Penguins of Madagascar Article: Caught ~2~ ~Skipper's Sis/Sophia's Breakout~

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Caught ~2~ ~Skipper's Sis/Sophia's Breakout~

posted by winkies77

I'm bad at Membaca stories so please menanggung, bear with me people. And please komen and tell me if I should continue, Warriors of Night & Caught.
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Location: penguin HQ
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Kowalski looked up from his newspaper. His face held a puzzled look. "Erm..is there something I need to know, Skipper?"

Skipper hung his head and looked up. His eyes were soft and delicate. "Not really, only the thing is Sophia is my sister," he muttered. "The troublemaker in my family."

"So your last name is, Lewis?" Private asked with his strong British accent. Skipper shook his head.

"No...I changed my last name. In fact I don't even have one!" He laughed a evil (ish) laugh. "Besides when she was little she would steal kacang, kacang tanah mentega Winkies off the shelves and would end up in kiddy prison."

The team just looked at each other with puzzled faces.

Skipper has a lot of explaining to do, Kowalski thought.
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Location: Tibet Jail
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"OK, all most there." I replied down our very own penguin ladder, while I twisted the exit hole in the ceiling (stupid cops). I finally got it open. I crawled inside first and slammed it shut.

"Sophia!"

"Well, bye-bye!"
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I was tired so I couldn't think so no hate mail.

peacebaby7 and Sylvia_Puffin like this

Sylvia_Puffin What do you mean, you're bad? This is amazing! Most people wouldn't bother being descriptive like that. Like how you put that Private said it in 'his strong British accent.' Most people wouldn't do that unless they're really good.

peacebaby7 ^Agreed. This is really good. Besides, it gets better with practice. I sucked when I first started writing. In fact, I started out writing in script form because I thought I wouldn't be capable of writing in novel format. You should really keep going. :D

winkies77 ^^Thanks Sylvia, that helps me alot :) ^Thanks Peace Baby, you two are awesome :)