshomaru, all hail the great Lord? He could hear the words, the roar of the crowds pronouncing the all too familiar sound of his name with no less a force than the waves crashing upon the seas coast. He could hear it echoing along no differently in the background of… ‘who am I… am I really…. It is not supposed to be like this.’

‘… it’s not supposed to be like this!’

‘Damn it!’

A wave crashed against a rock, the force was harder this time for the white spray came noticeably closer. His eye caught upon the droplets as they fell and landed on the gray terrain before him. He felt it, even though he were yards away the slightest chill from the droplets as they came soaring through the air sending out waves of cold that vertebrate outwards to meet his skin. The sensation was no different than actual contact, being in such close vicinity. He took a mental note of it, but that was all. Even though such a skill was what made his power truly admirable, it was nothing new to him, since he was born with it.

It was in his makeup, having been born into such a high class and noble family his hearing and sense of smell weren’t the only senses about him that were keen he could also feel out the differences of the world around him, a skill which ran in the family. Every hair on his body was like a tiny antenna, where even the tiniest feeling like a falling droplet of water could send tremors running through him signaling to him that a droplet had fallen. It’s how he was always aware even when asleep, that something was happening atau all was calm his body knew it before his mind does, sometimes long before; it’s one of the secrets to his skill, as well as to his power.

Consciously he would be aware of this and every time attribute as much of it to his pride as the mental note accounted for. It now told him that many droplets fad fallen and that they had come closer, much closer. He looked to the horizon.

But there was something else his senses were telling him.

The winds were blowing harder now. The sky has been fully mendung, overcast since daybreak, but it wasn’t until an jam lalu did he care to notice. The sky was dark, grayish blue with a hint of green, a storm was brewing, and it was Typhoon season. That time of the year, and a single great storm had yet to have its say over the lands of this mortal world.

How strange it felt to realize he was an immortal being in a mortal world, and how alien this recognition made him feel being so far away from where he rightfully belonged, as though he had crossed into a strange foreign land. Though he had walked these paths countless times before, only now did it occur to him how different he truly was, from what lay around him, and from the very trepidation which brought up from his gut, he was a lord, he was superior… he was….

He gritted his teeth. He was… bleeding.

It has been one hari since the encounter but his wounds had yet to close on their own. He knew the reason for this, it was shock. Such trauma had its way to affect the body’s functions, and in this case prevented him from healing. He just couldn’t accept it…. How… how did this happen…. When did I become so weak?

Weakness, it had to be…. He was injured and there was n excuse for that. What else could it be?

What else could it have been?

A hari lalu he came upon this demon, was he just being careless… a demon he had assumed was of no particular threat to him, and yet before he had successfully slew the fool for annoying him, the demon managed to get in one good hit on him.

A common ogre, with its spiked mallet, and he doesn’t know how it really happened but somehow before the beast succumbed to the form of rubble on the rumput of the valley where the incent occurred the ogre somehow manage to hayun, swing his mallet well enough to have hooked his left shoulder and grazed it with a deep red bruise.

The shock of this drove Sesshomaru to kill this beast with far lebih power than was clearly necessary. It was only for a instant that he let his anger get the better of him, but it was enough to send the body of that ogre, a creature that was at least ten times his size into bite sized parts… too bad he doesn’t eat ogre, this would have been far too convenient. But he was no such beast, and the scent of the ogre’s blood only disgusted him, so he moved on. Ignoring the dulling pain that nagged from his shoulder as he moved on, however not a moment too soon.

“Sesshomaru!”

Came the familiar voice. It was Inuyasha, and of course it was. Only he would pop out of the woodwork at a time like this… what?

“What did anda do with that ogre? Where is it?”

Hm, Sesshomaru thought to himself as he glared back at him, covering his curiosity with his typical mask of ice. What is this idiot babbling about, why would he care about some forgettable ogre? But the demand came again, “Sesshomaru, what did anda do with it?”

“I killed it.” Came the obvious response. What else was there to say, the facts were obvious. The blood was in the air and his back was to the valley where the remains lay. What other outcome could be lebih obvious? He was Inuyasha, his nose had to be as keen to pick up the right messages, he was of the same blood line, just being a damn half-breed couldn’t affect his skills that much could it? Could it?

“Damn anda Sesshomaru! I knew it!”

This was confusing and a bit irritating, for who cares about a damn ogre, this boy was starting to annoy him lebih than usual, when Inuyasha spouted out, “Damn it, I knew I should have came sooner. That Ogre knew something about the demon that attacked our village. I had yet to make it talk. And anda killed it!”

Oh, now it makes sense. He wanted information out of it. Hm, oh such a pity, Sesshomaru though then shrugged inwardly while passively turning away, all the while saying the words, “If your village was attracted who’s fault was it that it happened in the first place?” it was all he needed to say.

The ever predictable hanyou came flying. Sword unsheathed and flaring out, “damn anda Sesshomaru… that beast almost killed Kagome!” The last syllable of his words fell just as their swords clashed, sending a flash of light out from the impact. The Tenseiga sang in unison with the Tetsuaiga’s searing roar. Of course he drew the Tenseiga, it was not a weapon, and at the moment he cared not to see the Tetsuaiga dissolve into a puddle of molten scrap metal from the power of his prized Bakusaiga. He only intended to block the attack, which he succeeded in doing with relative ease, however... baka.

Sesshomaru was in no mood for this, nor for Inuyasha at this particular moment and made a bold alih to send the boy out flying well beyond the line of the trees with hopes that he’ll take the hint and get lost, but of course just as he should have known the last thing he heard was “Wind Scare!” the light from the attack blinded him, yet with his special skills was able to dodge the attack before the blades could cut him, but that wasn’t the end of his brother’s attack. For before he knew it Inuyasha was on bahagian, atas of him, swords clashed in mid air. Again he sent him flying before landing gracefully on his toes upon the soft ground, this time maybe… when his ears picked up, “Adamant Barrage!” Alarm struck him, just as a sudden pain struck through his arm and lower side, a lesser streak from his lower leg and he realized just as he moved that he had been hit. Though he blocked the majority of the greater shards some of the smaller ones and their splinters had pierced him. The shock was lebih than he could bear, for not only did that lowly creature from before get it hit on him, so did not his little brother, a hanyou. The fact must have been obvious for seterusnya he heard, “heh! How anda like that! anda Bastard!” Naturally it came with a nulling feeling to respond with silence; he would not justify his brother senseless words with as much as a retort. He sneered.

‘That little bastard actually hit me!’ At that instant he was soaring through the air. His body obviously sprang to action before his mind could catch up. And realized once it did that he had run away, he was soaring through the winds.

Knowing full well that he had escaped…. His right hand was clinging to the wound on his upper arm, blood pouring out from between his fingers like little messengers of his misfortune leaving a trail of crimson mockery behind him, not even conscious of the fact that the same was occurring from his abdomen and lower leg… but over all that he was running away… Away. Why, and from what?

He was humiliated, embarrassed beyond belief. Not only did he fail to win the battle and defeat his brother with ease, which he absolutely knew he could do, instead he fled. Fled, as though he had run from a fight… as if he knew fear, no, he knew that wasn’t the reason, it was not fear that drove him away, it was… it was…. what was it? Some form of dreaded apprehension stirred in him, was it from his heart, why did he run away? What was it he was really running from? Once again the words echoed in the depth of his mind… ‘No… it isn’t supposed to be like this…. Who am I?’
A large bag of chips, a two liter bottle of cola and a television. lebih did one not need to get over a heartbreak, right? He let himself fall in the sofa, kerusi panjang and grabbed the remote controller. He pushed a button and the Simpsons came on. Homer Simpson was strangling Bart Simpson. “Ha, don’t anda just Cinta a classic?” Jeremy looked aside and saw Anna lying seterusnya to him, her feet comfortably on the coffee table. She put her hand in the bag and took some chips. “I hope anda don’t mind. Paprika are my favorite” she berkata and she put the chips in her mouth. “Is this your new strategy? Acting...
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2009, San Francisco.
Piper was baking her famous cookies, biskut when Phoebe walked in in the kitchen. She stopped right in front of Piper. “Do I look like an idiot?”, she asked, expecting to hear no. Piper kept continuing her baking, when she said: “Is that a trick question?” She put the plate with baked cookies, biskut on the meja, jadual and looked at her younger sister, who seemed to be upset sejak her answer.
“Hey, Phoebes, I was just kidding”, she berkata in laughter. “You’re not an idiot and anda know it well damn too” “Good, ‘cause apparently Jason Dean thinks I clearly am”, Phoebe berkata really...
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hei this is the l;atest chapter to the story, it is set when Nessie isfive months pregnant...x Hope anda enjoy and keep your eys peeled for the seterusnya chapter...x
Amber/Twilightsauce

I slipped mums wedding dress over my head, it fitted perfectly. Mum smiled and sighed as she wiped a joyous tear from my eye.
“Don’t cry baby, Alice will kill us if anda ruin your makeup she has spent all morning getting anda ready.” She laughed looking at me with a delighted expression on her face,
“Oh mum! I am so happy; Jake is waiting down there for me isn’t he?” I asked nervously. I had felt a little queasy...
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added by ShadowFlame
Source: Google cari
 Might as well throw in a joke to cheer anda up. But this won't prepare anda for the HELL that awaits you.
Might as well throw in a joke to cheer you up. But this won't prepare you for the HELL that awaits you.
Wow, didn't even give it a title. Bastard. And this is just a warning right here, read it carefully. I will not be responsible for your 3DS if anda threw up on it. I am not responsible for your suicide, atau anything. SO,


DANGERDANGERDANGER!
WARNING, EVERYONE WILL FIND THIS AS THE WORST GODDAMN PIECE OF SCRAP METAL THAT HAS EVER EXISTED, VIEWER DISCRETION SO F**KING ADVISED anda HAVE NO IDEA!!!!!!!!!

You can read my kegemaran fanfiction reviewer reviewing it here! ^___^

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This fanfiction, and I CANNOT believe I am going to say this, but it is even WORSE than Creation Of A Dry Bones AND Faker.

QUADRUPLED...
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added by Dearheart
Source: Dearheart
posted by Rosy_Posey
My alarm rang at 6 pm for high school of mistical creatures/students (a private and secret school). School starts at 8:30 pm for those who need to be shaded from the sun. the school is located in sunny californina near san diego.

i dragged my feet from my katil and headed down the hall to my sister's room to wake her up for our "breakfast" but to others it would be dinner. my mother had made pork chops with mash potatoes and peas. After the meal me and my sister went to go get ready. as we were about to leave we berkata good night to our mother.

The time was 7:15 and i got in my car to warm it up...
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posted by cynder1
chapter 4
spyro and cynder were flying with sparx to where the 'incedent' took place ,suddendly sparx berkata 'there there!, thats where she commited suicide!' they all landed at the high cliff and saw how steep it was 'yep embers definately dead.' berkata spyro they then flew to the bottom of the cliff where they got a shock. embers body wasnt there 's-spyro? wheres embers body?' 'i dont know' 'its like she turned into dust' 'hey spyro we've got company!' a mass of grublins were heading right towards them and to be leading them happened to be ember in adult form 'e-ember?' spyro berkata 'the ember u...
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Meg took a bite from the waffle and frowned. “Did anda put Chocolate in it?” she asked, looking up at Cas.
“Yeah, Anna told me anda liked it as a human and since you’re human again…” Cas explained. “I wanted to do something nice for you”
“Hmm” Meg said, taking another bite from her waffle. “Seems to me that you’re trying to make up for something”
Cas bit his lip and sat down. He took Meg’s hand. “Yeah, I’ve been…quite a jerk to anda yesterday. But…the pain…it was really bad” he tried to explain.
Meg pulled her hand away. “Yeah, I get it” she answered a...
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Rachel looked around her before she pressed the loceng of Ric’s loft.
“Rachel” Stefan berkata a little surprised, when he opened the door. “Come in”
“Are anda alone?” Rachel checked. Stefan nodded and she followed him inside. “I need to know something” she cut to the chase. “How do anda know I’m a werewolf?”
“It’s a full moon tonight and anda were Berlakon strange earlier” Stefan explained. “Plus I’m a vampire, I have learned to recognize them, even if they’re in human shape”
“Veronica will kill me if she finds out I’ve been talking to you” Rachel berkata scared...
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Caroline was waiting in the doorway while Bonnie put on her shoes. They were going out for a walk in the garden.
“How’s life in here?” Caroline asked casual.
“ ‘s Okay, I guess” Bonnie said. “Little boring though”
Caroline scoffed. “I wish I could say the same” she mumbled.
“What do anda mean?” Bonnie asked concerned.
Caroline shook her head. “Come on, let’s go”
Five minit later they were walking through the garden. Caroline whistled. “This place really is beautiful”
“Caroline” Bonnie berkata a little harsh. “I know anda didn’t just come over. There’s something...
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Stefan and Rebekah were driving. They had stopped to get their selves a late night snack and now they were on their way home.
“Can anda try and call Damon for me, please?” Stefan asked, his eyes on the road. Rebekah conjured her phone and dialed Damon’s number, which Stefan had telah diberi her.
“Goes straight to voicemail” Rebekah said. She turned to Stefan. “I’m sure he’ll be okay. He’s got that boy looking out for him”
Stefan shook his head. “Derek’s just a teenager. Damon was in no good shape when I last saw him. I think he might be really sick”
“Then let’s go check on...
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Daphne was sitting on her bed, staring at the front page of the newspaper. She had wanted to give Meg the benefit of the doubt, since she knew Cas had a thing for her. But if she was a murderer Daphne had to keep her away from him. And in order to do that…
But how was she going to accomplish that? The security system was very…secure. She looked down. Maybe her bandage could be of use. No, that would be crazy. Although.
She took of her hospital baju and pinched her fingers underneath the bandage. Then she unrolled the bandage and cringed when she pulled off the last bit.
She heard a weird...
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The Gilbert House
Stefan kicked the door open and walked in.
“You can’t do this” Katherine berkata behind him.
“Since when do anda have a conscious?” Stefan scoffed. “Look, I’m just going to grab Elena and then I’m out”
“Why? Why can’t anda let her be for a second?” Katherine berkata frustrated.
“Because she needs me now” Stefan said. “She’s going through an emotional time right now”
“She’s PMS’d” Katherine disdained. “She needs a pillow, a pot of ice cream and a good chick flick”
Stefan turned around. “I can’t lose her, Katherine” he berkata with a sad face....
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“No, I do not want to talk to you. Not now, not ever, and the only reason I don’t rip your hati, tengah-tengah out this very instant is because of my girlfriend who’s celebrating her eighteenth birthday and who doesn’t need to witness such gruesome scene. So if anda could lift up your anorectic butt and alih it out of the door anda came in and vanish for the rest of your afterlife, I’d be forever grateful” Stefan said.
Amber ordered two beers and gave one to Stefan. “I just need anda to listen to me. I’m really sorry for what I did. I Lost control that night. I saw Elena sitting there all alone....
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Elena and Damon were walking back home. They had spent the rest of the hari at The Grill and Elena had beaten Damon in a darts game. A small part of him wished she could stay this way. She was fun, she liked hanging out with him and she didn’t talk about Stefan that much. But he fell in Cinta with the real Elena. The one that saved his life and that stayed with him while he was sick from Tyler’s attack. Elena clung on his arm and shoved with her feet. “My legs hurt” she moaned. She looked up at Damon, with a anjing, anak anjing stare in her eyes. “Don’t look at me like that” Damon berkata teasing....
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The door slammed open and Katherine speeded to the living room where Jeremy and Elena were still watching television. Katherine panted and they turned around. “Seriously? Stefan’s gone, Damon’s being controlled sejak Bonnie and anda are watching television?” she exclaimed upset. Elena pointed at the Televisyen screen. “This is a very educative documentary, Katherine. It’s about-” “I don’t give a fuck about what it is!” Katherine screamed. She flashed in front of Elena. “I don’t know what Bonnie did to you, but I need anda to snap out of it, as in right now!” Elena sighed...
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posted by ObanKing
Eva and The Rest Of The Team Head For Alwas To
Investingate The Trail Of The sumber that is
inside Eva's Watch But.........Ruuu...Ruuu.Ruuuuuu
Warning!!!! a Giant Diamond of Ice fell out
of the sky Then Eva Became CyberGirl Again
With Her Sword Ready Then The Battle Began A
Hurricane of Many Numbers Came Around Her And They
Started An Server Cyberbattle(The Battle Between
a Cyberperson And A Cybersoul) The Unknown Stranger Used A Poison Bag And it Hurt Eva with
200 Cyberpoints Left She is a Goner Eva Used Her
Sword To Cut Him But he Lost 200 cyberpoints with
200 left Eva Has The Chance To Beat Him But...
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Meredith poured herself a cup of coffee while Alaric checked his bag with weapons.
“Can anda make sure Jeremy studies for his tests?” he asked without looking at Meredith.
“I don’t think Jeremy want to study, not with everything that’s going on” Meredith pointed out.
“Well, anda have the night shift, so maybe anda can keep an eye on him” Alaric waved Merediths arguments away.
“Sure, but it won’t increase my popularity” Meredith berkata warning.
“You don’t have to be popular, anda just have to make him listen” Alaric replied.
“You mean like I can make anda listen, because...
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“I called her a slut and told her I never wanted to see her again. Then I left the house. She followed me into the alley. I took a shorter way home. I had taken a cab, but I didn’t want to wait for another one. I wanted to get away from her as soon as possible. So, I took a shortcut via the alley and she followed me. She cried and tried to talk to me. I didn’t want to listen and got angry. She grabbed my arm and tried to stop me from walking away. I slapped her and she fell on the ground. I walked towards her and checked on her. She was awake and she was only hurt a little” Andy said....
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