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Once upon a time, there lived a young girl who loved her widowed father very much who lived in a faraway kingdom. Her name was Diana-Ella.
    They lived in a stately mansion Château utama in one of the best places in the kingdom. A devoted father, he gave Diana-Ella everything a little girl could ever want. He thought to himself that it was time for a motherly love, so he remarried to Dame Diane and had two daughters of her own, just Diana-Ella’s age, Louise and Gloria.
    The family lived in peace and tranquilly until tragic struck Diana-Ella’s father, thus leading him to his untimely death. Soon after, the step-family’s true Warna were shown. They were cruel, cold-blooded and they were all envied with pahit jealous of Diana-Ella’s charm, inner and outer beauty. The stepmother was only now determined to ke hadapan the likes of her own two overindulged daughters.
    As the years went by, the stately chateau fell into slight damaged, the family money’s were consumed sejak the narcissistic and self-centered step-family while Diana-Ella was finally forced to become a scullery servant girl in her own household. But throughout the years, Diana-Ella still remains to her usually gentle and kind self, for someday her dreams of her true happiness would come true.