Disney Princess Article: Need help with Disney highschool fanfic

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posted by MadameLee

I have tried/am trying to write a Disneyville high school but I'm having issues about how to represent the characters. I got Gaston down at the jock, and the triplets girls from Beauty and the Beast as cheerleaders Cinderella and her steps are the new kids (but Ella's the protagonist).

These are who I have for teachers:
Jane Porter- English
Jafar Magic -Science-*picks on Aladdin*
Merlin History-history
Ursula Landvik -gym class/swimming coach *picks on Ariel*
Roger Radcliffe –music
Anita Radcliffe -home Ec.?

Students:
Aurora-(but likes to be called Rose) Pajari
Phillip Romanov
Aladdin Scott (I guess “charity case” of the school) Fouad,
melati, jasmine Linda Amin
Louis Mike Charming-doesn’t have a GF yet
New girl- Cindy Ilene Tremaine.
Belle Page Desrosiers
Adam Robby “Bête”
Flyn Harry Auttenberg
Snow White Adriana Blumenthal
Ariel Jodi Landvik
Eric Leifsson
Adolphe Gaston
*the triplets*

Pocahontas Powhatan
John Smith
Wendy Darling

Aladdin's not only the charity case of the school. he's also a special needs kid. if anyone needs to see the first two chapters just ask!!

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MacytheStrange So, you say you need help with how to represent your characters. In what way exactly are you having trouble? I'll try to help you.

MadameLee I can post my first three chapters so you can read it for yourself. It's hard for me to explain how I'm having problems. i'm not exactly sure how to portray the other girls (I have already writen Aurora, & Phillp, and Jas and Al. Also a bit of Wendy)

hajirah4 Eric Leiffson! LOL! I get that, it can be an inside joke with me and Professor Merlin :) Yeah, I'll try to help on some parts as well, if I can.

MadameLee well for most of them (the ones who don't have a last name in the movies). I used something from the culture they represent. Like Jasmine 'sand Aladdin's last names comes from either the middle east or India. Well I have Belle's last name be 'rose' representing her and Adam's story. Phillip's last name is Russian because the music of Disney's SB is Russian. In some cases I added part of the names of their voice actors. I have Gaston as a last name for Gaston because the way people talk about him in the movie (two scenes-the triplets and Belle in the two 'Belle' songs). I named one of the triplets "Helene". For instance what are ways to make Louis (aka Cinderella's love ) rebellious? I read somewhere he was because he gave his dad something like 'the finger'. (aka yawning up at him). these are the chapters I have: http://www.fanpop.com/clubs/disney-princess/articles/229879/title/disneyville-high-school-part-1-first-day-school-english-class http://www.fanpop.com/clubs/disney-princess/articles/229897/title/disney-high-school-chapter-2-sciene-class http://www.fanpop.com/clubs/disney-princess/articles/229898/title/chapter-3-history-class *I know this idea is weird but I kind of making the charries in the stories realize they are storybook charries and people outside of their world have arguments about them* I think for some excitement in my story, Gaston will play three-some with the triplets and (maybe one of them will be..). By the way who else should not be a couple at the beginning of my story? I have Aladdin and Jasmine already picked and also Aurora/Rose and Phillip. So do the others (beside Cindy) *not* get coupled up until later? I want themed food for a restaurant i'm planning on later (like Anne''s Once upon a Restaurant). Which cliques would each princess (or heroine) belong too? What about the princes? None of them would be a mean girl.

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Opposing Woes, Part 30.

posted by avatar_tla_fan

Mulan was happy to go back to school the seterusnya day. She knew for sure how well she did on all of her exams.

She walked down the hallway, talking with melati, jasmine again.

"Well, anda seem much happier today," melati, jasmine berkata to her.

"I am," Mulan replied, "I'm sure I got a perfect score on all of the exams. I'm positive!"

"Well, anda seem really confident," melati, jasmine replied back.

"I am," Mulan said.

Then a thought came to Mulan's head.

"Where has Aurora been? She's been gone for a while."

"I don't know. Did anda try calling her?"

"She doesn't pick up. Hm. Well anyways, I'm going to class, bye."

"Goodbye." And...

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Opposing Woes, Part 27.

posted by avatar_tla_fan

Mulan was still struggling in school. She couldn't manage to bring utama any good grades, at all. Her parents had told her that she needed to bring her grades up.

Meanwhile, Snow White had just escaped from the woman, when she ran straight into Mulan when walking down the street.

"Whoops! Sorry!" Snow White said, apologizing about this to Mulan.

"Oh, it's fine!" Mulan replied to her, "I didn't see anda coming."

"You look really stressed. Are anda okay?" Snow White asked her.

How could she know that I'm upset? Mulan wondered to herself.

"Oh, yeah. It's no big deal though, don't worry."

"Are anda sure?...

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Opposing Woes, Part 20.

posted by avatar_tla_fan

"Okay, so where do they keep the security camera footage?" Belle asked Ariel.

"They keep them on the bahagian, atas floor of the hospital, I think." Ariel responded to her.

"Wow, that's a long trip. How are we going to make it without people catching us?"

"I don't know, but I'm positive that we can pull it off. Are anda worried?"

"Well, yeah. What would happen if they catch us?"

"I don't know. We're hospital patients, they pity us. Right?"

"I don't want to use pity as an excuse."

"Ugh, let's just go."

"Okay, fine."

The two set off, walking slowly and carefully.

"Okay, we have to go up four floors to get there."...

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Cinta Locked Up (Part 2)

posted by reflection11

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I quickly put my gloves back on and sat on my window railing. My face was cold and my blonde hair was up in a ponytail. The wind blew against my face, but I didn’t care. I wanted to tell Anna about my powers, but not lebih than I wanted to protect her. The outdoors was a slate of nothingness. Not one person in sight, and the moon glowed brighter than the stars. I got some paper and drew. When drawing, I improvised a lot, but tonight I drew exactly what I see. That’s how I wanted people to see me: exactly how I look. I hate having everything locked up. I stared back out into the...

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Opposing Woes, Part 16.

posted by avatar_tla_fan

Belle was walking utama from school. Another perfect hari for her- everything was always perfect for her. No enemies atau bullies, no horrible teachers, no hard classes, nothing was a trouble for her. Ever.

She walked down the street, people greeting her, telling her to have a nice day.

Wonderful hari as usual. Belle thought to herself. Well, I have studies to get to, I might as well get home.

She walked home, went inside, yelled to see if her father was utama yet, I guess they're not and started to work on homework that she had that day.

"Okay so-" Belle started to say, until the lights oddly dimmed....

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Cinta Locked Up (Part one)

posted by reflection11

It's time for my first fan-fiction! *Trumpets sound* First of all, the first chapter is slow, and boring. So suffer through the first one and it will get better!:D The story is about Elsa(<33) when she was 15. It's about how she feels about Anna and there is a boy :3. Stay tuned for more!
Without further adue... Here is the first chapter to a (most likely) horrible fan-fic.

I sat on the window railing staring out at the snow. Children from the villages building snowmen, sledding, and having snowball fights. I ran over to my door and looked out the eyehole. All clear. I ran back to my window...

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Mulan vs. Ping

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Disney Rewind: The Disney Princess Edition, artikel 1 of 13

posted by 8804

Hi, All. I've tried to avoid Penulisan artikel-artikel for a long while, mostly because I'm busier, and secondly, because it takes forever to explain the "why" behind statements.
Today, because I am bored I'm going to stick with trying to examine my impressions of each of the DP movies, and their princesses, (with a sidebar about the princes). This is the first artikel in a series of 13 articles. (Disclaimer: These are just my opinions, mind you, and not completely shared sejak everyone. My life experiences have colored my perspectives on each princess, so the take-away message is that my opinions are...

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The Power Of Friendship (Chapter 23)

posted by mhs1025

Hours later, everyone was prepping for Mulan's surprise makan malam, majlis makan malam party. Ling, Yao, and Chien Po informed the princesses about the special occasion and they wanted to lend in a helping hand. The princesses cooked, the men did the heavy-duty work, and Pocahontas and Merida kept Mulan distracted. "Does your family really think it's going to be twins?" Pocahontas asked about the queen's pregnancy. "We do. Just in case it's not, we're only sayin' one baby." Merida answered. "It's good not to second-guess." Mulan replied. Pocahontas and Merida turned shell shocked.

"You haven't spoken like that all...

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Why I Cinta Aurora

posted by sweetie-94

Today I'll focus on why I love Aurora

Today it's 5 days until my birthday and today I'll focus on my 5th kegemaran DP aswell as the POTM Aurora and why I Cinta her
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Even though Aurora has been moving down my senarai a little bit lately I still Cinta her very much

I Cinta her kind of suspicious look when the Pari-pari are planning her birthday party, she seems to sort of know what they're up to

I Cinta how dreamy she is, she almost constantly talks about the prince she met in her dreams, this leads me to something else that I Cinta about her, how femenine she is, she's basically a...

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Why I Cinta Belle

posted by sweetie-94

Today I'll focus on why I love Belle

Today it's 7 days (1 week) until my birthday and today I'll focus on my 7th kegemaran DP (or my middle kegemaran DP) Belle and why I Cinta her
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Even though Belle is in the middle of my kegemaran DP senarai I Cinta her very much

I Cinta that she's a bookworm, now I've never really been a huge bookworm myself, but it's great to see a princess who is and I Cinta that she's an outcast in her town and that everyone think she's weird, but she doesn't care about it

I Cinta how selfless she was when she gave up her freedom to live with the Beast, not only that,...

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let it go let it go and i ii rise like the break of dawn

posted by elsalover66

The snow glows white on the mountain tonight
Not a footprint to be seen
A kingdom of isolation,
And it looks like I'm the queen.

The wind is howling like this swirling storm inside
Couldn't keep it in, heaven knows I tried!

Don't let them in, don't let them see
Be the good girl anda always have to be
Conceal, don't feel, don't let them know
Well, now they know!

Let it go, let it go
Can't hold it back anymore
Let it go, let it go
Turn away and slam the door!

I don't care
What they're going to say
Let the storm rage on,
The cold never bothered me anyway!

It's funny how some distance
Makes everything seem small
And...

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The Power Of Friendship (Chapter 6)

posted by mhs1025

Pocahontas and Merida decided to wait afew months before traveling to China to see Mulan because of Ping. Ping was still figuring out the hari and night process. Mulan hated her Friends had to wait, but at the same time, the whole scenario made it easier for her so in afew months, Ping would actually sleep through the night. Shang had requested for a temporary leave when Pocahontas and Merida came to town. The Emperor gave him that leave and because China was in good shape, he could take all the time he wanted! The former Captain couldn't wait to see Pocahontas and John, but dreaded seeing Merida....

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The Council of the Queens - Part 2

posted by Annabethandco

Rapunzel - Chapter 3

Rapunzel examined the blank canvas in front of her, pondering what to paint. There was something strangely powerful about holding a paintbrush dipped in paint in your hand. anda could create anything anda wanted. anda could paint a memory, a landscape, atau even a dream (Rapunzel’s usual choice). All anda had to do was have the imagination for it.

In the past, Rapunzel had never lacked for inspiration. Even in the dullness of her tower she had still managed to get ideas. But things were different now. Rapunzel always felt too stressed and distracted to be focused enough to paint....

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Mulan Case

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A New Story! Chapter 1

posted by snsdlover4ever

*This will be based on the book called The Fault in Our Stars, and to avoid plagiarism, I'm adding stuff that never really happened in the book, so don't complain! Also, I read this book almost a tahun ago, so I might not remember some of the events that happened atau when it happened. Since the movie is coming out in June, I wanted to make this so that lebih people would know about the hype. Hope anda enjoy!*

Chapter 1
Aurora's POV

During the winter of my sixteenth year, my mother decided that I was depressed, due to me rarely leaving the kingdom, spent a lot of time in bed, Membaca the same book...

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