Will u read my story

I read your story.It was good.could use some editeding thought. I liked it though i'm parcialle to Ino/Choji

hmmmm... interesting story... unusual couple though, kibaino. well, there could have been a little lebih detail though. at times it was a bit confusing. mind anda you're better than me at that stuff. i can think up a story but just can't be bothered to type atau write it up...

Already readin' :P