Sonic peminat Characters Article: AN EXAMPLE OF A MARY-SUE

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posted by gyrothehedgehog

NAME: orange the Hedgehog
GENDER: Male
POWERS: He can control fire, he can control ice, he can control electricity, he can control earth, he has super-speed, he can fly, he is super-strong and he is invincible
GIRLFRIENDS: Every girl in the series
LOOKS: An orange hedgehog with black eyes
BACKSTORY: His hometown was destroyed sejak Eggman so now he wants revenge on him
SUPER FORM: His super form is darker orange and he still has black eyes and ALL THE POWERS IN THE WORLD!!!OMG!!
HYPER FORM: His hyper form is exactly like his Super Form except he is neon orange
DARKSPINE FORM: His super form with white stripes and no pupils
DARK FORM: The same as his Darkspine form
WEREHOG FORM: He is exactly like Sonics’ except orange

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BlazeFan9 u meen gary stu

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Chris the Mechahog, the Failed Project (Chapter 1) Project: Ultimate Life Form

posted by ripperoo1

An early interpratation of Chris.

Shadow was walking through the ruins of Ark. He coughed in the debree. He had a flashback of Maria. He sniffed. He looked at a broken panel. It had a picture of a blob with a head and tiny writing. He remembered that from when the Ark was invaded with the Artifical Chaos. Then he looked at something not that familiar. It was a giant capsule with a few cracks in it and a body. It had a green liquid inside. "What's this?" Shadow said. He punched the capsule open. The liquid poured out. Shadow picked up a stick and poked the body. "Ha. Squishy." He continued poking at him. "SQUISHY SQUISHY SQUISHY!"...

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Aftermath (Chapter 7) Attack of the Xary- Stus!! (Part 1)

posted by ripperoo1

"How I did I get this new outfit? Well, I'm keeping it." Tak walked sejak and said, "Where'd anda get that?" Tak said. "I really don't know..." Zim said. He walked outside. He saw a flag. It had an M on the left side, an X in the middle, and a G on the right. "Huh." He said. He saw a strange creature that looked like a menyeberang, cross between a hedgehog, a cow, a cat, an elephant, and a monkey. He had a wristband on his arm with the same sign that was on the flag. "My name is Stuler! Don't anda just Cinta me? sertai the Gary/Mary- Stu army!" He said. A group of people ran up behind Stuler and gave a strange...

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Aftermath (Chapter 6) Zim's strange dream. (part 3)

posted by ripperoo1

He was suddenly transported. He still had his cool clothes on, though. He was walking. It was pitch black. "That could've been cool." He berkata to himself. "NESS.... NEEESSSSSS.......NNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS....... Oh, wait, I be doin' it wrong. ZIM....ZIMMMM.... ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZIIIIIIIIIIMMMMMMMMM....." He heard. It was echoey. It sounded like Gir. He started to hear strange music, no, not the giygas theme. Instead he heard "Levan Polka." He suddenly saw a red mist swirling all around him. He saw a slightly blurred Gir's face in it. "Gir?" He said. "I AM GIRGAS!! Girgas.... feels........

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"I am Bluebell" Chapter 1~ Never ending runs...

posted by cookiemaster

Your not ment to be here. Vector mumbled, as he was walking around Bluebell, who was about the age of 7 atau 9, Very young for her to be working at a consentration camp. Bluebell, anda need to get outta here..and fast.[b] He then drops a bag on her lap, she looks up. [b]"But, Vector.." She berkata softly. I don't really know where to go... and if anda told me, I'd forget... Vector then takes out a map of mobius, telling her where she should go, Bluebell nodded and stood up. She then looked at Vector, she didn't know why she berkata it, but she asked. I'd like some soap, please... There was silence for...

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The Adventure Of Midnight Stormcloud and Platinum Silverburst part 1

posted by beepboop

Midnight Stormcloud

(Midnight Just Got Up)
Midnight:It's my birthday!Im finally 10!
Platinum:Can I come in?
Midnight:Sure!Come on in Platinum!
Platinum:Happy Birthday!
Midnight:Thanks!
Platinum:For your present It's something I couldnt wrap...
Midnight:Thats okay what is it?
Platinum:I found out the location of a Chaos Emerald!
Midnight:OMG!
Platinum:For your birthday,we are going to get the Chaos zamrud, emerald together!
Midnight:Awesome!Thank You!
Platinum:Im your bff.It's my job.
(Downstairs)
Midnight:Mom,Dad?
Midnight's Mom:What is it?
Midnight:Platinum is going to take me to get a Chaos Emerald!Can I go?
Midnight's Mom:I dont know?What do anda think hun?
Midnight's Dad:She can go I trust Platinum.
Midnight and Platinum:YAY!
Then Platinum and Midnight had set out on their adventure for the Chaos Emerald.
The End I HOPE anda LIKED IT!
PLEASE READ PART 2!

Platinum Silverburst

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Ragnarok 2: Strong as Glass

posted by thetacoman

The hole was dark.
Estelle's body had been ripped limb from limb, and strewn around the area.
And even if she could't see anything, she could tell.
It was dark.
Then Estell found another thing out.
Some liquid as pouring around her.
Warm, beautiful liquid.
The most beaurtiful shade of red.
***
The Gaurdian lay on the sreet, his blood at the foot of the altar, with Seth standing over him, Singing louder the battle hymn.
And it was working
***
The liquid flowed between Estelle's wounds, slowly repairing the damage done, slowly pulling her together.
And she could tell.
She was the most beautiful shade of red....

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.:The Wrath of the Glass Sword: Chapter 2 ~ The Loveliest Shade of Red:.

posted by PhoenixRoyale

Looking out toward the streets, Ferricus sighed of frustration, and regret. He regret the fact that he mocked all the many people that had no money in the sebelumnya years…It seemed that Karma had bitten back, and his sister, Midasu, created some foreshadowing on his future. He still remembered the quote that she said, even though he was too arrogant and narcissistic to even care:
“You won’t stay rich forever, Ferricus. anda need to stop mocking others for what they don’t have themselves. This may happen to you, as well, one day.”
And so...

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A Prophecy in My Dreams Chapter 1

posted by silvershady

This is my first fan-fiction about my peminat character, so please dont leave any mean komen-komen but be sure to let me know if anda are anticipating the seterusnya chapter! Enjoy!

Name: Rocha the Bat
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Colour: Silvery-black bulu with a white streak down her back. She has tan coloured skin and black wings.
Her wings are an unusual shape and she has grey eyes. She wears a white tube-top with a grey strap around the bottom and a pair of short white shorts with a grey tali pinggang and grey straps around the legs. She doesn't wear any gloves but there are long grey straps wrapped around her wrists....

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Depressed Herat episode 5 part 3

posted by NickleBackFan

While Bullet is still pondering about his future, Dark api, kebakaran flys in the room. She stops and sits close to him. "Hiya cutie and cutier." She says in a cheerful tone. Bullet leans back in shock. He looks at her up and down. She is wearing blue dress with a blue bow and blue boots?! She reachs down and scatchs P-Do tummy. "Why don't i make anda two some pie?" she said. "Heh no thanks. hmm Dark api, kebakaran anda seem alot nicer today." Bullet berkata uncomfountly. Just then Dark api, kebakaran grabbed him sejak the neck and pulled him close to her face. "Let's get one thing stairght i am only like this becuse Ghost dared...

Never Ending Story- Ch1 - Conner's Story

posted by DaylightBeauty

(WOAH WAT. :U Yes i'm bored. So all the smart peeps in TGOL get a story. TAKE THAT BROTHER.)

Conner's POV:

I've never liked stories, much less one's like this.

People look down at me, but what they see is so little. I

may be eleven, but I know lebih then you'll ever

understand. But before I tell anda my tell, listen close, and

take my Nasihat sejak heart. Don't trust him. Don't trust

Drake....

It all started one hot day, my father had come

back from the bank. But I felt something wrong. Very

wrong. My father was always a calm guy, but today,

he had the most worried face I've ever seen.

"Hey, dad....what's...

SFC 2023

added by AmbiDev45

Source: 05/26/2023

What bothers me about Mary-Sues

posted by CrescentHedgie

hei guys! Long time no post! Anyway... here, I'm gonna talk about a particular subject that has been bothering me for the longest time. And that would be... mary-sues. Note: If anda yourself have a mary-sue/gary stu character, make sure anda read this please. Maybe anda can learn something. Let's do this!

So... if anyone here doesn't know already, a mary-sue is, and I quote directly from Urban Dictionary, A mary-sue "is usually written sejak a beginning author. Often, the Mary Sue is a self-insert with a few "improvements" (ex. better body, lebih popular, etc). The Mary Sue character is almost always...

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MTL series run-through

posted by Mapware3640

This is a very quick run-through of all the canon stuff on the MTL series for those who wish to know the respective characters and there place in the story.

The beginning...

MTL's story starts being built on a floating angkasa base,it was once a chunk of mobius however the angkasa tyrant,Geno blew up mobius for it housed a power within the planet to gift Geno full control over the universe,Geno the attempt to attack the angkasa base learning a remain piece of mobius rare power exist on it,MTL's creator,who is usually referred to as "Gearsmo" placed the rare power piece inside MTL.but before we explain...

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Blood's Past Chapter 3

posted by ShadowWolf337

Blood's Past
Chapter three
A Strange Event
(I guess I now have to call Miles, Blood)
Three years later...
"Dad I don't know if anda can hear me but yesterday was Zoey's and my birthday we're both thirteen come on Dad anda can fight this..." Blood said, "Im sorry visiting hours are done anda will have to leave" berkata one of the nurses "give me a second, Dad I Cinta anda please just wake up, okay Im leaving" Blood walks out the hospital, Zoey walks up to Blood "Visiting Dad?" she berkata "yeah still nothing" Blood's left hand electrifys then stops "okay what was that?" he looks at his hand "Weird"

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LGIaS Pt.4 Nameless (Lost and Found)

posted by zutaradragon

“What is it u r in this whole world...in ur eyes...? close ur eyes and think about it 4 a bit...” 1 of the 1st soalan he asked me...because I was nameless...both me and my twin sister. Should I start bak a bit farther...? Fine...let's...we'll come bak 2 that....
We'll start from the begining then...we basicly grew up in WWIII. Mom and Dad fought constantly. We grew up in du hud, hood in the Big Apple. That's NYC 4 those who don't kno. Some1 berkata the only thing that can save us all now is sencitivity and compastion....they keep pushing freedom at us but didn't leave...

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Prolouge for my story [repost]

posted by Caloria

My hati, tengah-tengah rate was untellable. All I can say is, it was fast. And I don't mean just as if anda finished a suspenseful movie atau anything like that. My hati, tengah-tengah was racing as if I just ran 10 heart-throbbing, unforgivable miles.
The man jerked his hand forward, palm up, inches away from my face. But it was fuzzy, considering he was standing on the shattered glass that was my glasses.
"I'm not gonna tell anda again," he growled at me angrily, panting between each word, "Give me that BOX. anda don't want to know what happens if anda don't put it in my hands this very minute!" His voice raised louder, word-by-word,...

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The Conflicts Arcane (Reboot) Chapter 3

posted by TakTheFox

Chapter Three:

“Talon? Alloooooooooooooooooo?” Rin called out. She was walking through the city junk, sarap Yard. Some employees were about and heard her. She quickly turned around a bit so that she could change her face to her cat-apparel, then looked back at the worker.

“You’re looking for someone?” The worker asked with a slightly worn out sigh.

“Um yeah,” Rin answered, “a friend of mine wanted to meet me here… is it okay if I look around? I- I won’t touch anything!”

“Um... well alright,” sejak the quick reply, Rin guessed the man was busy and eager to finish up, “just make...

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How I draw- Digitally.

posted by MephilesTheDark

hei guys, I super-bored and don't really know what to do, so I decided to make a digital drawing article. I would make a video but I don't have any software one would use for that, so... I'll just do it like this.

Before we get started, I'd like to introduce the reader to the preferable programs, although I'm sure one could improvise this tutorial into their own program.

The first one I'll use is called paint.net.

Paint.net is pretty much your typical XP MS Paint, but with a few extra features, such as layers, transparency, and some fancy effects. For this, we'll keep it pretty simple and only...

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Sonic bedroom

added by Taylortails

Me and my Friends as Furries

added by Magmashift

Source: Chriserony.Deviantart.com