The over all body structure isn't bad, but needs lots of work.
The upper body is too big compared to the lower body, the hips are to small, and the legs just don't sit right.
The angle is a bit odd, the boobs are not in proportion The hair needs lebih detail the left hand is backwards, and throws me off, other than that, not bad, and not great
anda have teh basics down, anda just need to work off that.
Just keep practicing.
anda have talent, no doubt about that, anda just need to unleash it.
