Yes finally chapter one is up its kinda long for me so hope anda like it and please review ood and bad komen-komen will be excepted because i'd like to know what i can improve!! thank you
Chapter 1- The long and awaited call
"Hello?" i answered immediately.
"Hi is this pizza Hut?" an unfamiliar voice replied.
I groaned, "NO! I'm waiting for an important phone call!" I yelled which now I feel bad for now.
"Sorry." and I hung up.
"Gosh people are just ignorant these days." I complained to the rest of the band.
"Yeah, I think people found out our numbers and do this on purpose because I’ve gotten two already today for pizza.” Jeremy said.
“Right, ignorant.” I said.
Suddenly Jeremy’s house phone rang and he ran to answer it, ”Hello?” he asked. There was a slight pause and his eyes got all wide and he smiled.
“Yes we’ll be there…thank anda so much…goodbye.”
I ran over to him, “Yes, no, maybe so?” I squealed.
All of a sudden Zac burst out laughing.
“What?” everyone berkata in unison.
“You know what someone berkata to me yesterday when they called for Papa Johns and anda know what I said," Zac berkata Still laughing.
"No we don't Zac." I berkata bored.
"I'm a-gonna Papa your butt if anda keep calling!" Zac berkata and fell off his chair laughing at his 'joke'.
I finally laughed because I knew it was funny, ”Okay that’s enough. So Jeremy do we have the gig atau not?” I asked.
The rest of us stood up and stared at him.
He looked at us nervously but finally screamed, “we got the gig and a private plane is coming to get us at 8:00 p.m.”
As soon as Jeremy berkata 8:00 p.m. I ran outside to my Cobalt and jumped in and sped down the road to my house as fast as I could. I was surprised at how fast I was going. It was almost 90 M.P.H.
I reached my house in less than two minutes. I ran into my house and up to my room.
My sister followed me up and asked, “Where are anda going this time?”
I was too out of breath to answer right now so all I got out was, “It-a-ly”
She smiled. I knew she was going to ask to come.
“No” I said.
She growled something and walked out of the room.
“Maybe anda can come when we’re lebih close to utama and not gone for as long.” I called after her.
I looked at the clock, it was already 6:45p.m. I had to get back to Jeremy’s
When I was done at 7:00p.m., I rushed out side with my four suitcases after saying goodbye to my family and put them in my batang and headed back to Jeremy’s.
When I got there, Mrs. Farro had her giant twelve passenger van for only the five of us to take us to the airport. I pulled into the driveway seterusnya to her and popped my batang she walked over to it and helped put mine in he back of the van.
Surprisingly the boys already had all the band equipment in the back. Normally I would have to do all that.
I ran over to the door and jumped in with the boys in the backseats and pulled out my phone to check the time and it was 7:40.
“Hey we have like 20 minutes, do anda think we’ll make it?” I asked scared we wouldn’t.
“It’s a private plane just for us and the owners children will be on there…I think.” Zac said.
“Yeah Zac, only there children, which I think are Jane and Alec, are going to be on. Well the pilots too but they aren’t going to even talk to us except to put our kerusi, tempat duduk belts on.” Jeremy said.
Suddenly the car came to a stop and I heard planes taking off and landing.
I looked around and saw one thing out of place. One of the planes were black with no Penulisan on it. All the other planes were white and had a city names and ‘continental airlines’ atau something else.
“I’m guessing the black one is ours.” I berkata quietly.
“Well the plane number is 6676...so let’s check first.” Jeremy said.
“I’ll go inside and check.” Mrs. Farro said. I forgot she was even here.
She got out and headed toward the directory terminal.
About ten long minit later she came back and said, “You still have to go through security but that is the plane.”
I hopped out of the car and almost bumped into a little girl that had the most perfect face, but really pale skin.
“Oh sorry.” I berkata and took a step back, a little frightened sejak her appearance.
“No that’s okay and security wont be necessary. I’m Jane sejak the way, anda must be Hayley?” she asked.
“Yes, as a matter of fact I am.” I replied and everyone else came out of the van. “Umm… this is Jeremy, Taylor, Josh, and Zac.” I berkata while pointing to each one when I berkata there names.
A young, but breathtakingly beautiful boy walked over to stand seterusnya to Jane. He looked about the same age as her.
I assumed he was Alec.
“Hello Paramore. I am Alec. My father Aro is waiting, I think we should leave. Just drive your van over to out plane and we can put anda things in and get going.” he said.
They walked toward the plane and I jumped into the van.
When we got there after what seemed like hours with Mrs. Farro’s cautious driving, Jane, Alec, and two other men walked over to the batang and pulled out all the suitcases and Muzik equipment.
“Oh be careful with the equipment please.” I told them.
They nodded and started taking to the luggage area of the plane.
Jane walked over to me and said, “I very much adore your music.” and pulled me to the door and up the stairs, which I almost fell at the speed she was walking.
It was very warm here, but Jane was wearing heavy gloves, “It isn’t cold in Italy, is it?” I asked when she noticed me looking at them.
She laughed, ”No I thought it was cold here!” she looked at her brother.
We walked over to the sitting area and I picked a kerusi, tempat duduk seterusnya to the window.
Jane sat right seterusnya to me.
“So do anda have any particular song anda want us to play?” I asked trying to make conversation after an awkward silence.
“Umm can anda still play some of your old demos?” Jane asked.
“That depends which ones.” I replied.
“Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) and My Hero.” she replied.
“Lovesick Melody is good but I’m not sure about My Hero. We haven’t sung that in like 2 years it was one of our first songs.”
“Well anda have time to practice your not playing until 6:00 p.m. tomorrow. This is a twelve jam flight.”
“Okay we’ll try to get them in with the ones we have now.”
“What’s your set senarai now?” Jane asked?
I pulled out a piece of paper from my carry-on and said, “Fences, Born For This, We are Broken, That’s What anda Get, Decode, Decoy, and I Caught Myself.” I replied.
“Well it will only make it like 10 lebih minutes, and if it’d too ling anda can take one out.” Jane berkata and stood up.
I haven’t even realized ho long we’ve been talking. It was already 11:30 p.m. I yawned.
“You look tired, I’ll let anda get some sleep for tomorrow.” Jane berkata quietly and reached up to get a bantal and blanket.
I looked around and saw everyone else was sleeping except for Jane and Alec.
I laid my head on the bantal and closed my eyes.
I was just thinking about those songs and about today’s events. I soon drifted into sleep while Singing Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) in my head.
Chapter 1- The long and awaited call
"Hello?" i answered immediately.
"Hi is this pizza Hut?" an unfamiliar voice replied.
I groaned, "NO! I'm waiting for an important phone call!" I yelled which now I feel bad for now.
"Sorry." and I hung up.
"Gosh people are just ignorant these days." I complained to the rest of the band.
"Yeah, I think people found out our numbers and do this on purpose because I’ve gotten two already today for pizza.” Jeremy said.
“Right, ignorant.” I said.
Suddenly Jeremy’s house phone rang and he ran to answer it, ”Hello?” he asked. There was a slight pause and his eyes got all wide and he smiled.
“Yes we’ll be there…thank anda so much…goodbye.”
I ran over to him, “Yes, no, maybe so?” I squealed.
All of a sudden Zac burst out laughing.
“What?” everyone berkata in unison.
“You know what someone berkata to me yesterday when they called for Papa Johns and anda know what I said," Zac berkata Still laughing.
"No we don't Zac." I berkata bored.
"I'm a-gonna Papa your butt if anda keep calling!" Zac berkata and fell off his chair laughing at his 'joke'.
I finally laughed because I knew it was funny, ”Okay that’s enough. So Jeremy do we have the gig atau not?” I asked.
The rest of us stood up and stared at him.
He looked at us nervously but finally screamed, “we got the gig and a private plane is coming to get us at 8:00 p.m.”
As soon as Jeremy berkata 8:00 p.m. I ran outside to my Cobalt and jumped in and sped down the road to my house as fast as I could. I was surprised at how fast I was going. It was almost 90 M.P.H.
I reached my house in less than two minutes. I ran into my house and up to my room.
My sister followed me up and asked, “Where are anda going this time?”
I was too out of breath to answer right now so all I got out was, “It-a-ly”
She smiled. I knew she was going to ask to come.
“No” I said.
She growled something and walked out of the room.
“Maybe anda can come when we’re lebih close to utama and not gone for as long.” I called after her.
I looked at the clock, it was already 6:45p.m. I had to get back to Jeremy’s
When I was done at 7:00p.m., I rushed out side with my four suitcases after saying goodbye to my family and put them in my batang and headed back to Jeremy’s.
When I got there, Mrs. Farro had her giant twelve passenger van for only the five of us to take us to the airport. I pulled into the driveway seterusnya to her and popped my batang she walked over to it and helped put mine in he back of the van.
Surprisingly the boys already had all the band equipment in the back. Normally I would have to do all that.
I ran over to the door and jumped in with the boys in the backseats and pulled out my phone to check the time and it was 7:40.
“Hey we have like 20 minutes, do anda think we’ll make it?” I asked scared we wouldn’t.
“It’s a private plane just for us and the owners children will be on there…I think.” Zac said.
“Yeah Zac, only there children, which I think are Jane and Alec, are going to be on. Well the pilots too but they aren’t going to even talk to us except to put our kerusi, tempat duduk belts on.” Jeremy said.
Suddenly the car came to a stop and I heard planes taking off and landing.
I looked around and saw one thing out of place. One of the planes were black with no Penulisan on it. All the other planes were white and had a city names and ‘continental airlines’ atau something else.
“I’m guessing the black one is ours.” I berkata quietly.
“Well the plane number is 6676...so let’s check first.” Jeremy said.
“I’ll go inside and check.” Mrs. Farro said. I forgot she was even here.
She got out and headed toward the directory terminal.
About ten long minit later she came back and said, “You still have to go through security but that is the plane.”
I hopped out of the car and almost bumped into a little girl that had the most perfect face, but really pale skin.
“Oh sorry.” I berkata and took a step back, a little frightened sejak her appearance.
“No that’s okay and security wont be necessary. I’m Jane sejak the way, anda must be Hayley?” she asked.
“Yes, as a matter of fact I am.” I replied and everyone else came out of the van. “Umm… this is Jeremy, Taylor, Josh, and Zac.” I berkata while pointing to each one when I berkata there names.
A young, but breathtakingly beautiful boy walked over to stand seterusnya to Jane. He looked about the same age as her.
I assumed he was Alec.
“Hello Paramore. I am Alec. My father Aro is waiting, I think we should leave. Just drive your van over to out plane and we can put anda things in and get going.” he said.
They walked toward the plane and I jumped into the van.
When we got there after what seemed like hours with Mrs. Farro’s cautious driving, Jane, Alec, and two other men walked over to the batang and pulled out all the suitcases and Muzik equipment.
“Oh be careful with the equipment please.” I told them.
They nodded and started taking to the luggage area of the plane.
Jane walked over to me and said, “I very much adore your music.” and pulled me to the door and up the stairs, which I almost fell at the speed she was walking.
It was very warm here, but Jane was wearing heavy gloves, “It isn’t cold in Italy, is it?” I asked when she noticed me looking at them.
She laughed, ”No I thought it was cold here!” she looked at her brother.
We walked over to the sitting area and I picked a kerusi, tempat duduk seterusnya to the window.
Jane sat right seterusnya to me.
“So do anda have any particular song anda want us to play?” I asked trying to make conversation after an awkward silence.
“Umm can anda still play some of your old demos?” Jane asked.
“That depends which ones.” I replied.
“Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) and My Hero.” she replied.
“Lovesick Melody is good but I’m not sure about My Hero. We haven’t sung that in like 2 years it was one of our first songs.”
“Well anda have time to practice your not playing until 6:00 p.m. tomorrow. This is a twelve jam flight.”
“Okay we’ll try to get them in with the ones we have now.”
“What’s your set senarai now?” Jane asked?
I pulled out a piece of paper from my carry-on and said, “Fences, Born For This, We are Broken, That’s What anda Get, Decode, Decoy, and I Caught Myself.” I replied.
“Well it will only make it like 10 lebih minutes, and if it’d too ling anda can take one out.” Jane berkata and stood up.
I haven’t even realized ho long we’ve been talking. It was already 11:30 p.m. I yawned.
“You look tired, I’ll let anda get some sleep for tomorrow.” Jane berkata quietly and reached up to get a bantal and blanket.
I looked around and saw everyone else was sleeping except for Jane and Alec.
I laid my head on the bantal and closed my eyes.
I was just thinking about those songs and about today’s events. I soon drifted into sleep while Singing Stop This Song (Lovesick Melody) in my head.
Sookie and Bill
Honestly, if anda were Stephanie Meyer, and anda were Penulisan Breaking Dawn as we speak, how would anda write it, (write what anda really think will happen in the book) these things for example:
bella and edward get married
bella becomes a vampire
jacob comes back and splits bella and edward up forever, and he gets bella
fight between edward and jacob
jacob imprinting...
things like that
except in long details
LOL
its ok to get creative but keep to what anda think will really happen. not what anda hope but what anda think
i wonder how many people will say the same thing
i wonder what anda think.....
bella and edward get married
bella becomes a vampire
jacob comes back and splits bella and edward up forever, and he gets bella
fight between edward and jacob
jacob imprinting...
things like that
except in long details
LOL
its ok to get creative but keep to what anda think will really happen. not what anda hope but what anda think
i wonder how many people will say the same thing
i wonder what anda think.....
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i hope yOu like it!!!
i didn't know how my life will be has vampire, how things should work with Charlie and Mom, keeping my self away from then is torturing my self.
i felt like i'm trapped without a exit
the only thing thatr keep me strong is my family
Edward and Rennesme, nOw that they are not in mOre danger i feel lebih in peace.
But what will i shOuld tell charlie when the time to alih arrive?
cangkul, hoe he react to this, i think that he already know what we really are, but he is too scared to berkata it atau just think about it.
But what i really know right now is that we are selamat, peti deposit keselamatan and will start our Happy Ever After.
I think!!!!
i hope yOu like it!!!
i didn't know how my life will be has vampire, how things should work with Charlie and Mom, keeping my self away from then is torturing my self.
i felt like i'm trapped without a exit
the only thing thatr keep me strong is my family
Edward and Rennesme, nOw that they are not in mOre danger i feel lebih in peace.
But what will i shOuld tell charlie when the time to alih arrive?
cangkul, hoe he react to this, i think that he already know what we really are, but he is too scared to berkata it atau just think about it.
But what i really know right now is that we are selamat, peti deposit keselamatan and will start our Happy Ever After.
I think!!!!
Awesomeness
im going to put an introduction to this one up today. it has to do with twilight and a band called Paramore(my two fav things-paramore and twilight)most of my Friends like my Penulisan but when i do post i would like some criticizing komen-komen for me to improve with.
Thanks
<3 Danie
Awesomeness x2
The 22-year-old British actor and his blockbuster film, Twilight, are taking center stage in the issue. The movie made over $70 million at the box office opening weekend - a record for director Catherine Hardwicke, who is now the only female director in history to have a film gross that high.
As Kristen Stewart and Robert take a mini-break for the Thanksgiving holiday, Robert is menunjukkan a bit of the rebel in him. He shared, “‘I cannot wait to cut my hair. It’s so annoying! I was at a foto shoot the other day, and people were saying, ‘They say we can’t touch your hair. anda have trademarked hair!’ No, I don’t.”
Be sure to pick up your own copy of EW this weekend!
Bigger than the latest Indiana Jones. Bigger than the biggest James Bond. That's how big Twilight was yesterday.
The $37 million vampire flick, expected to have a killer opening day, had a monster opening day, grossing an estimated $35 million, Exhibitor Relations reported. One-fifth of that gross, atau $7 million, came from Friday midnight screenings.
The box-office tracking firm berkata a $75 million Friday-Sunday gross was now a possibility. Going into Friday, $60 million was considered the movie's best-case scenario.
When the counting's done, Twilight's Friday take may rank as the 14th atau 15th biggest opener of all time, having surpassed the debuts of Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull ($25 million) and Quantum of Solace ($27 million), to name two baru-baru ini blockbusters.
Bolt, the animated talking-dog movie, was curbed sejak Twilight, grossing $7 million on Friday, Exhibitor Relations said.
ok, i know she loves both but its probably ovious who she loves more, but im not sure is it edward atau jacob.
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she berkata when edward asked her,
" are anda sure anda made the right choice, i have never seen anda in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she berkata when edward asked her,
" are anda sure anda made the right choice, i have never seen anda in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better
