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This is just a little thing i wrote and would Cinta to continue it but i just want to hear what anda think of this before i do. rate and komen plz!!!




I didn’t know how to tell my mother that I wanted to leave the country. I wanted to tell her the real reason but I was convinced that it would upset her and I wanted her to be happy. How could I explain to her that her fiancée hated me and wanted to ship me off to a boarding school in Switzerland? I didn’t want her to feel that she would have to break up with him because I didn’t like him. Rephrase that, because I hated him. He obviously...

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chapter three
(mia's pov)
we stopped when we got to a little clearing covered in flowers, he let go of my hand and went to sit down he patted the floor seterusnya to him for me to go sit with him, i sat down and faced him, he took both my hands in his and started playing with my fingers. "amelia, i told anda that i am a werewolf, well werewolfs do this thing called imprint" he looked up from our hands and into my eye's "when we find the person we are meant to be with, she is the one holding us on this earth not gravity" he was still staring into my eye's "amelia when i...

okay, you've seen the prologue, this is the first chapter...enjoi!

I knew it was too early to get up, yet I couldn’t just lie there any more. If I didn’t do something, I may just go mad. My beautiful, immortal vampire boyfriend was out hunting with his brothers and wouldn’t be utama until later today. His sister Alice was supposed to stay with me, but thanks to her Cinta of dressing me up like a Barbie doll and my clever planning, she stayed at her place to arrange a whole new wardrobe for me and I got to spend the night without being babysat. I rolled over and looked at my alarm clock....

This is sort of a short one...

"Hey, Renesmee, wait up!"
I didn't have to turn to know the voice. It was Mrs. Malagwa, my art teacher, the only person at Brenton who insisted on calling me 'Renesmee.'
I turned and smiled at her. "Is there a problem, Mrs. Malagwa?"
"No, no problem." she panted, out of breath, though she'd only jogged a few steps. I waited for her to continue. "The Valentine's hari Dance is coming up," she said. "And anda have such artistic ability. We need lebih members on the Decorating Comittee." she held up a sheet that was half filled with signatures.
Ah, the dance. I was...

I thought the movie was great! If i had to rate this movie it would be an A.
Acting: B+
Directing: A
Story: A

My kegemaran parts have to be:
+the Ciuman scene
+how the movie started
+how the movie ended (good cliffy)
+the baseball scene (very funny)
+the prom
+bella tellimg charlie that she a tarikh with edward.
+the meadow

My least kegemaran parts are:
- how edward acted soooo dramatic at the meadow
-the hospital scene at the end of the movie (a little lebih detail needed to be added)
-the WAY too fake flying and running with bella.

thanks to the movie, i really enjoyed some of the characters in the book, for...