Is It BAd?????????

Penulisan itself should have some purpose. anda open your soul sejak putting all these feelings on the paper atau anda release some bad, dark thoughts.
The deepest feelings inside your heart, written with passion, Cinta and depth as well will make puisi blazing.

puisi is meant to flow as the hati, tengah-tengah beats, anda cannot follow a drum if anda do not beat one yourself. puisi has a soul, it thrives only if anda thrive.

well puisi doesnt have to necesssarily have a concrete Penulisan style. u seem like u write in a stream of conciousness, which is good. some of the best thoughts come out that way. the people that tell u that u arent really poet becuse u dont have deeper meaning are wrong. poems can be straightforward as well as abstract. u can try to write with deeper meaning but i say just stick to the way u feel most comfortable.