hei .. I loved all your artikel-artikel about fanfic for Stella and Mac's and i decided to make my own too i always dreamed of theories about them but never had the courage enough to siarkan them publicly now i think its time to ;)
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First i have to give some notes ... Stella is now gone for 9 months when Jo Danville Took her position in the lab and in Mac's life too she almost fell in Cinta with him but never revealed any thing . Stella moved to New Orleans where she worked as a det. for a lab headed sejak Lt . Jack Creefman (i made him up there is not character with this name) Lt.Jack is completely in Cinta with his sweet new partner . he has been a widow for over 4 years . he never dated anyone before he asked Stella to ..
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FIRST SCENE
( Stella with Jack outside the lab in New Orleans)
Stella : It was a tiring hari Jack i am glad it has finished
Jack : Puff... Yeah me too it is hard to work on a summer hari Ehhh... Stella
Stella : Yes ( she was checking her phone when she looked at him )
Jack : Have ..... Have u thought of the proposal i made last night
Stella : ( still checking new messages on her Cell pone ) What proposal ?!?! ........ ( then she stophped fohatr a saat as they were walking along the lab? OMG . OH my Dear Lord !! TAYLOR !! . No. no.No it can't be possible
Jack : ( surprised ) what is it ?!?!
Stella : its Taylor .. Mac Taylor my boss and best friend in CSI the place i used to work for .. he sent me a MSG
The Message :
" hei .. Stell how are anda .. it has been three weeks since we last talked on the phone .. i wish we could work again as we have a vic from New Orleans who disappeared for 2 months and appeared DEAD in New York .. wish could help u can come of u r taking the case Sincerely , Mac "
Jack : Oh its Miranda Hopkins U remember her the one her father reported he was missing about 2 and half months lalu
Stella : Oh i can remember then we have to to N.Y and check that ourselves
They both forgot about the proposal thing . Stella returned utama she open a bottle of vodka and turned the Muzik on loudly ( the song : I see anda Avatar link ) she jumped to the katil . closed her eyes and whispered MAC !!! she feel asleep on the name she uttered
seterusnya morning they packed their thing both Stella and jack in order to fly to N.Y ..
There .. Mac and Jo were waiting for them Mac holding some Bunga ( the ones Stella Cinta ) and Jo standing right seterusnya to him frowning about the Relation Mac is about to have with Stella .
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The moment Mac saw Stella getting out of the airport his mind flattered form happiness and his jumped like the baby when he sees his mother .. She was as beautiful as ever . she looked like an Angel that was dropped from heaven to fulfill Mac dreams .. this is the way how he looked at her as she entered with some slight happy moves as she entered the first thing her eyes caught was Mac she knew him thought the thousands of people he was among
Stella : Maaac ( she hugged him deeply )
Mac : Stell .. how are anda .. could resist the hug he had been telah diberi thinking ( Oh Damn It Stella how much i missed those sweet anjing, anak anjing eyes :) )
Jo : Still jealous and becoming lebih furious How are anda Detc . Bona.... Excuse can u say your name again
Stella : its Bonasera .. Stella Bonasera
Jo : Oh hello Det . Bonasera um sorry i didn't catch your name at the very beginning
Stella : Oh please call em Stella .. Mac i'd like to represent anda Det . Jack Creefman my partner in N.O
Mac : hei pleasure to meet anda ( examining Jack's admiring looks to Stella since they arrived )
Jack : pleased to meet anda too det . Stella always narrate your great heroic stories to us ion the department
Stella was a little bit ashamed ...
Stella : Well Let's go to the Lab maybe we can find new evidence that lead us to the killer
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Before they went to the lab . Mac had had a small chatting with Jack in the car as they were alone while Sella and Jo drove Jo's car
No Mac is obvious that jack has some feelings for Stella but he is trying to hide them so badly but when two Kekasih for one person meet they could't lie anymore ;)
J and Stella were on their way to the lab when Jo stopped so hysterically and suddenly she looked and Stella and said
Jo : tell me the truth why have u left ?
Stella : What do anda mean ?
Jo : Answer the soalan why anda left the department is it because anda Cinta him ? and anda couldn't resist it any lebih ? Is it because anda couldn't bare to see him broken from Peyton and najis useless as anda tried so badly to cure him but he didn't feel anda .. SAY IT WHY !!!!Damn it She hit her hand on The tableau of the car
Stella : anda are right i left because of it because i never thought that Mac could have a chance to forget Claire even Peyton couldn't do it and he was in a relation so what's the point with me why would i have a little bright hope that he can ever Cinta me !! . That why i left ( she looked at her self in the car mirror seterusnya to her
)
Jo : so .... ? he doesn't Cinta anda !! ?
Stella : No he doesn't
Jo was the happiest on earth at this moment she looked at Stella with an evil smile as Stella was about to cry her eyes were full of tears she decided not to give up and asked Jo to go the lab Quickly
As they arrived they found the two gentlemen started without them they organised a meeting that everyone at the sight of Stella Jumped of her and kissed her
Happy moments passes sejak quickly
Late that night Mac was at his office thinking of the case .. Jo interrupted him with her voice . she was waring a red baju, blaus with a hot Ciuman on t and black tight pants she gets closer to Mac as she called him again
Mac : hei what's up ?? Jo.... ?
She put her finger on his mouth ad kissed him passionately !!
Stella was about to finish her work when she went to check up on Mac and ask him to leave because he was tired when she first saw him .
Surprisingly .. She found him and her together Ciuman !! Stella was shocked that she shook the vase seterusnya to her until it dropped mac and Jo stopped Ciuman Mac looked surprisingly to her
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If u like it please inform me to continue it i hope u like it ;) ;) its nothing comparing to what u write guys thnx for Membaca
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First i have to give some notes ... Stella is now gone for 9 months when Jo Danville Took her position in the lab and in Mac's life too she almost fell in Cinta with him but never revealed any thing . Stella moved to New Orleans where she worked as a det. for a lab headed sejak Lt . Jack Creefman (i made him up there is not character with this name) Lt.Jack is completely in Cinta with his sweet new partner . he has been a widow for over 4 years . he never dated anyone before he asked Stella to ..
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FIRST SCENE
( Stella with Jack outside the lab in New Orleans)
Stella : It was a tiring hari Jack i am glad it has finished
Jack : Puff... Yeah me too it is hard to work on a summer hari Ehhh... Stella
Stella : Yes ( she was checking her phone when she looked at him )
Jack : Have ..... Have u thought of the proposal i made last night
Stella : ( still checking new messages on her Cell pone ) What proposal ?!?! ........ ( then she stophped fohatr a saat as they were walking along the lab? OMG . OH my Dear Lord !! TAYLOR !! . No. no.No it can't be possible
Jack : ( surprised ) what is it ?!?!
Stella : its Taylor .. Mac Taylor my boss and best friend in CSI the place i used to work for .. he sent me a MSG
The Message :
" hei .. Stell how are anda .. it has been three weeks since we last talked on the phone .. i wish we could work again as we have a vic from New Orleans who disappeared for 2 months and appeared DEAD in New York .. wish could help u can come of u r taking the case Sincerely , Mac "
Jack : Oh its Miranda Hopkins U remember her the one her father reported he was missing about 2 and half months lalu
Stella : Oh i can remember then we have to to N.Y and check that ourselves
They both forgot about the proposal thing . Stella returned utama she open a bottle of vodka and turned the Muzik on loudly ( the song : I see anda Avatar link ) she jumped to the katil . closed her eyes and whispered MAC !!! she feel asleep on the name she uttered
seterusnya morning they packed their thing both Stella and jack in order to fly to N.Y ..
There .. Mac and Jo were waiting for them Mac holding some Bunga ( the ones Stella Cinta ) and Jo standing right seterusnya to him frowning about the Relation Mac is about to have with Stella .
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The moment Mac saw Stella getting out of the airport his mind flattered form happiness and his jumped like the baby when he sees his mother .. She was as beautiful as ever . she looked like an Angel that was dropped from heaven to fulfill Mac dreams .. this is the way how he looked at her as she entered with some slight happy moves as she entered the first thing her eyes caught was Mac she knew him thought the thousands of people he was among
Stella : Maaac ( she hugged him deeply )
Mac : Stell .. how are anda .. could resist the hug he had been telah diberi thinking ( Oh Damn It Stella how much i missed those sweet anjing, anak anjing eyes :) )
Jo : Still jealous and becoming lebih furious How are anda Detc . Bona.... Excuse can u say your name again
Stella : its Bonasera .. Stella Bonasera
Jo : Oh hello Det . Bonasera um sorry i didn't catch your name at the very beginning
Stella : Oh please call em Stella .. Mac i'd like to represent anda Det . Jack Creefman my partner in N.O
Mac : hei pleasure to meet anda ( examining Jack's admiring looks to Stella since they arrived )
Jack : pleased to meet anda too det . Stella always narrate your great heroic stories to us ion the department
Stella was a little bit ashamed ...
Stella : Well Let's go to the Lab maybe we can find new evidence that lead us to the killer
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Before they went to the lab . Mac had had a small chatting with Jack in the car as they were alone while Sella and Jo drove Jo's car
No Mac is obvious that jack has some feelings for Stella but he is trying to hide them so badly but when two Kekasih for one person meet they could't lie anymore ;)
J and Stella were on their way to the lab when Jo stopped so hysterically and suddenly she looked and Stella and said
Jo : tell me the truth why have u left ?
Stella : What do anda mean ?
Jo : Answer the soalan why anda left the department is it because anda Cinta him ? and anda couldn't resist it any lebih ? Is it because anda couldn't bare to see him broken from Peyton and najis useless as anda tried so badly to cure him but he didn't feel anda .. SAY IT WHY !!!!Damn it She hit her hand on The tableau of the car
Stella : anda are right i left because of it because i never thought that Mac could have a chance to forget Claire even Peyton couldn't do it and he was in a relation so what's the point with me why would i have a little bright hope that he can ever Cinta me !! . That why i left ( she looked at her self in the car mirror seterusnya to her
)
Jo : so .... ? he doesn't Cinta anda !! ?
Stella : No he doesn't
Jo was the happiest on earth at this moment she looked at Stella with an evil smile as Stella was about to cry her eyes were full of tears she decided not to give up and asked Jo to go the lab Quickly
As they arrived they found the two gentlemen started without them they organised a meeting that everyone at the sight of Stella Jumped of her and kissed her
Happy moments passes sejak quickly
Late that night Mac was at his office thinking of the case .. Jo interrupted him with her voice . she was waring a red baju, blaus with a hot Ciuman on t and black tight pants she gets closer to Mac as she called him again
Mac : hei what's up ?? Jo.... ?
She put her finger on his mouth ad kissed him passionately !!
Stella was about to finish her work when she went to check up on Mac and ask him to leave because he was tired when she first saw him .
Surprisingly .. She found him and her together Ciuman !! Stella was shocked that she shook the vase seterusnya to her until it dropped mac and Jo stopped Ciuman Mac looked surprisingly to her
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If u like it please inform me to continue it i hope u like it ;) ;) its nothing comparing to what u write guys thnx for Membaca
