ok so heres a sample of the story im Penulisan for wattpad:
Marias POV
Ive been waiting on Chre to come down for yearsssss now.He my brother my very concieted brother I understand its the first hari of school but if my keldai can come down on time so can he i mean dude your cute but come on now. I waited for about 5 lebih minit before i was about to get up and drag his keldai down here when my dad came in the door with a bottle in his hand
"hey baby girl" he berkata with slurred words
"hey dad" i berkata non chalantly
"come on ihaven't seen anda in a g-good little while girve your daddy a kiss" he berkata as he was getting closer and closer to me
"dad your drunk" "come on just one little peck" he berkata quickly grabbing my hair and pulling backwards so my neck would cock back i could smell the achohol on his breathe
"no dad" i berkata trying my best to push him away
"give me a Ciuman NOW anda little bitch" he pinned me down i was about to scream when chre FINALLY decided to tunjuk up
"AYE get the fuck off of her" he berkata running down the stairs and pushing dad to the floor
"hey theres my boy" dad berkata taking a sip from the bottle
"tis, the fuck" he berkata shaking his head "you ok ria go to the car i be there in a minit i gotta help this SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FATHER " he berkata making sure dad heard the key words i mean when he's actually sober for once he's the best dad ever...but that doesn't happen often. I did as i as told and ran to the car and waited for chre to come out. He finally came out and came to the car "are anda sure your ok ria?" he berkata with a sincer apologetic look on his face which instantly made me smile he's one of the only people in this world who TRULY cares about me "yeah im fine" i berkata with a smile on my face. He smiled and backed out of the drive way, on our way to school 'no new friends' sejak drake came on and roc instantly started rapping and Singing over it. Hes so talented with really anything that has to do with music. Of course i started rapping with him we both really have a passion for Muzik to be truthful danceing to. We finally pulled up to school we saw chre's boys outside talking so we walked up to them.
OK sooooo this is just part of it and I want your opinion on whether atau not I should continue atau just start over GOOD atau BAD? komen pweaseee pplzzzz it mght be horrible I haven't wrote in like forever but tell meeee BYEEEE
Marias POV
Ive been waiting on Chre to come down for yearsssss now.He my brother my very concieted brother I understand its the first hari of school but if my keldai can come down on time so can he i mean dude your cute but come on now. I waited for about 5 lebih minit before i was about to get up and drag his keldai down here when my dad came in the door with a bottle in his hand
"hey baby girl" he berkata with slurred words
"hey dad" i berkata non chalantly
"come on ihaven't seen anda in a g-good little while girve your daddy a kiss" he berkata as he was getting closer and closer to me
"dad your drunk" "come on just one little peck" he berkata quickly grabbing my hair and pulling backwards so my neck would cock back i could smell the achohol on his breathe
"no dad" i berkata trying my best to push him away
"give me a Ciuman NOW anda little bitch" he pinned me down i was about to scream when chre FINALLY decided to tunjuk up
"AYE get the fuck off of her" he berkata running down the stairs and pushing dad to the floor
"hey theres my boy" dad berkata taking a sip from the bottle
"tis, the fuck" he berkata shaking his head "you ok ria go to the car i be there in a minit i gotta help this SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FATHER " he berkata making sure dad heard the key words i mean when he's actually sober for once he's the best dad ever...but that doesn't happen often. I did as i as told and ran to the car and waited for chre to come out. He finally came out and came to the car "are anda sure your ok ria?" he berkata with a sincer apologetic look on his face which instantly made me smile he's one of the only people in this world who TRULY cares about me "yeah im fine" i berkata with a smile on my face. He smiled and backed out of the drive way, on our way to school 'no new friends' sejak drake came on and roc instantly started rapping and Singing over it. Hes so talented with really anything that has to do with music. Of course i started rapping with him we both really have a passion for Muzik to be truthful danceing to. We finally pulled up to school we saw chre's boys outside talking so we walked up to them.
OK sooooo this is just part of it and I want your opinion on whether atau not I should continue atau just start over GOOD atau BAD? komen pweaseee pplzzzz it mght be horrible I haven't wrote in like forever but tell meeee BYEEEE
