I was tired so I went crazy and didn't do anything for grammar. Hehe...

Ok, this is my first fan-fiction, no negative komen-komen please

"Look, in the pool," Rumblefoot said.
"I see it, its a prophecy," Hollyleaf said.
"Brumble will concour api, kebakaran and Bramble and blood will run through the forest," Hollyleaf recited.
"The pool has spoken!" Jayflight said.
"Tell the medicine cat! A NEW HERO WILL BE BORN!" Rumblefoot shouted.
And a hero was born....

















Hope anda enjoyed that grammar corrected version!