did anyone read part three? cause I got no komen-komen on it. if anda did read it tell me.
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I turned around to see Duncan and buddy Geff looking at us. "what are anda doing her?" he asked again. "we kind of got stranded here," I berkata making a silent promess with briget not to tell anyone about this "problem" we had gatten ourselfs into. "stranded hu?" asked duncan who looked at Jeff. I could tell that look ment somthing but I did not know what. "wait," I berkata ",How did anda get here." They exchanged a glance the I knew ment eather "what do we say", "we're caught", atau "Think of somthing!". "uhhh...." berkata jeff speaking for the first time. "We swam. The bay is not far from here." Duncan gave him a look that I took to mean "great dude anda ended us!" but I desided to give them a break "then anda must be good swimmers," I said. Duncan looked surprised then berkata "Oh yea! really fast too!" Then I desided not to. "Let me see how fast anda go!" "What?!" berkata duncan jumping back a bit. "I mean...... I can't. Hurt my leg. OW! OW! hurts now." "Then how did anda swim here?" I asked knowing I had won. "I'll race ya," I said. Brigett leand over and wispered to me "What are anda doing!" "Don't worry," I wispered back "I got both of them figured out." Duncan and I steped to the pantai line and jumped in. WE both came up. Duncan ,who now was missing a shirt, had a long deep blue tail. "You too!" he said. We both got on pantai and dried off. "Me too." berkata brigett. "Jeff is too," berkata Duncan "We thought anda two might be but it is embaresing to say we are part shiney, glittery, magical fish." Brigget and I giggled. "You guys got to prmis with us you'll never tell" berkata brigget and Jeff at the same time. Brigget blushed and Jeff winked and we all shook on it. We then all merpati in and swam back to the bay.
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how do ya like it? plz comment. That is how I see how many people read it. Also peminat it PLZ!!!!!
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I turned around to see Duncan and buddy Geff looking at us. "what are anda doing her?" he asked again. "we kind of got stranded here," I berkata making a silent promess with briget not to tell anyone about this "problem" we had gatten ourselfs into. "stranded hu?" asked duncan who looked at Jeff. I could tell that look ment somthing but I did not know what. "wait," I berkata ",How did anda get here." They exchanged a glance the I knew ment eather "what do we say", "we're caught", atau "Think of somthing!". "uhhh...." berkata jeff speaking for the first time. "We swam. The bay is not far from here." Duncan gave him a look that I took to mean "great dude anda ended us!" but I desided to give them a break "then anda must be good swimmers," I said. Duncan looked surprised then berkata "Oh yea! really fast too!" Then I desided not to. "Let me see how fast anda go!" "What?!" berkata duncan jumping back a bit. "I mean...... I can't. Hurt my leg. OW! OW! hurts now." "Then how did anda swim here?" I asked knowing I had won. "I'll race ya," I said. Brigett leand over and wispered to me "What are anda doing!" "Don't worry," I wispered back "I got both of them figured out." Duncan and I steped to the pantai line and jumped in. WE both came up. Duncan ,who now was missing a shirt, had a long deep blue tail. "You too!" he said. We both got on pantai and dried off. "Me too." berkata brigett. "Jeff is too," berkata Duncan "We thought anda two might be but it is embaresing to say we are part shiney, glittery, magical fish." Brigget and I giggled. "You guys got to prmis with us you'll never tell" berkata brigget and Jeff at the same time. Brigget blushed and Jeff winked and we all shook on it. We then all merpati in and swam back to the bay.
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how do ya like it? plz comment. That is how I see how many people read it. Also peminat it PLZ!!!!!
Hi guys!! This is the prologue for another DxC story... Imagine that TDI/A/WT never happened.
THE SCENERIE:
Courtney is not a spoiled child. She is 18 years old and she worked hard to become a homicide detective... She is not a homicide detective yet but she was in her way, she was helping in some cases and actually she had already arrest some criminals so she was good at it.
Her uncle was the captain of the department and he let her work in the cases...
Duncan is a delinquent and, of course, is Courtney´s age. He has been in jail too many times to mention and his personality is exactly the same. He has family but he never talks about them. He´s member of a gang qhere Geoff is too.
How they´ll meet? What will happened when they meet?
Well if anda wanna fin out, komen please!!!! and youll know!!!
If no one komen-komen i wont continue with the story!!
THE SCENERIE:
Courtney is not a spoiled child. She is 18 years old and she worked hard to become a homicide detective... She is not a homicide detective yet but she was in her way, she was helping in some cases and actually she had already arrest some criminals so she was good at it.
Her uncle was the captain of the department and he let her work in the cases...
Duncan is a delinquent and, of course, is Courtney´s age. He has been in jail too many times to mention and his personality is exactly the same. He has family but he never talks about them. He´s member of a gang qhere Geoff is too.
How they´ll meet? What will happened when they meet?
Well if anda wanna fin out, komen please!!!! and youll know!!!
If no one komen-komen i wont continue with the story!!