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Disclaimer: These are my views, please don't be offended

I don't know about everyone, but TOO many people type using net-speak and horrid spelling, grammar, and capitalization. Typos are perfectly fine, but when someone types something that looks like this:

i lyk ttly luv edward he is so s3xy jacob is a hawttie 2

It completely irritates me.

Those few lines have many things wrong with it:

1) Lack of capitalization and punctuation.

Without proper capitalization, the sentences look very amateur. We don't know when a new sentence starts, and it shows lack of respect (excuse me for sounding cheesy) towards the characters. If anda were to read the Preamble to the Constitution, anda would see that certain words, that seem random, are capitalized. That is because they capitalized any word of importance back in those times. Today, we capitalize the first word of a sentence, and proper nouns. Is that really too much to ask?

Without proper punctuation, anda could easily confuse someone. If anda look at the example above, anda wouldn't be able to tell how many sentences that was, and anda would assume one. Well, when I was typing that, it was supposed to be 3. Punctuation can change the meaning of a sentence entirely, and using it correctly, makes anda seem a little lebih intelligent.

2)Use of net-speak/numbers for abbreviating.

When someone uses net-speak in their sentences (ex. ttly, luv, lyk, hawttie) it makes them seem unintelligent. The exceptions I make are words like lol, heh, haha, because their really isn't a way to portray laughing in a comment/post.

Using numbers to abbreviate things is one of the worst things I have ever seen. 3 is not an 'e', 5 is not an 's', 8 (as in l8er) does not substitute for the 'ate' sound, and 2 is not the same as too atau to. It makes anda seem unintelligent, and is it really that hard to type a few, extra characters?

3)Grammar errors.

Though there aren't any grammar mistakes in the example lines (besides capitalization and punctuation), there are many common grammar mistakes people make. Is it really that hard to apply your knowledge anda learned in language arts to Fanpop.

4)Spelling.

I'm not sure about your computer, but mine has this thing called SPELL CHECK! Mine even applies it to text boxes on Fanpop. Also, if anda know something is spelled wrong, anda could always type it into a Google/Yahoo/search engine cari box, and it will either be correct atau come up with something that says "did anda mean [insert word(s) here]" instead of saying, "I don't know how to spell that." It really takes a few seconds, and anda won't appear as unintelligent.

These changes could make the Twilight spot, and possible the entirety of Fanpop, a better place.
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posted by runlikeawolf
"And you're sure that anda didn't know them?"Carlisle was pacing back and forth in front of the staircase.We had just gotten back from discovering that newborns had invaded my house.
"No.We've never seen them before,"my dad said.I squeezed Jacob's hand,seeking reasurance.He smiled and rubbed my arm."They'll be back,but we need to intervene before the Volturi steps in,"he finished.
Emmet leaned forward,his eyes twinkling mishcheivously."Great!I could use a good fight!"Rosalie hissed.He rolled his eyes and muttered something unintelligable under his breath.
"No.We need to find out who they were...
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posted by -Darkness-xo
I promise to remember Bella

Each time I carelessly fall down

And I promise to remember Edward

Whenever I'm out of town

I promise to obey traffic laws

For Charlie's sake, of course

And I promise to remember Jacob

When my hati, tengah-tengah fills with remorse

I promise to remember Carlisle

When ever I'm in the Emergency Room

And I promise to remember Emmett

Whenever there's a huge boom

I promise to remember Rosalie

When ever I see something that holds pure beauty

And I promise to remember Alice

When I'm at the mall and a cute outfit spots me

I promise to remember Renesmee

When I see that beautiful bronze hair

And I promise...
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posted by jacob_lover5253
I'm sooo sooo sooo sorry i haven't telah diposkan in like forever but I have a MAJOR writer's block. I will try to post lebih of my Unspoken story when i do not have writer's block

sincerely,
kayla




















































































































































































































































srry for all the extra space
posted by LexisFaith
Bella

I was so nervous. I was going to prom with all my best Friends who used to be my ex bestfriends and my boyfriend who used to be my ex boyfriend....wow. But that wasn't why I was nervous. Edward Cullen was my date. Just saying his name made my stomach flip and flop. Why?

"I hope Emmett likes this dress." Rose was spraying her golden hair that was pulled up on the sides and bahagian, atas in a pisang clip what was covered sejak her long curls. She was wearing a short dress. It was strappless and black. The torso was polk-a-doted with giant white dots. There was a vivid red ribbon tied into a bow onto...
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posted by a-jforever
Ok here's part 4. It rather short compared to the other bits I've telah diposkan but owell:


“You ok Clo?” Kim asked, looking concerned. I nodded.

“Yeah I’m fine.” I replied to my Mum, sticking the phone into my pocket, wanting to get utama earlier, but not wanting to be rude and leave.
After a while Paul announced he was leaving and I thought I would grab the opportunity to get utama myself, whatever it was Mum had to say had to be important because she wouldn’t just tell me she needed to talk to me tomorrow if it wasn’t.

“Do anda want me to walk anda home?” Paul asked, his eyes searching...
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posted by groovychicklisa
"Morning." Edward greeted as I got into the passenger kerusi, tempat duduk of the Camaro the following morning.

"Morning." I leaned over for my hello kiss, which he was only too happy to give me.

"You missed quite a tunjuk at the house this morning." He told me, pulling out of the driveway.

"Oh yeah?"

"Rose suddenly decided that maroon wasn't her color, and tried to get the principal on the phone to force him to change the robes last minute." Edward chuckled at the memory, and I could almost see the scene in front of me. God help the person who tried to mess with Rosalie's fashion sense.

"Poor Mr. Greene." I felt...
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posted by basketballstar
I wrote this very short story based on Eclipse. It's told from Edward's point of view. I wrote it quite some time ago, and only decided now to put it out and see what people think of it. Please komen and tell me what anda think (if anda want to read others etc.) as I have some other similar short stories that I was thinking about posting aswell!
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Undoubtedly Alice was my favourite sister. There wasn’t really any competition. I had annoyed Rosalie from the first hari she heard me speak; it went both ways. I loved Rosalie, true. But without a doubt, I adored Alice. She was annoying...
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hei everyone! Thankies SO VERY MUCH for the support! I'm wowed sejak each of you...you guys are so sweet <333 :] This chapter is kinda short because I was in a rush last night LOL and since this weekened is American Independence weekend, my family and I are taking a trip down to the pantai (yay! :P) so I won't be able to update till tuesday (which makes me VERY sad :[ ) So, being the sweeties anda are, I know anda all will patiently and anxiously wait till I update again. Thanks from the bahagian, atas and bottom of my heart, everyone! Much Cinta to each of you, from me! Enjoy! :D
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my mind worled jacob my jacob was alive. so the dreams i was having wernt just me beeing crazy they were him. warning me.
which ment he still loved me.
"excuse me" i got up before anyone could ask me queastions.
i ran ran straight sourth till i hit them smell that told me i was in werewolf teritorie and stopped dead on the line i just hit and waited. they would have to be here soon.
then smell got stronger and closer. they were getting close i pepared myself . sam would want to kill me paul i dont know what would happen i just had to tell them he was alive but not how they knew it.
they were...
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posted by Cullens4eva
Alice Pov
I’m so bored! Mom’s cleaning, dad’s of saving lives, Bella’s recovering from a break up with a senior called Jacob and Rosalie’s admiring her perfection.
There’s nothing to do! Nearly all forks malls are rubbish, it takes a while to get to port Angeles and Seattle. And I couldn’t go anyway because I’ve reached my of spending for the month. But thats so unfair, I mean Gucci shoes are a need of life. Well for a girl anyway.
Its at times like this that I wish I had an older brother, someone to tease me and mess around with and play dares. Maybe I’ll take a lovely...
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posted by CarlislesLover
Hi guys. I'm sorry I keprt anda waiting for part 9.
This part is 4 years on from the last part.
Hope anda like it
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I was in the woods alone. Edward was at work and Renesmee was at school. I was meant to be at work as well. But weird things had been happening lately. My closest possessions disappeared one sejak one. But of course my closest possessions ever hadn’t disappeared yet. Edward and Renesmee. I had to find were these items were going because if Renesmee and Edward disappeared I would have to be able to find them. Pain lashed through me as I thought of them disappearing. Who was taking...
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