I am a budding screenplay writer and wanted to write a script for New Moon. For lots of reasons. Mainly, to satisfy myself in case the real movie is not what I think it should be
I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have telah diposkan it over there too.
here are pautan to my screenplay
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This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. anda will recognize many scenes I kept. anda will notice some things that I have combined. anda will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.
There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for it. anda will notice them.
This is my saat draft, so it’s not finalized. There will be typos and such. I plan on getting this to a third atau possible fourth draft, but I want to get opinions and see if I should go any further with this.
Some of the stuff was necessary in the screenplay. One scene in general I really wanted to get rid of, but my brain couldn't come up with anything else.
I left some things in the screenplay because I know some people would Cinta to read it and want a full out New Moon experience. If it was a real script, and the scenes were filmed, then the editor would just take it right out and put it in the deleted scenes section. anda could think of it like that.
It is long. Like over 2 hours long, if anda go according to the typical 1 page =1 minit rule. Some scenes do go sejak faster than others, so take that into account.
I know that some people will not like what I did with some scenes. But, I'm not going to please everyone. Which is why I am open to constructive criticism and look ke hadapan to your comments.
Again, this is a peminat made script. If anda want to share it with friends, atau what not, that’s fine. I am very satisfied with this project and hope all of anda gain some sort of satisfaction from it as well.
I hope anda enjoy it and QUESTIONS, COMMENTS, CRITIQUES, AND COMPLAINTS ARE ALL LOVE! Whether anda want to PM me personally with a lengthy review atau just give me a shout out on my comments, I would Cinta it to death.
Thanks for reading!
I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have telah diposkan it over there too.
here are pautan to my screenplay
link
link
link
This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. anda will recognize many scenes I kept. anda will notice some things that I have combined. anda will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.
There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for it. anda will notice them.
This is my saat draft, so it’s not finalized. There will be typos and such. I plan on getting this to a third atau possible fourth draft, but I want to get opinions and see if I should go any further with this.
Some of the stuff was necessary in the screenplay. One scene in general I really wanted to get rid of, but my brain couldn't come up with anything else.
I left some things in the screenplay because I know some people would Cinta to read it and want a full out New Moon experience. If it was a real script, and the scenes were filmed, then the editor would just take it right out and put it in the deleted scenes section. anda could think of it like that.
It is long. Like over 2 hours long, if anda go according to the typical 1 page =1 minit rule. Some scenes do go sejak faster than others, so take that into account.
I know that some people will not like what I did with some scenes. But, I'm not going to please everyone. Which is why I am open to constructive criticism and look ke hadapan to your comments.
Again, this is a peminat made script. If anda want to share it with friends, atau what not, that’s fine. I am very satisfied with this project and hope all of anda gain some sort of satisfaction from it as well.
I hope anda enjoy it and QUESTIONS, COMMENTS, CRITIQUES, AND COMPLAINTS ARE ALL LOVE! Whether anda want to PM me personally with a lengthy review atau just give me a shout out on my comments, I would Cinta it to death.
Thanks for reading!
