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Is this good for a tweve tahun old? Its a song called " i miss you" written sejak a twelve tahun old.

The pain is too deep to handle. your all i wish for when i blow that candle. even in my sleep you're all i think of. i'll always wonder if anda do the same, while anda look at the stars up above.every tear that falls from my eyes represents how much i miss you. i picked anda out of all the guys. now will anda do the same for me? I've tried so hard not to cry but it hurts so much i'd rather die. i think of anda hari and night. if someone interferes i put up a fight. I miss you. Do anda miss me too? is it possible to hurt so much? i miss anda and your gentle touch. i wish that anda were here with me; holading hands on a branch of a tree. i wish that anda could pull me close. i think i took and overdose.... of you. i cant stand it. help me up. ill start a riot. be my love. i'll cry and cry till anda reach me... and wait for anda to Ciuman me.
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MattxAliceNine said:
for a 12 tahun old really good but there holding is misspelled
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Vixie79 said:
That is really good. I imagine sejak the time she is 17 atau so she'll be mind blowing with her own style of course. This Penulisan isn't particularly my favorite, but it's still good Penulisan wise.
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irena83 said:
Cute! ;)
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skillet_luvr said:
Very good for a twelve tahun old. :)
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