so i'm starting a story...and i dont know what it should be called so i'm a just Penulisan the cast and intro and komen on what should it be called...
*Cast*
Dawn
"Hi" i'm Dawn and yes i listen to rock Muzik and i'm like the rebel in the school ya know!people don't talk to me,i have no friends,but i like it cause i get to tune out everyone with my Muzik pshh..they act like i'm lonely but wateva!! just because i don't do my hair and don't do makeup don't mean a thing!!! i like my afro and it's gonna stay a afro period point blank!! and i always i mean always!! have my secret book with me...it has my secrets in there and if it goes out i'm dead!!!
Haze
WAZZUP!! WAZZUP WAZZZZZUP!! it's yo girl Haze but don't faze me.....ha JK but yea anda don't wanna know bout me...i'm a huge domo peminat and i don't really wanna be called the most popular girl in school but yea i am...and i hate it!!!! people i don't even know me all in my face like they know me and i be like DANG GET OUT MY FACE!!!! but yea and i need new Friends atau maybe a friend...i don't know but they need to stop!!
Chris
hei i'm Christina but they call me Chris and Mannnnn i'm HUNGRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jacey
wazzup! i'm jacey and don't get me started ...anyway i'm just so irritated sejak prince he's everywhere ever since he asked me out and i berkata yes....i don't even know why???
*story*
Dawn's POV (dream)
it was...it was cloudy i couldn't hardly see as this stranger was walking towards me..he gently touched my face while pushing the side of my puffy hair back of my ear and he kissed it and said.......WAKE UP!!!!(end)
??: get up now!!!!!
dawn:*half sleep* 5 lebih minutes
??:No!!! wake up wake up wake up!!!!
dawn: uggggg what Shy?
Shy: get up for school silly..
dawn: *sigh* fine
*finished dressed*
dawn:okay i'm done!! Shy time to go!!
Shy: Yay!!! first hari of school!!!
dawn: yea my lil sis in kindergarten now! (*picks her up*)
Shy: yea i know lets go!!!
*at school*
Dawn's POV
so i was walking to my locker to get some buku then "They" showed up..jacey and prince.. like she never liked prince she knew i did!!"what the hell was her problem"!!!
dawn:*in her locker*
Jacey: hei dawn
dawn:*ignoring her*
Prince: jacey if anda haven't noticed...she's ignoring you
Jacey: no she's not
dawn: Yes i am (harshly)
jacey : what happened to you?
pshhh and she gonna ask that question? when she knows that answer!
dawn: i don't know....where's a real friend when anda need one!!!
prince:O.O ooookay jacey seeya later babe *kisses her*
Jacey:*blushes and smiles hella hard* okay
babe
dawn: * jealous* ewwwwwww!!!
Jacey: stop being jealous!!!!
dawn: Jealous!!!! if i was jealous princeton would be Ciuman me!!! and reality check! he's not!!
Jacey: *sighs* dawn why can't anda accept the fact that he's with me not you! like look at you! who would tarikh you!!!
dawn:*mumbles*bitch *walks to class*
so what should it be called?...........
*Cast*
Dawn
"Hi" i'm Dawn and yes i listen to rock Muzik and i'm like the rebel in the school ya know!people don't talk to me,i have no friends,but i like it cause i get to tune out everyone with my Muzik pshh..they act like i'm lonely but wateva!! just because i don't do my hair and don't do makeup don't mean a thing!!! i like my afro and it's gonna stay a afro period point blank!! and i always i mean always!! have my secret book with me...it has my secrets in there and if it goes out i'm dead!!!
Haze
WAZZUP!! WAZZUP WAZZZZZUP!! it's yo girl Haze but don't faze me.....ha JK but yea anda don't wanna know bout me...i'm a huge domo peminat and i don't really wanna be called the most popular girl in school but yea i am...and i hate it!!!! people i don't even know me all in my face like they know me and i be like DANG GET OUT MY FACE!!!! but yea and i need new Friends atau maybe a friend...i don't know but they need to stop!!
Chris
hei i'm Christina but they call me Chris and Mannnnn i'm HUNGRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jacey
wazzup! i'm jacey and don't get me started ...anyway i'm just so irritated sejak prince he's everywhere ever since he asked me out and i berkata yes....i don't even know why???
*story*
Dawn's POV (dream)
it was...it was cloudy i couldn't hardly see as this stranger was walking towards me..he gently touched my face while pushing the side of my puffy hair back of my ear and he kissed it and said.......WAKE UP!!!!(end)
??: get up now!!!!!
dawn:*half sleep* 5 lebih minutes
??:No!!! wake up wake up wake up!!!!
dawn: uggggg what Shy?
Shy: get up for school silly..
dawn: *sigh* fine
*finished dressed*
dawn:okay i'm done!! Shy time to go!!
Shy: Yay!!! first hari of school!!!
dawn: yea my lil sis in kindergarten now! (*picks her up*)
Shy: yea i know lets go!!!
*at school*
Dawn's POV
so i was walking to my locker to get some buku then "They" showed up..jacey and prince.. like she never liked prince she knew i did!!"what the hell was her problem"!!!
dawn:*in her locker*
Jacey: hei dawn
dawn:*ignoring her*
Prince: jacey if anda haven't noticed...she's ignoring you
Jacey: no she's not
dawn: Yes i am (harshly)
jacey : what happened to you?
pshhh and she gonna ask that question? when she knows that answer!
dawn: i don't know....where's a real friend when anda need one!!!
prince:O.O ooookay jacey seeya later babe *kisses her*
Jacey:*blushes and smiles hella hard* okay
babe
dawn: * jealous* ewwwwwww!!!
Jacey: stop being jealous!!!!
dawn: Jealous!!!! if i was jealous princeton would be Ciuman me!!! and reality check! he's not!!
Jacey: *sighs* dawn why can't anda accept the fact that he's with me not you! like look at you! who would tarikh you!!!
dawn:*mumbles*bitch *walks to class*
so what should it be called?...........
