All of a sudden the pain began too decrease in my limbs but the burning was increasing at my heart. My hati, tengah-tengah was beating so fast it should have been impossible for me to hear it. I was glad. I was glad because usually in films when a persons hati, tengah-tengah would beat faster they would be about to die, i would take death cheerfully if it meant the pain was going to end. The heat was increasing so rapidly in my hati, tengah-tengah ifelt like it was taking its like it would make me burn until nothing was left of me was charcoal. Then all of a sudden my hati, tengah-tengah stopped. My hati, tengah-tengah had stopped but i was not dead. Well i was still breathing atleast was i in heaven atau hell? that didn't seem likely as i could still hear the voices. The voices. I could hear them lebih clearly now.
As i began to listen harder someone touched my hand.
"hello my name is charro" it was the boy, the charming boy. I opened my eyes i felt like i was a blind man seeing for the first time. i could see everything, it was like a dirty film had been lifted off my eyes.
"i'm so sorry, so sorry for doing this to you, for making anda one of us for making anda a Vampire, whats your name, i'm sorry putting anda through this" he seemed to genuinely mean what he was saying, but not because he was charming atau genuine but because it was the obvious truth. I felt like a lightbulb had just been turned on inside my head, how many times had my fiance warned me about the red eyed Vampires how they were evil not like his Friends the cullens with there strange emas brown eyes.
"Cora,my name is cora and if your so sorry then why did anda do this?" i asked, did he even realise how much of my life he'd destroyed my fiance,seth, was happy to be Friends with Vampires but how would he feel about marrying one...
"I understand that anda must hate me cora but anda can't go back to your normal life now, the thirst will control your instincts too much" he was looking at me as though i should have a stronger reaction to his words.
"well actually thats not this case because my fiance is a werewolf so i think he can take care of himself, and i'll just be a vegetarian like the cullens"i berkata feeling glad that i was no my fiance was no ordinary human.
"I'm Antonio, sorry but did anda just say the cullens?" the other male, antonio asked, but i wasn't listening my body had started to tingle the sensaation was not entirely painful but not pleasent either.
"Cora,are anda okay? your nose is bleeding!"a frantic voice berkata but it sounded distant.
"Cora, Cora"the voices started shouting voices full of panic.
to be continued...
As i began to listen harder someone touched my hand.
"hello my name is charro" it was the boy, the charming boy. I opened my eyes i felt like i was a blind man seeing for the first time. i could see everything, it was like a dirty film had been lifted off my eyes.
"i'm so sorry, so sorry for doing this to you, for making anda one of us for making anda a Vampire, whats your name, i'm sorry putting anda through this" he seemed to genuinely mean what he was saying, but not because he was charming atau genuine but because it was the obvious truth. I felt like a lightbulb had just been turned on inside my head, how many times had my fiance warned me about the red eyed Vampires how they were evil not like his Friends the cullens with there strange emas brown eyes.
"Cora,my name is cora and if your so sorry then why did anda do this?" i asked, did he even realise how much of my life he'd destroyed my fiance,seth, was happy to be Friends with Vampires but how would he feel about marrying one...
"I understand that anda must hate me cora but anda can't go back to your normal life now, the thirst will control your instincts too much" he was looking at me as though i should have a stronger reaction to his words.
"well actually thats not this case because my fiance is a werewolf so i think he can take care of himself, and i'll just be a vegetarian like the cullens"i berkata feeling glad that i was no my fiance was no ordinary human.
"I'm Antonio, sorry but did anda just say the cullens?" the other male, antonio asked, but i wasn't listening my body had started to tingle the sensaation was not entirely painful but not pleasent either.
"Cora,are anda okay? your nose is bleeding!"a frantic voice berkata but it sounded distant.
"Cora, Cora"the voices started shouting voices full of panic.
to be continued...
hei ... This is my first fanfiction :D so if its not good just give me some constructive critism to make it better. Thanks (:
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
My awesome 'other':
Edward anda are delicious,
I bet you'd be nutritious,
I reckon you'd be good to eat,
Quite juicy and quite sweet.
Tastier than any Chocolate cake,
With hunger, my belly aches,
In a totally non sexual way.
Ha ha ha ha don't take this seriously guys. I'm not weird, honest. But Edward would be good to eat. Not that I would know... Nothing rhymes with delicious, anda know... Except nutritious... So anyways, that's my latest bout of weirdness, I hope I've met my quota for the day.
Edward anda are delicious,
I bet you'd be nutritious,
I reckon you'd be good to eat,
Quite juicy and quite sweet.
Tastier than any Chocolate cake,
With hunger, my belly aches,
In a totally non sexual way.
Ha ha ha ha don't take this seriously guys. I'm not weird, honest. But Edward would be good to eat. Not that I would know... Nothing rhymes with delicious, anda know... Except nutritious... So anyways, that's my latest bout of weirdness, I hope I've met my quota for the day.
bella: edward we need to talk.................................................
edward: go ahead we have got all the time in the world.
bella: ok but i don't think your gunna like it.
edward: whats wrong
bella: its nothing really but i do have to say i don't Cinta anda and i never have. the only reason why i married anda was cuz anda have lots of money and cuz i wanted to be a vampire. now i have got that i don't need anda anymore.
Edward: don't leave me.
bella: i have to cuz jacobs waiting for me in the car.
edward: thats my car
bella: buy a new one
bella: i am also taking renesmee with me. goodby edward. and thanks for the car
edward:noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. not the car
bella: hu hum i berkata goodbuy edward
edward: o sorry goodbuy bella.
and so bella, renesmee and jacob lived happily ever after
edward: go ahead we have got all the time in the world.
bella: ok but i don't think your gunna like it.
edward: whats wrong
bella: its nothing really but i do have to say i don't Cinta anda and i never have. the only reason why i married anda was cuz anda have lots of money and cuz i wanted to be a vampire. now i have got that i don't need anda anymore.
Edward: don't leave me.
bella: i have to cuz jacobs waiting for me in the car.
edward: thats my car
bella: buy a new one
bella: i am also taking renesmee with me. goodby edward. and thanks for the car
edward:noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. not the car
bella: hu hum i berkata goodbuy edward
edward: o sorry goodbuy bella.
and so bella, renesmee and jacob lived happily ever after
10. Ask about Mike.
9. Ask about Eric.
8. Ask about Jacob.
7. Ask about Edward.
6. After asking about all these boys, inquire as to how much she is paying them, and where in the White Pages she looked for fake fan-boys.
5. When she complains about not being a vampire, throw glitter on her and claim she sparkles just like a vampire in the sun.
4. Ask if the thought of Edward biting her makes her… happy.
3. Say that since Edward is technically dead, she is into necrophilia. Tell her that is sick and wrong, and she should stop with her weird fetishes.
2. Tell her we all know about the real reason she married Edward – the honeymoon.
And the Number One way to annoy Bella Swan?
1. Tell her that anda and Jacob imprinted on each other, and are getting married. Tell her anda are pregnant, and will be with him forever. Videotape the reaction.
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9. Ask about Eric.
8. Ask about Jacob.
7. Ask about Edward.
6. After asking about all these boys, inquire as to how much she is paying them, and where in the White Pages she looked for fake fan-boys.
5. When she complains about not being a vampire, throw glitter on her and claim she sparkles just like a vampire in the sun.
4. Ask if the thought of Edward biting her makes her… happy.
3. Say that since Edward is technically dead, she is into necrophilia. Tell her that is sick and wrong, and she should stop with her weird fetishes.
2. Tell her we all know about the real reason she married Edward – the honeymoon.
And the Number One way to annoy Bella Swan?
1. Tell her that anda and Jacob imprinted on each other, and are getting married. Tell her anda are pregnant, and will be with him forever. Videotape the reaction.
Source: link