Renesmee and Jacob

There is Jacob in this one.
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Nessie-
I got up at 6 am, feeling a bit hungry. It's a good thing I packed Twinkies that have blood in them. I dug in my bag, and I noticed that Christina wasn't in her bed!!! I went downstairs, to see her stuffing her face with my Twinkie!!! "Mmmm what is this red stuff in here? It tastes DELICIOUS!!!!" She said, her face smeared with blood. "Can I use your phone, Natalia?" I asked. "Yes dear, of course." I ran into the dapur and dialed. It rung one. twice. three times. "Hello?" Jacob's voice answered. "Jake, It's Nessie. Come pick me up in the Ferrari." I...

Sorry, no Jacob in this one.
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Nessie-
I opened the door to Christina's house, and Christina jumped out from behind the couch, her long blond hair in sloppy pigtails swung. I jumped so high that I hit my head on the ceiling, and my bronze ringlets bounced. I landed on my feet, like always, and berkata hello to Natalie, Christina's little sister. I berkata hello to Natalia, Christina's mom. I also berkata hi to John, Christina's boyfriend. We went up to her bedroom, put in the new movie she bought, 'Say Cheese And Run', a new horror flick that just came out. That was the real reason she invited me....

Nessie's POV-
The seterusnya morning I woke up and called mommy Bella. "Yes, Nessie?" She berkata when she reached my room. "I need help packing. I don't know what to pack." Just then, Alice rushed into the room. "I'll help anda pack, Nessie." She said, already digging in my closet. "No, Aunt Alice. I want my mom to help." I answered sternly. Alice puckered her lip, the way she always did with mommy Bella, to get her to let Alice did what she wanted. Well, it wasn't working with me. I smacked Alice, not of anger, but trying to tunjuk her something. When I smacked her, I had fell, so my hand looked like...

Chapter 8: Difficulties.
Renesmee looked over to see Emma hand in hand with Seth. He was smiling brightly at her as she leaned into his side. The last guest dwindled out and Alice shut the door, bouncing up and down. Renesmee leaned into Jacob, exhausted. She put her hand on his cheek.
“Me too Ness. I’m tired just like anda but I don’t think there through with anda yet” he murmured. Renesmee stretched up on her toes and wrapped her arms around him. He kissed her quietly for a moment, the heat of his lips penetrating her skin.
“Will anda two cut it out?” Her dad snapped irritably from...

this is chapter three. like it says in the title. Im re editing my entire story and this is the edited version, Hope anda like it. Send me a prop. tell me if anda like it and how i could change it.

“Renesmee what’s wrong?” Samantha asked.
“Jacob.” I berkata with a hiss.
“Who is Jacob?” Chris asked with a smirk.
“Not who anda think he is Chris.” I berkata annoyed.
“He has been a friend of my mo… aunt for years he is closer to my age though. My boyfriend goes to school on the reservation.”
“Then why do anda look so distressed Renesmee?” Samantha asked worriedly.
“he never finished...

I shifted away from him, pressing my back as far against the car door as it would go. The small angkasa was too close and his scent was overwhelming.
"Why?" I whispered. His eyes crinkled for a moment and he looked at me, his silver eyes stirring with hidden emotion.
"I'm not sure. The same reason your Jacob has one with you. It's not something we can control,"
"You can't have one with me. I Cinta Jake," He didn't flinch but I saw the deep hurt in his eyes. My hati, tengah-tengah stuttered. I didn't want to cause him any pain. His hand slowly moved up into the air and I didn't stop it.
"I'm sorry Renesmee....