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posted by darkling_menace
(I have thought of a bunch of characters over the years, but since I suck at making stories for them to be in, I can only make the character itself with a bit of back story. Today is going to be the first hari that I'll be posting these characters on here, since this is the Penulisan club, and I don't want my mind to be cluttered with character ideas. This character came to me when I was rethinking an idea for an old character.)

Darcel was once the leader of a tribe of ancient humans in what is now known as modern England, he was a sorcerer who used his magic as an advantage over everyone else, it seemed that his people respected him, but in reality, they feared him. he killed anyone who defied his rule, but he would not do it himself, he would influence others in his tribe that whoever was against him wanted the tribe to fall, so he had them be killed sejak their own peers. The tribe executed traitors sejak tying them and sending them to a bottomless pit where it is berkata that they will fall for an eternity, never seeing the light ever again, little did they know, that this was a portal to a dimension where evil things arise from. Eventually his tribe fought against him, but they were no match for his magic power, so they consulted a wizard who had a magical amulet that would cut off any magic users power, but Darcel would have to put on the amulet on himself, and any means of taking it off would require magic. The tribe went to Darcel to ask a truth, and offered him the amulet as a peace offering, Darcel took the amulet and wore it boastfully, and that night, the tribesmen kidnapped Darcel in his sleep, tied him in their strongest rope, and threw him into the bottomless pit.

While in the pit, Darcel fell for what seemed like forever in the darkness, he was furious at the people he once ruled, but lebih than that, he felt fear. He was afraid of what he might encounter in the pit of those who he has wronged before, that their vengeful spirits will come back and make him suffer, his fear was well placed. Everyone he had ever sent to the pit was nothing lebih than a skinless ghoul, they grabbed Darcel and ripped the very flesh from his bones. He writhed and convulsed, trying to free himself from the ropes, but it was futile, he tried to use his magic, but the amulet prevented him from doing so, so in a last ditch effort, Darcel used a spell that would free him from the ropes and destroy the ghouls, but it would take away everything that made him human. Despite it being a spell, he did not need magic to perform it, just to focus his own soul out of his body, which he had to do under agonizing circumstances. He managed to get his soul partially separated from his body, but the amulet did have an affect on this spell, starting to pull Darcels' soul back into his body, thinking hastily, he tried to take over the body of one of the ghouls to remove the amulet, but he couldn't enter another body without leaving his own, so with his last bit of willpower, he made his soul stronger with the thoughts of hatred for those who put him here, and the want to rule over those who are weaker than him once again. His rage and greed fueled his soul, making it stronger, striking fear into the ghouls hearts, because now, he was absorbing them, because he was the stronger will. he took the souls of the ghouls and had left his body entirely, but the amulet sensed the presence of Darcels' soul escape his body, and as a last resort, it imploded with magical energy. Darcel was caught in the implosion, but it was so powerful, that it took the whole dark dimension with it.

Centuries passed, and the pit that once contained the dark dimension was eventually filled sejak dirt and debris, no one knowing of the evil that once dwelled within. There have been strange occurrences in the town around it, people being killed and stealing, but when they were taken in for questioning, they had no memory, they claim that last thing the remember was a voice telling them to defy rule, and throw away all morals, these people are sent to psychiatric wards, atau prison, whichever their choice. These occurrences happen mostly in this town, but there are isolated incidents like this all over the world, people talking about a voice that influences them, and takes them over, they no nothing about what it is, atau why its here, but we know one thing, it wants revenge.

The magic implosion that had been thought to have killed Darcel, actually made him lebih powerful, he was at the hati, tengah-tengah of it, when the amulet, took the whole dark dimension, it absorbed into Darcel, making him immortal, but never being able to walk in the light of hari again. He can control the minds of those with weak will and influence them to do terrible things, just so that they will be the ones getting punished, and to attack humanity as much as he can in his state. Sometimes he'll see the mind of someone who is just as dark and cruel as he is and take them under his command, and he will one day, form an army to rule the world again Darcel can travel in our plane of existence, through shadows atau sejak taking over the minds of animals, but this is all limited and he can only travel extensively within a mind of a willing human participant.

(This too me quite a few hours to write. So I wanna hear what opinion anda guys have on this and if anda all like it, then that'll probably incline me to make more, thanks.)
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posted by liviabutterfly
Chapter [#2]

Narrators POV

An old man in a jubah, berjubah walked into the neighborhood in which Olivia lived. Everyone stared at him as he walked around.

Olivia's POV

I smiled brightly as I dived into the ocean, "wait up!!!" Oliver laughed as my five brothers ran after me with surfboards, buggy boards, buckets for picking up sea shells, and dad brought out our special maid sandcastle buckets. They were big and made the best structures ever!!! Plus our family is known for our sand castles/structures. I smiled and dived down, feeling the salty cold water against my skin, it's the best feeling ever. When...
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    I walked for so long, looking for something, not knowing what that someone thing actually was. The sky bleeding with an orange sunset as the sun moved ever so slowly below the horizon. I stopped in my tracks ans stared for a moment, than went back to searching for my mystery object. This was a great time to take in the woods which have always scared me. It wasn't bad walking through them. everything was orange from the ending of summer. It was like walking in those stories anda always hear about. Just then, a soft rustle in the bushes interrupted my thoughts. Not knowing...
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posted by BennieBear27
Chapter One

My alarm went off at 7:00 on the morning February 8th, 2017. I reluctantly sat up on the edge of my katil and yawned.

"Morning." I heard a voice say. My eyes were still closed.

"Luna?" I mumble. "That you?"

"Yep." I open my eyes to see Luna Middleton standing three feet diagonal from me.

I shared a room with her, her twin sister Kyla, and my brother Jacob. That's how everyone does here. anda live with your twin and your SIDA partner.

"So, sleepy head." she smirked. "You gonna get up atau what? If not, I'll eat your breakfast for you."

I don't reply and shake my head.

"Oh, come on!" Luna...
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Prologue
The wind was howling like Serigala in the night, and Will sat shivering in his post. The turet on which he sat overlooked a tall rock ledge that sloped into the ocean.
“Why do I get this bloody post.” he berkata to himself. The air was so cold up there that it sank right into your bones. Even though Will had dressed as warmly as he could with a thick woolen cloak, he could still feel the icy fingers creeping up his back. The api, kebakaran in the brazier barely helped either.
“Nothing as always.” he berkata as he looked out to the edge of the sea. He had taken to talking to himself when he...
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1 being the best 10 the worst
These buku are great for summer Membaca I can honestly say that anyone that reads them will want to read them again.

10. Deacula sejak Bram Stoker
9. The Hobbit sejak Tolken
8. I'm the king of the istana, castle sejak Susan Hill
7. 1984 sejak George Orwell
6. The secret diary of Adrian tahi lalat sejak Sue Townsend
5. Pride and prejudice sejak Jane Austine
4. Jane Eyre sejak charlotte Bronte
3. Lord of the Flies sejak William Golding
2. The curious incident of the dog in the nighttime sejak Mark Haddon
1 Rebecca sejak Daphne du Maurier
posted by ejenk1025
Chapter 2

I pull into the driveway of the cafe. I look into my rear view mirror. I look good. (Laugh) I get out of the car then fix my clothes. I'm ready. Just be yourself. Ok. I'm walking in. Don't fall. Don't fall .. He sees me. Just walk up to him.

"Hey."
"Hey. Glad anda could make it." berkata Lucas
"I'm glad anda could make it, too."
"Well. I work here so..." berkata Lucas
"You work here? Cool."
"Yeah. This is actually my mom's cafe. Let me introduce you." berkata Lucas
"Oh goody." I berkata nervously

Good impression. Good impression. Good impression.

"Mom, this is Brooke. Brooke, my mom." berkata Lucas
"Pleasure...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Five

Mason met Olivia at his kegemaran restaurant. It was a perfect hari for a makan malam, majlis makan malam date. The sun was shinny, the clouds were extra white, and the rumput seemed greener then ever. If only she knew that this was a makan malam, majlis makan malam date. He signed the last autograph for today as Olivia sat across from him at their round table. Her hair was curly and in a ponytail. Then she wore a red dress with a thick, black tali pinggang in the middle. His saat impression of her was still the same, gorgeous. This tarikh was going pretty well but Cassidy dresses better. Mainly because Cassidy is rich but he didn't want to...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Four

Olivia was extra busy today. Today was the first hari of the movie shoot for Hourglass. Before they could even start recording the movie, the would have to check up on everything. The wardrobe had to perfect. The scenes had to be accurately planned out. Then they had to make sure that all of the camera crew was positioned. Olivia wouldn't be able to receive the permits until tomorrow. So they couldn't start filming until then. She followed closely behind Mason as he did the daily check up.

Mason went straight towards wardrobe and the outfit choices. The outfit for Charlotte's arrival...
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Remembering is just an invention of the mind,
So anda need not try to remember something,
anda remember it automatically.
Which is the best thing that anda could have.

The good times that we had...
It is placed in a portion of your mind.
The bad times that we had...
It is placed in the other part of your mind.

anda try to forget all of the bad things that happened,
But it is not possible.
It is stuck in you.
The bad things are painted in ink on your heart.

The good things, anda try to remember.
And they stay.
They never go.
Never leave you.

Remembering is just an invention of the mind.
And, well...I guess I'm happy for that.
So I can remember every friend I've had,
Every boyfriend,
And all the good times.
Every memory will never leave my heart.
They will never be forsaken.
Never.
posted by Problematic129
*Poem I wrote for a class project on the holocaust.
DON'T COPY*
Different in ways they couldn't control
Killed for reasons we do not know
Ranging from ages young to old
The innocent people were taken from homes
Soulless people did not care
That the Jewish were in despair
Concentration camps ending their screams
Breaking apart their families
Not once did they do anything wrong
They opened their mouths and sang a sad song
Years went sejak and lebih pain came
Until on one very special day
As one we all saved
The survivors of the Holocaust
Stan, the young donkey, was wandering sadly around the barn. He seemed hopeless and wounded and had no desire to speak to any of his fellow donkeys; even talking to his father was not appealing to him that exact moment. In fact, he was feeling ashamed of having a donkey father. He was ashamed of being a donkey altogether.
As the moon and stars scattered across the dark, blue sky, Stan decided he no longer to wander. He needed some solution, he needed reassurance, and only his grandfather seemed appropriate for that particular job.
Grandpa Roger was sleeping peacefully in the barn. He had become...
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Bane’s POV

I laid in the grass, watching the clouds. I was beginning to dose off, right before sleep took me, a body pounced on me. I groaned, and looked up. A shaggy haired boy was sitting on my chest, giggling. My best friend, Christian.
    “Get off!” I yelled rolling over. He slid off me.
    “Party pooper,” Christian stuck his tongue out at me. He was so childlike, but that was something I had always loved about him. That’s also why we got along so well. He was hyperactive and loud, while I was cynical and quite.
    I...
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posted by Hades223
CHAPTER 1


Jason Card sat at his meja in his science classroom bored out of his mind. He hated science. It was his least kegemaran subject. Mainly because it was the last subject of the hari and sejak that time Jason was usually ready to go home.
Mr. Form droned on and on about chemicals atau something. Jason didn’t listen. He just sat at his meja and drew on some paper. He was a very good drawer.
Jason Card was a fourteen tahun old as of yesterday. His black messy hair never gave in to a brush which usually meant it was mangled and messy and went down to his ears. He was wearing a simple red t-shirt...
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posted by cullens-rule
Chapter 4 Tom

“it would be easier if anda knew, but I will try to explain, as well as I can, anda know my name is Tom but my saat name is Cullen”
I interrupted him now
“Tom Cullen? Sounds old fashioned”
“It is, any way I’m just seventeen”
He looked away sheepishly like he was lying this made me curious would he really lie about his age.
“my real parents are dead now, they died of an illness I don’t really know much about them”
“I sorry that must be hati, tengah-tengah braking”
He looked miserable he looked into my eyes and I could feel his pain, but he carried on
“I take after my father...
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posted by e2mma2weasle3
How to Add Emotion to a Story

1.    Understand kata kunci atau Key Phrases. Key Phrases are phrases in a story that triggers the waterworks. They are sentences that make people cry. Such as, a pet dies. anda could write, "Goodbye, Old friend." A Key Phrase could also be an action. Such as, there are two pets. One pet dies. The other pet tries to sleep with the other one sejak cuddling up to the dead body.

2.    Add a lot of relationship between the one who dies and another character, whether that is a human atau an animal.

3.    Add comedy to the...
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posted by sapherequeen
*Sigh* Okay, this is the first piece of Penulisan I will ever share with anyone. Rarely does the idea of a poem ever enter my dark mind. But tonight, just two minit ago, this one came to me, and I had to...write...it...down...


I’m aching here
I’m bleeding there

Pain strikes within
My every move

And there’s
Nothing
I Can
Do
To Make It
Stop

The tears roll down my face
And freeze there quickly
And stay until the time comes
Where they are no longer frozen
And begin to stream down again

My hurt was bottled up
But someone broke the bottle
And now it’s
Everywhere
And there’s nothing
I Can
Do
To Heal Myself

I’m...
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“Look at them, trying to figure it out. Trying to work out why a pure-blood has come to their school, Antiworld, huh? This could be fun”. There was a young man sitting on the bahagian, atas of a gargoyle wearing a white baju with a black kot over it. His eyes where a light green with a black cat eye stroke through it. As the man stood up anda saw that he had pitch black hair and his skin was white like paper. As anda closed in on the man’s face anda saw his eye drop a line of blood down his cheek, as if he was crying blood. The man looked up at the sun covering his face with his hand, he closed his...
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