Help out a budding author!

Hello!! I'm Penulisan a book on wattpad and I wanted to know if any of anda would like to read and critique/leave komen-komen on it. I muat naik a chapter a hari and there are currently 10. If you're looking for a good read about a girl in the afterlife, please check it out!! :D
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Thanks!!
note: please please dont plagiarize because you'll be removed from wattpad for copyright infringement hehe :3 Cinta anda all mwah :*