All right guys, as anda all have probably noticed my last chapter was a bit of a dozer, but don't worry my seterusnya chapter will be right. And just incase that anda have not figured it out yet. Most was the chapter is correct except for the bit about going into the car. That bit will be coming up in the seterusnya chapter. Also don't be afraid to give me any Nasihat on how I can make my Penulisan Better any critasim is welcome.
On another note this whole story will only be loceng as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Cinta flynnismine
On another note this whole story will only be loceng as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Cinta flynnismine
Renesme's POV
I laughed, Jacob was a great guy and very funny. I loved him, I mean who wouldnt?! He's cute smart, Buff, and Funny. I think even mom has a crush on him! "Ness!"Jacob shouted/laughed. "Huh? Oh I'm sorry jacob what were anda saying?" I dumbfoundly asked. "I berkata do anda want to go to makan malam, majlis makan malam with me on friday?" He smiled. "I would Cinta to! But I have to ask my mom and dad... My dad will probably say no.. He dosnt like you" "I know, call me ok?" He ask's. "Okay!" I say cheerfully.
1 jam later.
"Mom, Can I ask anda something?" I dubiously said. "Sure hunny" Then mom put down the paper and gave me a warm smile. "Well anda see jacob kinda asked me out on a date." "Really? Well I would say yes but the final desicion is up to your dad" She berkata seriously. I sighed, I then sent mom a mind message saying, "I know".
I laughed, Jacob was a great guy and very funny. I loved him, I mean who wouldnt?! He's cute smart, Buff, and Funny. I think even mom has a crush on him! "Ness!"Jacob shouted/laughed. "Huh? Oh I'm sorry jacob what were anda saying?" I dumbfoundly asked. "I berkata do anda want to go to makan malam, majlis makan malam with me on friday?" He smiled. "I would Cinta to! But I have to ask my mom and dad... My dad will probably say no.. He dosnt like you" "I know, call me ok?" He ask's. "Okay!" I say cheerfully.
1 jam later.
"Mom, Can I ask anda something?" I dubiously said. "Sure hunny" Then mom put down the paper and gave me a warm smile. "Well anda see jacob kinda asked me out on a date." "Really? Well I would say yes but the final desicion is up to your dad" She berkata seriously. I sighed, I then sent mom a mind message saying, "I know".