When Saten Twist returned to Los Angeles in the Super Chief, he saw Jake looking at him.
Jake: *Angry*
Saten: *Sweating* Why is he giving me that look? *Stops the train*
Jake: *Tapping his left front hoof on the ground, waiting for Saten Twist*
Saten: *Climbs down from the engine's cab* Why are anda angry at me?
Jake: anda owe me an apology for the way anda talked to me yesterday.
Saten: John-
Jake: IT'S JAKE!!!!
Saten: Why are anda getting angry at me all of a sudden?
Jake: Your lecture towards me made me lose my job, and now I can't find work anywhere else.
Saten: anda quit?
Jake: Yeah. I'm still waiting for anda to apologize.
Saten: It's not my fault anda quit. I told anda to be lebih normal, and you're becoming very immature. Nopony cares about how smart anda are.
Jake: Well they should. *Walking towards the train* If anda won't let me drive trains, I'll start my own railroad.
Jake tried climbing into the cab, but he tripped at the end of the platform, and fell onto the train. The red stallion broke his neck.
20 minit later
Greg: *Watching Jake get placed into a Hearse* Now anda owe me a big favor, because I wanted to see this glorious moment for myself.
Saten: I'll admit, he was annoying, but he definitely didn't deserve death.
Greg: Who do anda think is going to take his place?
Saten: I guess the boss will tell us tomorrow. Let's head to the bar, and grab a drink.
Greg: I'm not done with my shift yet.
Saten: anda will head to the bar later though, right?
Greg: Sure.
Saten: I'll wait for you. Come to my place, and we'll head down there together.
2 B Continued
Jake: *Angry*
Saten: *Sweating* Why is he giving me that look? *Stops the train*
Jake: *Tapping his left front hoof on the ground, waiting for Saten Twist*
Saten: *Climbs down from the engine's cab* Why are anda angry at me?
Jake: anda owe me an apology for the way anda talked to me yesterday.
Saten: John-
Jake: IT'S JAKE!!!!
Saten: Why are anda getting angry at me all of a sudden?
Jake: Your lecture towards me made me lose my job, and now I can't find work anywhere else.
Saten: anda quit?
Jake: Yeah. I'm still waiting for anda to apologize.
Saten: It's not my fault anda quit. I told anda to be lebih normal, and you're becoming very immature. Nopony cares about how smart anda are.
Jake: Well they should. *Walking towards the train* If anda won't let me drive trains, I'll start my own railroad.
Jake tried climbing into the cab, but he tripped at the end of the platform, and fell onto the train. The red stallion broke his neck.
20 minit later
Greg: *Watching Jake get placed into a Hearse* Now anda owe me a big favor, because I wanted to see this glorious moment for myself.
Saten: I'll admit, he was annoying, but he definitely didn't deserve death.
Greg: Who do anda think is going to take his place?
Saten: I guess the boss will tell us tomorrow. Let's head to the bar, and grab a drink.
Greg: I'm not done with my shift yet.
Saten: anda will head to the bar later though, right?
Greg: Sure.
Saten: I'll wait for you. Come to my place, and we'll head down there together.
2 B Continued
I just want to end this story so it can be out of the way, and
I can stop overbooking myself.
The seterusnya hari Trixie knocked on Rarity's door.
Trixie: Well. I did it. I killed them.
Rarity: Oh.. Well. This is awkward... I. kinda.. Changed my mind, and was about to call it off.
Trixie: Oh... I'm still getting paid though right.
Rarity: (sighs) Fine.. (gives her the amount of money she promised too).
Trixie: Thank you. (takes the money). Say. anda have any beer?
Rarity: No. Saten came and took the last one.
Trixie: (excitedly) Saten's still in town?
Rarity: I guess.,
Trixie: Great.. anda know where he might be.. Because I am totally NOT gonna stalk him.
Rarity: (shrugs unsurely)
THE END
Ending theme.
(theme song/Steven King IT)
I can stop overbooking myself.
The seterusnya hari Trixie knocked on Rarity's door.
Trixie: Well. I did it. I killed them.
Rarity: Oh.. Well. This is awkward... I. kinda.. Changed my mind, and was about to call it off.
Trixie: Oh... I'm still getting paid though right.
Rarity: (sighs) Fine.. (gives her the amount of money she promised too).
Trixie: Thank you. (takes the money). Say. anda have any beer?
Rarity: No. Saten came and took the last one.
Trixie: (excitedly) Saten's still in town?
Rarity: I guess.,
Trixie: Great.. anda know where he might be.. Because I am totally NOT gonna stalk him.
Rarity: (shrugs unsurely)
THE END
Ending theme.
(theme song/Steven King IT)
Has anyone ever read CHEERLIEES GARDEN.
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw Filem (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her lebih like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for lebih of my latest story..
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw Filem (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her lebih like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for lebih of my latest story..
AT RESTURANT:
Trixie: I'm glad your finally over AppleJack.. Who needed her anyway. She didn't get you.. anda need someone who 'dose' get you.. Someone who knew anda your whole life.
Saten: anda mean Derpy?
Trixie: Well.. Sure.. Derpy.. But I meant some 'else' who knew anda your entire life, and always had a thing for you.. Who knows.. She might be sitting in front of you.
Saten: (obviously) I honestly have no idea what your going on about Trixie. But your voice is soothing, and strangely I feel better.. (happily) Thanks, anda always such a great friend.
Trixie: (sighs) Sure... Friend
Saten: (gets up) Anyway. I gotta go.. Sorry again for trying to kill you, last time we were here.
Trixie: (shrugs) anda were drunk.
Saten: If it makes anda feel better. I'm really trying to cut back on alcohol.
Trixie: I sincerely doubt that.. But if anda say.
Saten: (leaves)
Trixie: (sighs) Guess Trixie's paying again..
Trixie: I'm glad your finally over AppleJack.. Who needed her anyway. She didn't get you.. anda need someone who 'dose' get you.. Someone who knew anda your whole life.
Saten: anda mean Derpy?
Trixie: Well.. Sure.. Derpy.. But I meant some 'else' who knew anda your entire life, and always had a thing for you.. Who knows.. She might be sitting in front of you.
Saten: (obviously) I honestly have no idea what your going on about Trixie. But your voice is soothing, and strangely I feel better.. (happily) Thanks, anda always such a great friend.
Trixie: (sighs) Sure... Friend
Saten: (gets up) Anyway. I gotta go.. Sorry again for trying to kill you, last time we were here.
Trixie: (shrugs) anda were drunk.
Saten: If it makes anda feel better. I'm really trying to cut back on alcohol.
Trixie: I sincerely doubt that.. But if anda say.
Saten: (leaves)
Trixie: (sighs) Guess Trixie's paying again..