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posted by darkling_menace
(I have thought of a bunch of characters over the years, but since I suck at making stories for them to be in, I can only make the character itself with a bit of back story. Today is going to be the first hari that I'll be posting these characters on here, since this is the Penulisan club, and I don't want my mind to be cluttered with character ideas. This character came to me when I was rethinking an idea for an old character.)

Darcel was once the leader of a tribe of ancient humans in what is now known as modern England, he was a sorcerer who used his magic as an advantage over everyone else, it seemed that his people respected him, but in reality, they feared him. he killed anyone who defied his rule, but he would not do it himself, he would influence others in his tribe that whoever was against him wanted the tribe to fall, so he had them be killed sejak their own peers. The tribe executed traitors sejak tying them and sending them to a bottomless pit where it is berkata that they will fall for an eternity, never seeing the light ever again, little did they know, that this was a portal to a dimension where evil things arise from. Eventually his tribe fought against him, but they were no match for his magic power, so they consulted a wizard who had a magical amulet that would cut off any magic users power, but Darcel would have to put on the amulet on himself, and any means of taking it off would require magic. The tribe went to Darcel to ask a truth, and offered him the amulet as a peace offering, Darcel took the amulet and wore it boastfully, and that night, the tribesmen kidnapped Darcel in his sleep, tied him in their strongest rope, and threw him into the bottomless pit.

While in the pit, Darcel fell for what seemed like forever in the darkness, he was furious at the people he once ruled, but lebih than that, he felt fear. He was afraid of what he might encounter in the pit of those who he has wronged before, that their vengeful spirits will come back and make him suffer, his fear was well placed. Everyone he had ever sent to the pit was nothing lebih than a skinless ghoul, they grabbed Darcel and ripped the very flesh from his bones. He writhed and convulsed, trying to free himself from the ropes, but it was futile, he tried to use his magic, but the amulet prevented him from doing so, so in a last ditch effort, Darcel used a spell that would free him from the ropes and destroy the ghouls, but it would take away everything that made him human. Despite it being a spell, he did not need magic to perform it, just to focus his own soul out of his body, which he had to do under agonizing circumstances. He managed to get his soul partially separated from his body, but the amulet did have an affect on this spell, starting to pull Darcels' soul back into his body, thinking hastily, he tried to take over the body of one of the ghouls to remove the amulet, but he couldn't enter another body without leaving his own, so with his last bit of willpower, he made his soul stronger with the thoughts of hatred for those who put him here, and the want to rule over those who are weaker than him once again. His rage and greed fueled his soul, making it stronger, striking fear into the ghouls hearts, because now, he was absorbing them, because he was the stronger will. he took the souls of the ghouls and had left his body entirely, but the amulet sensed the presence of Darcels' soul escape his body, and as a last resort, it imploded with magical energy. Darcel was caught in the implosion, but it was so powerful, that it took the whole dark dimension with it.

Centuries passed, and the pit that once contained the dark dimension was eventually filled sejak dirt and debris, no one knowing of the evil that once dwelled within. There have been strange occurrences in the town around it, people being killed and stealing, but when they were taken in for questioning, they had no memory, they claim that last thing the remember was a voice telling them to defy rule, and throw away all morals, these people are sent to psychiatric wards, atau prison, whichever their choice. These occurrences happen mostly in this town, but there are isolated incidents like this all over the world, people talking about a voice that influences them, and takes them over, they no nothing about what it is, atau why its here, but we know one thing, it wants revenge.

The magic implosion that had been thought to have killed Darcel, actually made him lebih powerful, he was at the hati, tengah-tengah of it, when the amulet, took the whole dark dimension, it absorbed into Darcel, making him immortal, but never being able to walk in the light of hari again. He can control the minds of those with weak will and influence them to do terrible things, just so that they will be the ones getting punished, and to attack humanity as much as he can in his state. Sometimes he'll see the mind of someone who is just as dark and cruel as he is and take them under his command, and he will one day, form an army to rule the world again Darcel can travel in our plane of existence, through shadows atau sejak taking over the minds of animals, but this is all limited and he can only travel extensively within a mind of a willing human participant.

(This too me quite a few hours to write. So I wanna hear what opinion anda guys have on this and if anda all like it, then that'll probably incline me to make more, thanks.)
posted by annabethxchase
it was a short story for english but i never took it in. so its here!!!! not my best story but here we go...

saturday
i saw it coming before it happened. purple spirals and shining stars. voices behind me. screaming, crying and laughter. i was running. running faster than i had ever ran before. i wasnt sure what i was running from but i kept running, knowing that i probably didnt want to know what they wanted.
i heard a yell from behind. i was a girl. it was a pain filled scream that sent shivers down my spine. i didnt know if i should stop and help i was too scared to think straight. i tripped...
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posted by ttmrktmnrfn0830
It's so hard to forget
So late at night,
The darkest memory
That leaves me in fright

The color of crimson,
Is scary yet releasing.
Adrenaline builds since then,
And paranoia's increasing

Evening falls,
Ravens call,
And I see
Darkness over me

Don't walk alone
Don't be lost
I'm chilled to the bone
And that's to a cost.

Blood so warm
Words so cold
Get it over with!
This is getting old.

Midnight falls,
Ravens call,
And I see
Darkness overwhelming me

It's so hazy after that,
That's all I can see,
The short, very vague
Dark memory.
I’m sorry I cant tell anda really what going on.
    It wasn’t meant to hurt.
    For either of us.
    I guess it did.

    I panicked. Shit, I did.
    I was happy but I was scared. How can happiness and fear exist at the same time, every time?
    I wanted it bad. Wanted anda badly.
    For a long time.
    When I got to know about what anda felt, what anda told, I was happy. Maybe after a long time.
    After a really,...
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posted by EmoKidSteven
She broke my heart,into a thousand tiny pieces.the glass shards shine in the light of my sorrow,as a single crystal tear falls to the floor.and now it bleed in sheer agony.
all of those lies she fed me,all the fake acts of kindness....it makes everything worse.ive never hurt this much before,because this was the one and only time ive ever let anyone in.i thought she could help the empty void,help warm the ice that covered my heart.I gave her everything;my heart,my soul.and she gave me nothing but despair and tragedy.i existed only to be used sejak her.i was a new toy that she could tunjuk off to...
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posted by Fangirl99
"no this cant be!" Vanessa shouted in anger."im not a vampire!Th-Th-thers got a be another explanation!"

"im sorry,vanessa,'Dr.Vamp siad,getting up from is chair."If anda dont believe me,you can always ask your mother."Dr.Vamp disappeared into the drakness,and Vanessa wet on her way.

When Vanessa got home,she went straight to her mother.

"mom,i need to talk to you."

"sure,sweetie,whats up?"

"well,i bit Susans arm today,and.."

"oh no!did anda get in trouble."

"no,i left before andy teachers are the principal saw.Then,when i was walking,i saw a sign saying if anda have strange behavior,visit Dr.Vamp"

"oh,no."...
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posted by Fangirl99
The sun is up in the sky
i watch it in the big blue ksky
And i ask myslef,"why?"

i stare at the ceiling.
then i get a strange felling.
and this felling is still being.
and then i ask,"why?"

What do i see in those eyes?
what do i see in you?
even thought i still despise.
i always ask myslef,"why?"

ask me that question,"why?"
i say i dont know
they tell me dont lie

so then i speak th truth.
i know that in my heart
i will always Cinta you

your eyes that shine like he sun
being with anda is always fun
one hari i will tell you,hun
that anda are the only one


sorry,not all the words rhyme.im not the best at making poems,but i wanted to share it with anda anyways
posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter10: Edwards pov
Days passed one sejak one and I was getting lebih suspicious about Bella I could see it in her eyes that she truly hated Damien but here actions were telling something different the ways her body curled around him the way she hugged him, kissed him I just wanted to get up and kill him. even Alice saw a few visions of it and sent Emmett and jasper to get a hold on me but even with all this evidence that maybe ,maybe Bella loved him but I knew there was something wrong, her eyes were so sad, emotionless and cold, she's not the happy perky Alice like but not annoying Bella my...
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I could feel no pain what so ever, I couldn’t talk atau move, though I could hear ever thing being said. “Her hati, tengah-tengah rate is dropping!” and then I heard a long buzz. “We have to get her hati, tengah-tengah beating again atau she’s going to die.” I could hear my grandfather panicking because it was me his first grandchild, here dieing. I could feel Jacob’s tension. He wouldn’t let go of my hand unless my grandfather asked for something then he grabbed it again.
    I could feel seven pare of eyes on me. I could hear crying not dry crying but from my babies. It was weird I didn’t...
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posted by marissa
 "It was an early March morning, so early that the sky still had streaks of orange and merah jambu in it."
"It was an early March morning, so early that the sky still had streaks of orange and pink in it."
Chapter One:

Benny:

Benny climbed onto the bus, giving the bus driver a kind smile as he paid his fare. It was an early March morning, so early that the sky still had streaks of orange and merah jambu in it, very reluctantly giving way to gray-blue. It was cold out, so Benny pulled his brown jaket tighter around him as he took his kerusi, tempat duduk near the back of the bus.

He sat in the kerusi, tempat duduk nearest the window, like he always did when he was sitting sejak himself. He cracked it open a bit. The breeze, however cold it was, made him feel a little less cooped up, a little less separated from the rest of the world that...
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posted by stopbullying
The Stalker
Chapter 1

    It was a cool, winter night. It wasn’t too cold outside and I thought after work I would go out for a walk and take advantage of the nice weather. It was four-thirty in the evening. I got off of work at 7:00. It should be a little sejuk sejak then.
Work was boring and nobody really came in. Only one person did and he was weird looking. He had ripped shorts, a short shirt, and worn out shoes on. I looked at him suspiciously because the whole time he was in there I caught him looking at me. This was weird especially since I was only 18 and he was like...
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posted by BeSafe
Is it possible to fall in Cinta with someone you’ve never met
Your only knowledge stemming from information you’ve seen atau read
Before I knew of his existence I would have stated no
Yet the first time I saw him my hati, tengah-tengah begged to never let go
It isn’t rational
atau logical
Though Cinta rarely is
I can’t make my hati, tengah-tengah stop wishing that I held his
And I know it's stupid and silly to believe
In some kind of fairy tale
The perfect prince for me
But every time I see that smile
I can’t help but feel
That one hari we could share
A Cinta that is real
posted by khfan12
 this is aqua
this is aqua
“You can’t catch me!” Chavez shouted. “Yes I can!” I yelled. I started to run faster. It was a great feeling. The wind in my face. “I can’t believe that people don’t like it out here….” My thoughts were interrupted sejak a voice. “Aqua!” Chavez…. I ran farther into the forest and stopped dead in my tracks. A few feet away, was Chavez, being wrestled to the ground sejak men in black suits. “Aqua run!” Chavez yelled when he saw me. I couldn’t move. I was Frozen with fear. One of the guys in black started to run towards me. “Run!” Chavez repeated, right before they...
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posted by Rockster
I'm Penulisan two novels, I know what most people think (WHY!) but i've decided to do one hand written and work upon it at school, where one of my teachers is happy to look at and talk to me about the errors that I've done. Whereas the other novel I'm working on the computer which i would like people to read it and discuss whats good and bad about it. Anyway, I've copied and pasted this novel that I've begun from an animal crossing forum and here it is.


Chapter 1: The Frowning Mirror

The heat swarmed around me, wrapping me with comfort and content. I knew that this feeling that conflicted with...
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Source: If anda want to draw her, please do. Remember, she is my own character. Please give me credit. 'Last
anda may ask who and what is Mary Sue and a Gary Stu?

Well my follow peminat popper a Mary Sue and Gary Stu is a written atau drawn mistake, lie atau fake.

Why are they supposedly a lie atau a fraud?

Silly you! They're a lie and,or a fraud because they're perfect, no flaws, no issues, and no worries. Basically everything a human isn't atau can't naturally have.

Mary Sue- Is a female who is beautifully, smart, sexy, strong, independent, sentimental, generous, slim but curvy at the same time,and yada yada. She's basically the perfect woman with no flaws and a sex symbol that tops over all other sex symbols....
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posted by edwardsca
    I was sitting at my meja at school, Penulisan my Krismas list. It was hard to think of lebih than three things, so I wrote down a gift card to itunes, some movies, and a new pair of nike shoes. I'm trying to think of something, and my teacher berkata "Emily it wouldn't be wise to ask for money for a present". When I went utama I was still thinking about my Krismas list, but then my little sister came up to my face "Sissy, sissy, anda should ask for a super big princess kit'. Then makan malam, majlis makan malam came, we had roasted chicken. My older brother Eric was bragging about making the basketball...
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By studying other stars,astronomers can predict what the rest of the Sun's life will be like.About 5 billion years from now,the core of the Sun will shrink and become hotter.The surface temperature will fall.The higher temperature of the center will increase the rate of thermonuclear reactions.The outer regions of the Sun will expand...
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