Kate & Humphrey adventures.
Mini Story 2. “The boy is gone!” Part 1 of 1.

Kate started her hari preparing herself for a

funeral for an elder who died from a cougar

attack. The elder was walking on a mountain when

a cougar jumped her, for a quick snack. Her legs

were eaten and her head was nibbled on. When Kate

got to the funeral Humphrey was already talking

with Garth and Lilly. Lilly was crying a little

bit, cause the elder was like a grandma to her.

Kate walked away with Lilly and she tried to stop

her crying. Kate never really new this elder, but

knew she was Lilly’s kegemaran old wolf. Will

showed up with a full-grown female pronghorn, and

a white tail deer. He dropped his M4 and walked

over to the Makanan rock. Serigala then walked up to

the rock and tore a small piece of meat out of

each animal for a snack. He wasn't really part of

the pack and most Serigala felt him as a killer, so

he let them be and got on his dirt bike and took

a ride across the western territory. The dirt

bike can’t climb up the bukit to the eastern

territory, so he can only ride on the western

territory. He drove off and the sound of his dirt

bike slowly faded away into the distance. Kate

grabbed a piece of Makanan and brought it over to

Lilly. Lilly slowly ate it but couldn't clear the

tears from her eyes. The ceremony went on for

several lebih hours and Will made a full bulatan

around the territory. He revved the engine hard,

and slammed the gas; he started at 3mph and hit

68 mph. He kept going and going until the front

tire hit a hole. He flew off the bike and slammed

into a large rock. Kate and Garth rushed over to

him and saw he was still conscious. He asked if

they could drag him to the Ferrari. Winston came

over and helped them pull on his shirt. They made

it 100 feet and the Ferrari was parked only 30

lebih feet. But the baju ripped. He told Garth to

bite on his left leg and drag him the rest of the

way. Garth was hesitant at first but knew he

couldn’t pull on Will's shorts. He finally

dragged Will to the Ferrari, and Will slowly

climbed in. He berkata he would be back tomorrow,

and slammed the gas speeding down the field and

into the lower valley. He then got up to a road

and drove to the hospital. The funeral continued

as Will speed off, and Garth cleaned some blood

off of his teeth. As night started to fall, the

Serigala howled one last time and covered the body

with dirt. Lilly’s tears faded away and Garth

took her home. Kate and Humphrey walked utama

also. The graveyard was 300 feet south of the

alphas dens in a small level area. When Kate and

Humphrey got utama they sat down and chatted about

the day. Within the jam they both fell asleep in

each other’s arms. Humphrey woke up the seterusnya

morning sejak Kate. She already cleaned the front of

the cave and got a Lynx for breakfast. He ate

almost all of what was left and berkata sejak to Kate

as he walked out towards the omegas caves to meet

Mooch. Mooch Lost a few pounds from going up and

down the mountains log boarding. When he reached

Mooch's cave, he noticed that a Ferrari wasn't

parked outside Will’s cave across the river.

Mooch came out and greeted him. “Where is Will at

mooch?” “He never made it utama last night. But

don't worry he berkata he would be back today and

the hari isn't over yet.” “Your right, so anda want

to pull a prank on Can-do?” “Sure what is it?”

“Well I was thinking about putting a thin vine at

the entrance and then when we walked out it would

trip him.” “Ha ha sounds like fun, he was a bit

mean to me at the funeral anyways.” The 2 Serigala

went to the forest and got a small vine, and then

they tied it across the front of the den. They

waited until Kate blew their position. They

looked back at her and then heard a big smack,

and Can-do was tripped. They laughed a lot and

Kate joined in. She tried to stop but couldn’t.

The image was playing in her mind over and over

of his face hitting the floor. The Serigala quickly

ran away as hutch and Can-do chased after them.

Kate hid inside her den and Mooch was tackled sejak

Hutch. Can-do kept gaining lebih and distance to

Humphrey. And within a saat he tackled Humphrey

into a muddy riverside. Can-do laughed and went

back utama and bit the vine apart. Kate and

Humphrey then again spent

the night at couple’s Fallz and fell asleep in

the same den beside the waterfall that they slept

in the last few times. When they woke up the seterusnya

morning and walked down to their den, a serigala, wolf that

patrols at night came running up to Kate. He berkata

Will didn't come back last night and he thinks

Will went unconscious from the bite Garth gave

him. Kate thanked him for the information and

returned home. She then Gathered Hutch and Gemma

and they went to a gas station where Will always

filled his dirt bike at. They didn't see him atau

the car, and they stumbled onto a watchdog in the

back tied up. “Excuse me, my name is Kate, and I

have a soalan for you.” “Hello, Kate I'm Manny,

I don’t get visited sejak anyone much, so I don’t

know if I can help.” “Well we are wondering about

a human.” “Ah! Yes a human, I see many of them so

I bet I can help anda now.” “We are looking for a

boy who has a dirt bike and a red Ferrari, have

anda seen him?” “Ah yes, he past this place about

2 days ago. He looked really hurt and sped down

towards the hospital. In fact I can tunjuk anda

where he is if anda want.” “YES! Please tunjuk us.”

“OK well my owner doesn't want me to get too

lonely so he hooked up a TV with the news channel

on. Here your friend should be on right now.”


News-lady: Welcome to the 5:00 o-clock news. I'm

Hannah and boy do I have a story for you. A while

back in The U.S, a 13-year-old boy Named Will

Emert was supposedly kidnapped and taken into

Canada. Well the mystery where he went is over.

He went to a hospital in Alberta with severe

injuries. He wasn't recognized at all and went

through the front doors marked as in an accident.

The hospital berkata he told them he got bit sejak a

coyote and flipped his dirt bike on the escape.

Everything went smoothly until they put him in an

x-ray machine; there they saw 2 pistols and 1

knife. The hospital’s owner called the police

without Will even knowing they saw the guns. When

the cops came in, Will was taken sejak surprise and

pulled out his 1911. 22 shots were fired and no

one was hurt. He was then taken to Jail and he

will spend 23 years in Jail.” “Oh no!” “Kate I'm

sorry but me and Hutch can't help. Its time to

forget about him.” Hutch and Gemma began to walk

home. Kate had no choice but to follow them. She

couldn't believe that he was gone. The seterusnya hari

at dawn helicopters and planes flew overhead.

Kate could hear a loud engine coming from the

distance. Every serigala, wolf was waked up sejak the sound of

the engine. They never heard an engine that loud

out this far before. It was Will! He was driving

a Ferrari 458 spider. The engine roared from the

nitrous kicking in. But as fast as he was coming,

he went straight sejak the dens on the mountain

edge. All the Serigala kept wondering why he didn't

stop, until they saw a fighter jet fly over and

shoot rockets at him. The rockets both missed

when he made a bend into a valley. He then went

right up the mountainside and got launched into

the air. A helicopter flew over him and he threw

a rope to the side of it. The car hit the ground

and the front tire fell off. He climbed the rope

and got to the helicopters cockpit. He then shot

the pilot and entered the helicopter. Will flew

over Kate and went past the territory. The chase

continued with help from the US army. Will’s plan

was to get as far away from jasper as possible

and then exit the helicopter and disappear in the

woods. He got over Manitoba Canada, when he

called in a jet from the black market to escort

him. The jet came flying past him and spun back

and shot 4 rockets which hit a fighter jet behind

Will. He was almost past Manitoba when the US

army showed up and immediately shot him out of

the sky. The helicopter spun and when it reached

the bahagian, atas of 400-foot trees, he was forced to jump.

He smashed hard through the branches and heard

the helicopter explode behind him. He came close

to the ground and caught a pokok branch. He then

let go and fell the remaining 30 feet. Will got

up and ran for a clearing, while he called the

black market for a Dirt bike. The helicopter flew

sejak and dropped the dirt bike 40 feet. The

helicopter then flew away before being

discovered. Will hoped on and drove through the

woods. He ran across a black market base and hid

in it for 2 hours. He then got in a Lamborghini

and drove slowly towards Alberta. He reached

Alberta in 5 hours. He then switched out the

Lamborghini at another black market base and got

onto a zip line, which shot him 15 miles to the

edge of jasper. He then got onto an emergency

Dirt bike and drove back to Kate’s territory.

When he finally reached it he was exhausted, but

couldn't settle down. He called the black market

again and had them extract the 458 labah-labah Ferrari

to another location. This way if they look for it

they will be looking far away from here. Kate

Jumped at Will and pinned him to the ground

laughing. He got up and then got knocked down

again sejak Tony. “You idiot anda could have exposed

us.” “Dad calm down he didn't get us exposed he

didn’t even get near us.” “Guys please don't

fight, Tony is right I was stupid to do such a

thing. But I had to get away.” “Will come in the

cave with me and Humphrey we want to talk with

you.” Will followed Kate back to her den as told.

“Sorry about Tony he hates the fact that anda are

here. But I do want anda to be lebih careful.”

“Sorry Kate I just got stupid that's all.” “Were

did your red Ferrari go?” “Well Humphrey, they

impounded it when they arrested me. Which it

means they destroyed it.” “Oh, I'm sorry to hear

that it must be awful.” “Eh, its only a 3 million

dollar car anyway. I have anda guys now, that's

all I care.” Will left the den and returned to

his cave at dusk. Everything was back to normal

for now and should be for a long time, as he

promised Kate he was going to calm down and be

lebih careful.


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