Rob @ Academy Awards - Arrival

I am a budding screenplay writer and wanted to write a script for New Moon. For lots of reasons. Mainly, to satisfy myself in case the real movie is not what I think it should be

I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have telah diposkan it over there too.

here are pautan to my screenplay
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This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. anda will recognize many scenes I kept. anda will notice some things that I have combined. anda will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.

There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for...

"Sometimes Cinta isn't enough"

Those were the last words I ever heard Jacob Black say. At first, I didn’t care. For three years I didn’t care. I was too dark and thirsty to care about any of my past. I almost forgot some of it. I almost forgot him.

It’s been ten years and those fears of mine came true. The Volturi wanted me to sertai them and I refused. But they didn’t play nice. No, they didn’t, not at all. Instead of letting me walk away, sorry that I had refused their offer, they gave me an ultimatum. Either I joined them atau the Cullen’s died. This time, they didn’t find a way out....

This is my first Twilight peminat fiction. I started Penulisan it a bit after I read Eclipse. So it's set after that, and does not mesh with Breaking Dawn. Anyway, I got the idea while listening to the song Unchained Melody, hence the title, and started Penulisan it. I'm looking for a beta reader, btw! Feedback is much appreciated.


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Unchained Melody

“Cold feet?” I heard his voice whisper into my ear. I would have jumped atau screamed if it wasn’t for the fact I seem to be in a catatonic state. I knew it was Jacob’s voice, but I couldn’t see him. Even if he were to walk up in front of my wide...

This is short but I just wanted to get through it quickly. I didn't want to write it but it had to happen.


My brilliant plan that sounded absolutely brilliant wasn’t so amazing when I sat and thought about it. It seemed quite simple when I first thought of it. What was the only way Charlie would have no control over me? The answer was my mother. My plan was to go back to England, where my mother was, and Charlie could no longer have a say in what I did. Edward would follow me and he could bring his whole family to London if he wanted to. But the lebih I thought about it, the lebih I knew it...

Chapter 3 - anda Cannot Be Serious
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"HAHA! anda GUYS ARE HILLARIOUS!" I laughed. I laughed so hard that I fell out of my chair. Bella helped me up and the others just stared at me.
"You have to be joking, vampires?" I asked with a chuckle.
"We are Katrina, and we are offended that anda take this as a joke," Carlisle said.
"I am very sorry."
"Its alright Katrina, but we are telling the truth. Please believe us," Jasper asked. I nodded.
Vampires--you cannot be serious.
"I'm gonna go," I told them, finishing my last cinnamon roll and walking out the door....

Do anda like this kind of stories?
Actually, I’m not obsessed wih vampires, but I really liked this story.

How do anda describe Bella?
She’s a strong character. It’s easy to relate to her and Cinta her from the start.

Did anda meet with Stphenie Meyer?
She was very involved with the production of the movie, she checked the script with Catherine and she loved it. She joined us while filming, but just for fun, she never got too involved.

What was it like working with Robert?
It was really cool, he’s a great actor. In this movie he plays the ideal man. I don’t think anda can find a guy like...

Sorry for the delay, hope anda like it!

Edward caught her and ran with her inside and up a huge set of stairs. " Carlisle!" He yelled desperately.

" What is it?" Carlisle said, suddenly right seterusnya to Edward. Right away he started to check her pulse, then turned his head towards me and berkata " Who is that?"

" Oh, that's the girl Seth imprinted on." Edward berkata destractedly. He was holding Bella's hand and was staring intently at her closed eyelids as if to try and will her to wake up.

" Well Bella just needs to rest, she'll wake up when she's ready. anda must admit that she's been through a rough time...

Chapter One - Little Miss Katrina
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I looked out to the clouds. Renee-uh I mean Mom-stares at me. Phil, eh, dad, keeps his eyes on the road.
"Ughh! Why do anda have to bring me to meet my new sister? She doesnt have to know about me, CAN WE PLEASE GO HOME?" I beg. Renee smiles.
"Kat, Bella will be glad to see you."
"Its not her I dont want to meet," I pout.
"Oh, Edward. Dont worry, he wont bite."
I scowl.
"Dear God, PLEASE LET ME LIVE!" I beg. Phil and Renee laugh.
"You will Cinta Nessie," Phil assures me. Who names their daughter Renensmee? Who? My...

i know that it sounds like twilight a bit but i didn't know how else to get her through the day. chapter 3 coming up!!





His eyes searched mine, almost as if he was trying to read me. His eyebrows creased together and his gaze became lebih intense. The small dark haired girl turned around, wanting to know why her partner had let the shuttlecock fall. She followed his gaze to me and gave me a smile, menunjukkan bright white teeth. He gave me one last gaze and returned to his game. I looked away from him and back to Mike who had been watching me watching the boy.
“Who’s that?” I asked, nodding at...

heres the seterusnya one i hope anda like it

chapter four
(mia's pov)
my first four months as a vampire, went well other than the fact that i couldn't go places with people if i werent walking through the forrest with seth, i was hanging out with my new brother's and sister's, i got along well with everyone, i was rose and alice's Barbie doll, i knew how to play the Piano when i was human so i played with edward, i started learning latin with bella, i arm wrestled emmett, played chess with jasper, me and nessie were really close we spoke a lot watched films together and gave each other make overs. today...

hope anda like it please comment


chapter two
(girl's pov)


i opened my eye's and looked around the room there were eleven people looking at me, they were all standing at the door except one he was holding my hand and then suddenly i remember my Angel seth who saved me. i looked around the room at all there faces and paused at seths i just stared into his beautiful eye's, someone cleared there throat while a girl giggled. seth laughed and tightened his grip on my hand, i turned my eye's back to the other ten people in the room the leader steped ke hadapan he had blonde hair and he was extreamly beautiful...

I LOVED Penulisan THIS ONE!!

I literally am standing in my kitchen, multitasking between making curried chicken and Penulisan haha.


I know it sounds very Breaking Dawn-ish, but don't worry. It's not that... (my trying not to spoil breaking dawn for anyone who hasn't read it)





“Bella?” I heard a muffled voice coming from downstairs. I slowly opened my eyes, not exactly ready to wake up yet and looked at the alarm clock. 6:45. Crap. I slept in.

“Shouldn't anda already be showered sejak now” I heard Charlie as he made his way up the stairs. “You better get a alih on atau your gonna be late” He said...