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Can somone help me!!!!!?????????!!!!!! Please??????????

Is this a good prologue?????
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I watched a deer bound through the trees. I was about to turn and leave when I saw somone, atau something crouching in the bushes. I walked a bit closer. He looked like an adult but he wasn't much bigger then me. He had long blond hair and bright big blue eyes. Then I saw something odd. His ears were pointed. And they weren't just slightly pointed. Like an elf's. I stepped closer and he darted away through the trees.

Well, it's got an elf in it, so AWESOME!!!!

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Weasel1999 said:

I take it this is just the start of the prologue? If so it's good. Could anda read my story and tell me what anda think? Thnx

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I take it this is just the start of the prologue? If so it's good. Could anda read my story and tell me what anda think? Thnx

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It's good, too! I read it. :D

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Yea I'll read it!

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thnx :)

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MovieManiac95 said:

Yeah I like it :) I won't be a grammar nazi atau any such thing.

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Thanks!

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I think to further assist, we need a bit more. When anda add more, it'll be easier to see if where it's headed is a good idea.

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Ok. I'll try 2 add more.

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Sylvia_Puffin said:

It's good, sis. Though how come the elf looks exactly like Legolas? :D

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Because that's how I imagine elves.

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Oh. Okay. :)

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boytoy_84 said:

I think it sounds interesting. :)

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Thanks!

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You're welcome. :)

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tinkerbell66799 said:

I've got 3 words for ya.
THAT.
WAS.
AWESOME!!!!!!!!

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Thanks!!!:D

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