What do anda guys think of it?

This is my book cover that I made for my fanfiction. I'm wondering if anda guys think it needs to have lebih things to fill the white space? (By the way, the notepad thing above Michael's head says "dear dad." Sorry that the picture is so small; Fanpop resized it because it was too big. How are anda guys enjoying the story so far? Any kegemaran parts if anda had to pick one? L. O. V. E. I have to say that I like Penulisan this one a whole lot lebih than my first one "daddy's little tomboy." It just seems to flow a lot easier this time around and I like how it's in Michael's point of view now. Do anda prefer "daddy's little tomboy" atau "unconditional love…… A story of fatherhood?" I like being able to start completely from scratch again because I often find myself thinking of things that I could've put in the chapter that I didn't think of before I telah diposkan it! Just a heads up, there will be a whole bunch of plot twists and surprising moments coming up! I'm going a whole different direction with this story and I think you're going to like this one way lebih than the sebelumnya one!!! I'm not about to reveal anything secrets though… You'll just have to wait and see what I have up my sleeve!!!!!