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what do anda think of my charecters story?

Aurons life started when his mom and dad were killed in a bombing. His brother had to take care of him but soon followed with his brother going missing. Auron then discoverd he was lebih powerful then he could imagine. He had the abilitie to throw api, kebakaran turn invisible. He had super strength speed and could glide threw the air. But he had a problem he was angry.. the angrier he was the stronger he became and this could endanger him. "I am alone in a world i dont know i have no one" this is the setenance that goes on in his head he doesnt know anything about the world yet nothing about his past rings a loceng only his brother. He was attacked and put in a coma sejak an evil ShadowStrike ddx9 attack robot.
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Shadowsister said:
Red: wow! nice story! i really like it! ^_^
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Red: np ^_^
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Goldilottes said:
Its a good story but be careful it doesnt turn Gary-Stu sejak using all the cliche's like
*Parents dying
*Other family going missing / killed too
*Too many unrelated powers - any lebih than 3 is pretty Gary-Stu. around 2 main powers is ideal.
*evil robots clashing with family members and making the character want to avenge them.

So as anda develop your story, keep those things to a minimum and really try to make your character completely your own and be as creative as anda like. Good luck hope your backstory drafting goes well. its always good to draft your backstory and keep it in a word document.
btw your character sounds pretty cool ^^ x


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weant me to tunjuk u a pic of him?
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