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posted by darkling_menace
(I have thought of a bunch of characters over the years, but since I suck at making stories for them to be in, I can only make the character itself with a bit of back story. Today is going to be the first hari that I'll be posting these characters on here, since this is the Penulisan club, and I don't want my mind to be cluttered with character ideas. This character came to me when I was rethinking an idea for an old character.)

Darcel was once the leader of a tribe of ancient humans in what is now known as modern England, he was a sorcerer who used his magic as an advantage over everyone else, it seemed that his people respected him, but in reality, they feared him. he killed anyone who defied his rule, but he would not do it himself, he would influence others in his tribe that whoever was against him wanted the tribe to fall, so he had them be killed sejak their own peers. The tribe executed traitors sejak tying them and sending them to a bottomless pit where it is berkata that they will fall for an eternity, never seeing the light ever again, little did they know, that this was a portal to a dimension where evil things arise from. Eventually his tribe fought against him, but they were no match for his magic power, so they consulted a wizard who had a magical amulet that would cut off any magic users power, but Darcel would have to put on the amulet on himself, and any means of taking it off would require magic. The tribe went to Darcel to ask a truth, and offered him the amulet as a peace offering, Darcel took the amulet and wore it boastfully, and that night, the tribesmen kidnapped Darcel in his sleep, tied him in their strongest rope, and threw him into the bottomless pit.

While in the pit, Darcel fell for what seemed like forever in the darkness, he was furious at the people he once ruled, but lebih than that, he felt fear. He was afraid of what he might encounter in the pit of those who he has wronged before, that their vengeful spirits will come back and make him suffer, his fear was well placed. Everyone he had ever sent to the pit was nothing lebih than a skinless ghoul, they grabbed Darcel and ripped the very flesh from his bones. He writhed and convulsed, trying to free himself from the ropes, but it was futile, he tried to use his magic, but the amulet prevented him from doing so, so in a last ditch effort, Darcel used a spell that would free him from the ropes and destroy the ghouls, but it would take away everything that made him human. Despite it being a spell, he did not need magic to perform it, just to focus his own soul out of his body, which he had to do under agonizing circumstances. He managed to get his soul partially separated from his body, but the amulet did have an affect on this spell, starting to pull Darcels' soul back into his body, thinking hastily, he tried to take over the body of one of the ghouls to remove the amulet, but he couldn't enter another body without leaving his own, so with his last bit of willpower, he made his soul stronger with the thoughts of hatred for those who put him here, and the want to rule over those who are weaker than him once again. His rage and greed fueled his soul, making it stronger, striking fear into the ghouls hearts, because now, he was absorbing them, because he was the stronger will. he took the souls of the ghouls and had left his body entirely, but the amulet sensed the presence of Darcels' soul escape his body, and as a last resort, it imploded with magical energy. Darcel was caught in the implosion, but it was so powerful, that it took the whole dark dimension with it.

Centuries passed, and the pit that once contained the dark dimension was eventually filled sejak dirt and debris, no one knowing of the evil that once dwelled within. There have been strange occurrences in the town around it, people being killed and stealing, but when they were taken in for questioning, they had no memory, they claim that last thing the remember was a voice telling them to defy rule, and throw away all morals, these people are sent to psychiatric wards, atau prison, whichever their choice. These occurrences happen mostly in this town, but there are isolated incidents like this all over the world, people talking about a voice that influences them, and takes them over, they no nothing about what it is, atau why its here, but we know one thing, it wants revenge.

The magic implosion that had been thought to have killed Darcel, actually made him lebih powerful, he was at the hati, tengah-tengah of it, when the amulet, took the whole dark dimension, it absorbed into Darcel, making him immortal, but never being able to walk in the light of hari again. He can control the minds of those with weak will and influence them to do terrible things, just so that they will be the ones getting punished, and to attack humanity as much as he can in his state. Sometimes he'll see the mind of someone who is just as dark and cruel as he is and take them under his command, and he will one day, form an army to rule the world again Darcel can travel in our plane of existence, through shadows atau sejak taking over the minds of animals, but this is all limited and he can only travel extensively within a mind of a willing human participant.

(This too me quite a few hours to write. So I wanna hear what opinion anda guys have on this and if anda all like it, then that'll probably incline me to make more, thanks.)
posted by Emmett4eva
Rapunzel

She lived in a rickety old house on the bahagian, atas of a bukit just outside town. Who is she anda ask? She is someone anda don’t want to meet; she is a wicked old witch... no one knows her name. She lived alone with her orphan servant, Rapunzel. The witch was old and horrible she had two hideous warts, one above her lip and on the left side of her chin. Rapunzel was a gorgeous girl in her early twenty’s. She had long silky, honey blond hair, green eyes and porselin skin. She was sejak far the most beautiful young lady I have ever met.
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I had just...
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posted by para-scence
First came the intense sadness, then came the anger. I wanted to scream at my parents, and my siblings. How hard is it to understand I just want to be myself? Is that so much to ask? I curled up in a ball on my bed, and cried. I covered my eyes with my fists, and screamed through my clenched teeth. That old saying "sticks and stones may break my bones, but words'll never hurt me," ran through my head. What a stupid saying. I'd gladly take being impaled with sticks and stones, than have heard what my parents just berkata to me.

I cried myself to sleep, and slept the rest of the day. I was woken...
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posted by para-scence
After living with the Stuek's for a couple weeks, they decided it was time for me to go to school. This gave me a whole new level of anxiety. From what I heard from the older kids at the orphanage, school is bad enough. But going to a new school, as a freshman would be hell.

"You'll have so much fun! anda can meet new people, and if anda want, anda can have your new Friends over..." Mrs. Stueck berkata cheerfully. She'd just gotten utama from the store. She'd gotten me a bunch of new "school clothes." Thankfully, she refrained from buying anything pink.

"Thanks," I whispered. She stopped and gaped at...
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posted by para-scence
They berkata I was just an unfortunate child, born to the wrong people. I'd never seen light until I was eight years old. My parents were criminals (I hadn't known this before of course). They'd hurt a lot of people. They were captured eventually, but then they had managed to escape the prison they were in. Then I was born. My parents were afraid they were caught, so they stayed in an apartment for eight years. No light, and almost no human contact. My dad was the only one that ever left the apartment, to get necessary things like food, clothes, and what not.

I never went to school. Mom taught...
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"Good sejak danny," I berkata Ciuman him on the cheek one last time."we may not see each other again but I will remember you." for the past week danny and i have been dating on a crusie. (sorry spelling? my mind is not working today.)We both knew the hari would come when we would not be able to see each other. Now it had come. I hugged him and walked down the gang plank.

4 months later

I went to the camp I had worked at for two years now. It was all so familar when I bummed into my best friend Max. He reminded me off Danny. But when ever I saw danny he reminded me of him. Was it max who I really liked and not danny? There's only one way to find out "max?" I berkata to him "What?" he said. "Da ya think we could..... like go to a movie atau somthing?" "sure!" he said. And we had a great time.
posted by lauren777222
"Crap,this is Crap!"I knew this voice from anywhere.I spun around quicky on my heels.The face was one of my three best friends,Benjamin.As I saw his face,it colided with memorey of the past.His mid-height,muscular body,pale shoulder-length brown hair,light-hearted vibe,and celestial sky grey eyes.I knew this was a dream.Mostly because he was here and I was talking to him.Mostly because he was sent to jail a tahun ago.He was there because he was accussed of being a sexual predator.My other two best friends,Marîe and Chase,didn't think Ben would do that.I too,thought this.Marîe and Ben had a...
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Title inspiration: Bang Bang sejak Nancy Sinatra


This fanfiction is a crossover between the Joker from the Dark Knight and Sweeney Todd. It has its own strand, and it is possible that there appear some new characters, atau not.
Batman is not supposed to, but maybe I will change my mind about that later.

The setting is England, London, in the 19th century - the Victorian Era.


But the most important part: this text is originally in german. I translated some of it into English, but most of it I didn't, so I fear anda have to use Google for this.
If anda request my translation, though, I might do it.

Sidenote:...
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posted by para-scence
I folded my arms, trying not to look at him. Blake was one of the biggest jerks I've ever seen. He's broken so many girls' hearts; he had no regard for their feelings atau anything. Now he was dating Heidi, a girl I also didn't care for. He looked at me with an expression of... fear? atau was it hate? Who knows.

"Uh.." he berkata stupidly. "What's your name?"

"Irina," I mumbled.

"I'm Blake," he said. I nodded, not really giving a fuck. "...Do anda want to get to work?" I shrugged.

"What're we doing?" I asked quietly. He explained that we were to interview each other; find out about each other's lives,...
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posted by para-scence
The seterusnya day, everyone was surprised when Andrew stopped by. Reed looked at him; distrust in his eyes. Andrew stood there awkwardly, his hands behind his back and staring at the ground.

"No offense, but..." Nikolai began.

"Why're anda here?" Reed finished.

"Uh, I wanted to invite anda guys to dinner. I thought it was the least my family and I could do," Andrew replied. Everyone was silent. I had to be the one to answer.

"Sure. Thanks," I said. He smiled. Reed looked at me like I was crazy. I ignored him.

"Great," Andrew beamed.

He left a little while later, after meaningless conversation; mostly...
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posted by para-scence
"Murder?! What the --- Why did--- Who'd he...?" I stuttered. Carmine and Nikolai waited patiently for me to somewhat calm down.

"Dalton's dead," Carmine berkata grimly. Oh no. Dalton. He had a bunch of people that stand behind him no matter what. This was going to bring hell down on us. How could Reed be so stupid?!

"What the fuck was he thinking?!" I shouted. Neither of them berkata anything. "Andrew and his Friends are going to kill us! I'm not going to be able to leave the house without getting jumped!"

"Harley, would anda stop thinking about yourself for once?!" Nikolai shouted at me. clamped my...
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posted by para-scence
"It won't be so bad," Micah said. He held my hand in both of his, as we sat on the porch swing.

"I know..." I berkata sadly. But it will be. The foster family that was taking me in lived a half jam away from here. I'd be going to a new school, have a new house, need to make new friends, and even live with new people. There's something not everyone gets to say. And I wouldn't be able to visit Micah.

"Alessandra!" called Mrs. Peters, my new foster-Mom, called. Her and her husband had finished putting my bags in the car, something they insisted on doing themselves so I could say goodbye to Micah....
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posted by sawfan13
I woke up alone and cold on a meadow. It was completely dark and silent. My hati, tengah-tengah was racing with fear, cold sweat going down my face, tears rolling down my face, my breathing getting heavier and heavier. My voice felt dry and swelled with fear and sadness so when I screamed,"Karrie!" the cold night air replaced my cry for help. I lifted my shaking body from the ground, as I had to force my feet to walk. I felt even lebih frightened when I stood. The cold calm wind, the awkwardness and loneliness, the fearfulness of nothing. I slowly walked in the dark cold meadow, hoping to find some signs...
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posted by Insight357
The museum visit had turned out to be fun. I learned Xander and Lucy were extremely educated about art, possibly lebih than I was.
    Before we left the museum, Alexander had spotted an ad for a local artistry competition. The winner would get a contract with the museum, and the opportunity to have artwork in museums all over the world. We thought it would be a good thing for Lucy.
    At first, she protested, but Xander gave her a pep talk. Lucy berkata she would consider entering. I think she was worried about criticism.
    After the...
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posted by xXxEmoRAwRxXx
Yeah I know it sucks I was bored when I wrote this....so yeah.           [Chapter 1]
She stares at the rain in silence. Grieve over took her. She sat there still looking at the body lying cold, pale, still, and dead on the floor. She just stared not sharing a tear and droped the knife, she then looks at the lighting that was flowing in the sky. She then spares a tear, she sits still seterusnya to the body crying for her lover. What had she done? He didn't deserve the pain she gave him. She gets up and comes back with another knife, a bottle of scottch, and a...
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Chapter 9

Patrick
Jason walked into the room that he heard the sound from. There, was a human boy wearing glasses, and cupped to the wall. He looked slightly older than Jason.

“Who are you?” asked Jason.

“I’m Patrick,” the boy said, straining his throat.


“How did anda get here?” Asked Jason.

Still struggling, Patrick said,” I was in a play, in my school, Santa Clara High, and I had a flame on my two legs, cause that was part of my character. Then I walked to the school across the jalan to pick up my younger brother. Before I could get my brother, I randomly walked into this room with...
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posted by para-scence
A few weeks passed. Shiloh generously got me an apartment, despite my protests. It was a cozy place, much better than any motel could compare to. Shiloh insisted on paying for it; he got a summer job as a carpenter for the summer. Even though it was probably impossible, I still wanted to pay for the apartment, but how could I get a job when I had Chance to look after? Sicily could only babysit so much.

One day, I thought of something that probably had to get done sooner atau later. I asked Sicily to watch Chance. She agreed; she loves being with him. I got in my car (which Shiloh had driven home...
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posted by Insight357
    “Damien, that was years ago,” berkata Alexander as his cheeks turned a light pink.
    “I know, and I don’t understand why the memory is resurfacing now,” I berkata shaking my head slightly.
    “Do anda think it’s because you’re with Grey lebih often?” Alexander asked. I’d rarely seen Grey while at the asylum. The only people I would talk to was Deborah, Dr. Anozi, Alexander, and a few college professors.
    “I don’t know, maybe, but it’s scaring me,” I said. “I spent all last night at...
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posted by nomblahnom
As I stare listlessly into the mirror, the fuzzy image that gazes back at me is someone I barely recognize. But I do. They say prison causes profound changes in a man, and the most extraordinary stem from the most incredible circumstances. That man in the mirror has undergone an unimaginable plethora of alterations because he is the absolute worst thing one can be in prison: an innocent man.

I detect the bitterness in his hazel eyes, the constant worry that wrinkles his forehead, the anxiety that sets his jaw like cement and the frustration that has lightened his hair from brown to salty beige....
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posted by Insight357
sejak the time, I reached Social Services noon had come. I walked inside the one-story, brick building. I looked around the large, blue-walled room the door had revealed. I didn’t see Lucy.
    A curvy, dark-toned woman come up to me. She had curly black hair, and brown eyes.
    “You must be, Damien,” berkata the woman. I nodded.
    “And anda are?” I knew she was a social worker, but that’s all.
    “I’m Stacey, Stacey Sterns,” she said.
    “You’re Lucy’s worker, right?”
    “Yes,...
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When they got there, the house still looked old, but not a Fall of the House of Usher Gothic, Amytiville Horror old. It looked like it was from the 20's but it looked restored. Lilian looked at Mimi and said,"Yeah, I paid some people last bulan if they could restore the house. I showed them a picture of what the house looked like in color and they fixed it up good as new." Mimi looked at in amazement and said,"It looks untouched and new, yet it still has that old timey atmosphere to it." Lilian smiled and said,"Yeah. Very pretty. But it does however have cable and electricity. I thought since...
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