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huraian

posted by sadiebugz00

This one, we were told to write a story about someone who was either bad atau good, but couldn't use any words related to those, i.e. Righteous, villainous. Let me know in the komen-komen what anda think she is!

She glared at me as I was circling her, observing her... ugliness. She had scraggly deep purple hair, ripped sweat pants, and a torn up heather gray t-shirt. "Look, dude," she said, she had clearly had enough of my observations. "I was just trying to save my family from that beast of a guy, Dr. Hatch. I saw the looks in their eyes as I was dragged away, gagged, sejak anda and stupid Hatch. I could see in their eyes that they were horrified, positively terrified about what might happen to me. I beg you, for my family's sake, to spare me and free me from Hatch. I have a life to live, people to save, and a family to love. Please don't take it all away from me so soon. After all, I am just 15."

Little did she know, I was on her side.........

Did anda like it? I hope anda did! What do anda think she is, good atau bad? Tell me in the comments!

rory2011 likes this

sadiebugz00 Sorry it's short. Most are going to be, as most are only one page in a composition book.

rory2011 I think she's good , cause bad people never love anyone but themself's , and she said that she did whatever she did cause she love her family and she has people to save , so I guess she's good

sadiebugz00 Yep! She is.

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Sneak Peak of My Book/Novel "Remembering You"--Chapter 1

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

Chapter 1
October, 1964

I lied awake on my bed.

I couldn’t sleep.

My mind was wandering, racing to different topics at the same time. I couldn’t stay on one subject in my mind for lebih than ten seconds. I was restless.

Just then, out of nowhere, I remembered something that I particularly didn’t want to remember. But I did anyway. It was something that I hated thinking about, and something that I thought about all the time. I got up, clad in only a pair of jeans, and walked over to my closet and turned on the light. I pulled down old, dusty boxes and yellowed papers off of the closet’s...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel bukit Chapter 17

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (17):
"Glad anda came dude" berkata Josh, "Yeah" replied Noah "Aren't anda three going to sit down atau wait to be invited?" asked Bonnie, Noah stalked away from Abbie and Leo, and settled himself seterusnya to Bonnie, Abbie and Leo sat in the two remaining chairs side sejak side, "Your Noah's sister Abbie right?" asked Josh, Abbie noticed that Bonnie and Josh weren't pale haired but there hair was deep golden blonde like their mother, "Yes, your Susie's cousin right?" she asked, "Yeah, I am do anda know her?" he answered with a ghost of a smile, "Yes, we go to the same school and she's in few of my...

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A Little Bit lebih Than Cinta (Part 1, Chapter 2)

posted by dragonsmemory

THE EDEN CHRONICLES

BOOK ONE: A LITTLE BIT lebih THAN LOVE

PART 1: TWERA AND THE PRINCE

Chapter 2

Twera sat on the ledge outside her cave, thinking. Like all dragons, she knewthe king's name. She had seen King Parthurnax on a few occasions. He was clearly noble and a great ruler. The prince was a mystery. As far as she knew, she had never even seen him. She didn't even know his name.

Twera looked off to the west, where an empty valley lay. No Naga had coaxed caves from the steep mountainsides there. Further in the distance, the palace scraped te clouds like a towered and turreted mountain. Few...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way

posted by Problematic129

*I am still debating on whether I should make this a story atau a short story, right now this is a short story, but if anda want it to be a full fledged story please komen so. Please don't copy and please read and review*
My name is Pamela Jones, but call me Pamela and meet my fist. Everyone calls me Pam, everyone, they know not to menyeberang, cross me atau anger me ever.
Well it’s not that I’m evil atau hot, it’s that I have a major anger issue. When I get angry, someone usually gets punched. My anger issue is what got me suspended for a week, I nearly knocked this kid out. After...

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The Succubus; Chapter 1

posted by wantadog

Chapter 1; Humans and Demons and Abominations.

Buzz. Buzz. Buzz.
Odessa blearily opened her eyes, that damn buzzing was going to drive her crazy! She sat up, expecting to see Arlon sitting in his throne, grinning from ear to ear at his power over her, but all she saw was a small meadow, a tiny pond, a few trees scattered around, and…metal bars? What was going on? If she was in the wilderness, there wouldn’t be metal bars. That means she must be…
A roar sounded to her left and her head snapped towards the sound. There, maybe 20 feet away, was a lion. The lion was small sejak any standard, but...

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Once Upon a Dream (song)

posted by hgfan5602

Once upon a dream
There was a world
Where everyone came together as one
Where they would sertai together and sing

Today
We share in the riches
We sertai together and sing
Of the amazing journey we've had
In our lives

No one would back away
In fear and cowardice,
No one would slink away
Everyone would be bold

We will be as one
On this beautiful earth,
While sharing our resources
We shall be together and sing

We are the world of destiny,
We are the people of the world,
And we do our very best,
To make this world brilliant

I have never seen a place
Where no one would
Be a traitor,
And they would hold hands and sing

We are...

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The Gypsy's Curse

posted by sawfan13

Young beautiful gypsy
Free and sweet
Never tunjuk negativity towards her
Or you'll have her curse
Falling in Cinta with her is okay
Only if anda never break her heart
Lovers have left her for dead
But now our little rama-rama, taman rama-rama has returned again
Spreading sickness and foulness in the air
Only to give the other gypsies fear of her
No longer branded a gypsy
She is now branded as an evil sorceress
Abandoned sejak her only family
Anger grows within her
Her happiness and freedom now faded
Has left our little rama-rama, taman rama-rama mean and jaded
No longer does she see beautiful colors
Her whole world is now all black
She still lives...

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Dreams Written In Ash (CHAPTER ONE- When The Light Ended)

posted by malmcd

Dreams Written In Ash (CHAPTER ONE- When The Light Ended)

This is to all my Friends on here who believe in me and believe in my dream’s. But one person who really helped me and has the same dream as me BeautifulBlaze atau Daniel,
Thank You...

My Dream

My dream is to make the world a better place.
For anda and me and the people to come.
I want peace in this world,
And love,
And harmony.
The world we live in now is curl and cool,
and filled with war.
It’s like we’re all on a wheel of all the angry,
thoughts and feeling’s.
A never ending and every winning
race of hate.
My dream is make the world brighter...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel bukit Chapter 10

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (10):
Abbie reached her bedroom door, and wrenched it open she stepped inside slammed the door shut and all of a sudden she let out a scream, on her katil sitting menyeberang, cross legged, a girl with with bloodstained blond hair, pale skin, wide blue eyes and she was wearing a bloodstained blue dress, there were shadows under her eyes and her lips were slightly purple, The ghost of Lily Gellar was sitting on Abbie's bed, "L-L-Lily" she stuttered, "She's a lier" replied Lily in a creepy half whisper, and she disappeared leaving Abbie swimming in confusion, Abbie walked to her katil and sat on her bed,...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel bukit (Chapters 1-9)

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (1):
She wlaked silently on her way utama from school passing green feilds and watching children running around and playing under the sun,even though it was sunny the wind was strong and cool "Hi Abbie" berkata a voice that came from her left , "Hey Leo" she replied turning her head to see him, "So what are anda up too?" he asked, "You can clearly see what i'm up to i'm going home" she replied smiling at him, "can I walk along with you?" Leo berkata raking a hand in his Dirty blonde hair, "Sure" replied Abbie still smiling, and they both continued their journey in silence, when Abbie noticed...

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.15 and 16

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the komen-komen :) Please read and review and please don't copy*
Chapter 15
    You’re a Pyke, darling, not a Connor
    There he was Marcus Pyke, not Connor, and there was one picture of him, and it was my father. Which meant he used to be Marcus Pike, not Connor. But that means he must’ve changed his name, and mom kept the same one.
    Why?
    Your guess is as good as mine.
    There was another picture, way at the bottom, it was of father, my mom, a little...

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Broken Glass (song)

posted by hgfan5602

Now that anda left me....
My soul is crying
Out to the world
Above me.

Now that anda left me....
I couldn't figure out
How to go on with life
And I stayed right on....
With my despair.

Now that anda left me....
anda broke my heart,
And now it's covered in broken glass,
Oh broken glass......

It's time to alih on now...
But I can't help feeling the tragedy
Of that lonesome night...
How the world jeered at me.

The world hurt me.
There's no lebih hope left,
So face the truth.
I am a piece of broken glass,
Shimmering in the dark and dreary night

My hati, tengah-tengah broke
When it felt like the end of the world...
And boy, was it the end of the world.
I was broken glass,
And nobody seemed to care about me.

I am broken glass.
I am heartbroken.
I am...
No more.

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.12

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the komen-komen :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 12
    A guilty red head’s confession
    “Look, I just wanted to thank you, for everything.” Cali said, not looking me in the eye. “I just… Lost control, I guess.”
    I nodded, hugging her. “It’ll be okay.”
    She nodded and then headed off to the buses, I was about to follow until I heard a voice calling my name. I turned around, thinking it was Azerien but surprised to see America running towards me.
    “Summer!...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.28

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 28
        Everyone loves Friday
    I don’t know if Meredith was angry with the cafeteria’s outburst, I haven’t talked to her since that incident, not that we talked much. Sometimes I’d walk past and she’d give me the normal sweet yet lethal look she always did. She’s been skipping some class, one time when she skipped gym some girl’s in the locker room were talking about how vicious she’s gotten. Then one berkata how Grey totally rejected her and she isn’t happy.
    But...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.8

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
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    Terry
    “Yes, it was very bizarre, indeed, Michael. In the middle of the day, in the town of Spear Springs, a horrible storm occurs, nearly knocking people off their feet, it came out of nowhere ad stopped just as abruptly. And if that’s not weird, in a neighborhood of that same town all the windows of the houses on the block smashed at the same time! It’s really…” I zoned out on what the woman was saying.
    It wasn’t bizarre at all, the storm came from the book, again. Zaria, Alex, Iris,...

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Power of Cinta (poem)

posted by hgfan5602

The power of love,
It can take anda to many places,
And it will bring
Many good things to this world

The power of love
It will bring many people together
We will bond
And the world will get together

The greatest minds will form
And we will live in unity
Cinta is certainly
A powerful object

Cinta
Is amazing,
For it can do anything possible,
But it can be very hurtful.

Love
Can bring all the people
Of the world together,
Together once at last

The power of love
Can never be explained,
For it is amazing
Exactly because of that.

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The Bandanna Twins Chapter 2

posted by tinaloo

A/N: here's chapter 2 of my story

So for 8 years the Twins where kept inside there utama with no connection to the outside world. They had learned How to control there powers when they where 8. They kept on getting stronger each hari that they practiced, they practiced 2 times a week.

The now 12 tahun old girl sighed looking out the window, she wished one hari that she could go outside and meet people her own Age.

"What's wrong?" she turned around to see her brother Flame. "nothing, its just I want to go out there." her brother sighed as well "yeah me to, I want to see this land and the people. Frosta...

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The 2nd greatest live story ever, Prologue

posted by 1999jacko

This is my first attempt at a romance so here it goes

Craig Smith sat in his moms car waiting for her to stop rambling on about if he has everything ready for his last tahun in Ruckletin high and how he should act," and anda need to act responsible for the kids coming up into the school and don't get in trouble as much as last year, and- and I'll miss anda web I alih today so give me a big hug before anda go, okay," tears already welling up in her eyes as the car came to a stop outside the school gates. Craig looked up at his teary mom and hugged her before sayiń," I'll miss anda to mom and I'll...

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The keeper of the forbidden light chapter 3

posted by Annabeth788594

As we walked down a long never-ending hallway. I decided I wanted answers. So where are we going I asked Blake? Do anda want to stay in that white room? No I replied. We came to a stop. And he handed me a key. Then here we are this is where anda will be staying. Go ahead do the honors.
I put the key in the lock and twisted it. Grabbed the handle and opened the door. I am not going to lie the room was beyond cool. First off it was huge like two apartments big. And there was a king-sized bed, a walk in closest full of clothes and a dapur filled with snacks. But what I found odd was half of it...

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The keeper of the forbidden light chapter 2

posted by Annabeth788594

I peaked though the crack and saw nothing but blackness. Carefully I lifted the led and managed to slide it sideways I stood up. I swung my legs over the edge and hopped down. Ok Alex now all I have to do is find out where I am sneak out without the nut job that kid napped me knowing. I started to walk off when I thought about the create. When they see it open they will know I escaped. I quickly ran back and slide the led shut. Hopefully they won’t notice me gone and I will have lebih time. With the led perfectly back on the way it was. I started to walk away again when I heard voices. Are...