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I don't know about everyone, but TOO many people type using net-speak and horrid spelling, grammar, and capitalization. Typos are perfectly fine, but when someone types something that looks like this:

i lyk ttly luv edward he is so s3xy jacob is a hawttie 2

It completely irritates me.

Those few lines have many things wrong with it:

1) Lack of capitalization and punctuation.

Without proper capitalization, the sentences look very amateur. We don't know when a new sentence starts, and it shows lack of respect (excuse me for sounding cheesy) towards the characters. If anda were to read the Preamble to the Constitution, anda would see that certain words, that seem random, are capitalized. That is because they capitalized any word of importance back in those times. Today, we capitalize the first word of a sentence, and proper nouns. Is that really too much to ask?

Without proper punctuation, anda could easily confuse someone. If anda look at the example above, anda wouldn't be able to tell how many sentences that was, and anda would assume one. Well, when I was typing that, it was supposed to be 3. Punctuation can change the meaning of a sentence entirely, and using it correctly, makes anda seem a little lebih intelligent.

2)Use of net-speak/numbers for abbreviating.

When someone uses net-speak in their sentences (ex. ttly, luv, lyk, hawttie) it makes them seem unintelligent. The exceptions I make are words like lol, heh, haha, because their really isn't a way to portray laughing in a comment/post.

Using numbers to abbreviate things is one of the worst things I have ever seen. 3 is not an 'e', 5 is not an 's', 8 (as in l8er) does not substitute for the 'ate' sound, and 2 is not the same as too atau to. It makes anda seem unintelligent, and is it really that hard to type a few, extra characters?

3)Grammar errors.

Though there aren't any grammar mistakes in the example lines (besides capitalization and punctuation), there are many common grammar mistakes people make. Is it really that hard to apply your knowledge anda learned in language arts to Fanpop.

4)Spelling.

I'm not sure about your computer, but mine has this thing called SPELL CHECK! Mine even applies it to text boxes on Fanpop. Also, if anda know something is spelled wrong, anda could always type it into a Google/Yahoo/search engine cari box, and it will either be correct atau come up with something that says "did anda mean [insert word(s) here]" instead of saying, "I don't know how to spell that." It really takes a few seconds, and anda won't appear as unintelligent.

These changes could make the Twilight spot, and possible the entirety of Fanpop, a better place.
"Before you, Bella, my life was like a moonless night. Very dark, but there were stars—points of light and reason… and then anda shot across my sky like a meteor. Suddenly everything was on fire; there was brilliancy, there was beauty. When anda were gone, when the meteor had fallen over the horizon, everything went black. Nothing had changed, but my eyes were blinded sejak the light. I couldn’t see the stars anymore. And there was no lebih reason for anything."
―Edward Cullen to Bella[src]

Isabella "Bella" Marie angsa, swan (later Bella Cullen, born to Charlie angsa, swan and Renée Dwyer on September...
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posted by VanessaBrooke
Chapter 1: A Rude Awakening

Renesmee’s POV

Beep, beep beep, the alarm went off wildly. Renesmee Cullen moaned and covered a bantal over her head. "Ness, honey, wake up" a deep husky voice berkata with a hint of laughter in his voice. "Noooo.... too early, 5 lebih minuets....." I berkata sleep thick in my voice. I felt two very warm hands around my waist. "Nessie.....wakie wakie..." he poked me, and I squealed. “JAKE!" I exclaimed throwing the bantal off my head and attacking him in one second. I was on bahagian, atas of him, staring into his eyes angrily. "Jacob, don’t u ever wake me up early again, on a…’...
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posted by twilightfan03
Bella wake up your going to be late for school charlie woke me up.Edward drove me school it was just a regular day,But this hari was different some how i could feel it.bella,sweetheart are anda ok? edward ask but i wasn't paying attention i was looking straight at alice she was staring straight at the ceiling,but when i turned back to edward he was gone vanish just like that i looked back at alice she was gone too.Right where edward was sitting there was note saying I've gone hunting.try not kill your self when i'm gone.I giggle as i read the note.Angela was here she asked if me and edward kissed...
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posted by twilight_fan_8
Before I start this chapter I must thank two people for commenting on all of the chapters of this story so far...

THANK anda SO MUCH, princesspinkla and xXjakeloverXx !!!

Now... On with the story ;)

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I walked slowly up to the door. I just did not want to be grounded. Not now. Not when everything seemed so perfect. But I did have it coming.

By this time I had gotten to the door. I opened it slowly. Charlie was standing across the room, staring me down. This is not going to go well.

"Isabella Marie Swan. Where have anda been?" Charlie berkata in what seemed...
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posted by Rob_patt_fan
- I know… I’m late! Sorry…

With my eyes closed, I searched for his Ice cold lips and as I found them, he came closer to me so I could Ciuman him easier. After we kissed, He chuckled and I opened my eyes.

-I was getting worried! Where were you?

He pressed his lips together and said:

-Alice was not in a good mood… I needed to talk to her! anda know how she gets when she’s upset! She would probably like a shopping time with you!

-Of course. I’ll talk to her about it.

Edward grinned and hugged me. After playing with my hair, He started humming my lullaby. I leaned closer to him and placed myself...
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posted by odegbami
jacob is so cute . i bet when they do the alih new moon . he will be hotter then ever.bella in eclips getts on .omg edward cullen is getting hotter and hotter .I swaer i going to melt.butany way he is cute. ok i haft to it mit jacobe a hotte. god help me i have ocd the o is for (obssive ) c is for (cullen )d is for(distor) i have a dissese. I Cinta twlight soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much litsin for lebih at YouTube batman,spider and the i
ncretbal hulk at got nothing on edward cullen hot hot hot hot hot hold on in a hotte brake .jacob is going to be my babys daddy for real i Cinta him he is hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot got to Cinta famous people. they get it all.love Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta who gives a shit LOL bithch i Cinta talor lanter but to way sick. for me i stil Cinta anda thow throw down lovelove Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta Cinta
When we arrived back utama with Nessie Edward went and put her in her katil as she was fast asleep.Edward asked me if I would like to talk. I asked him what about love. "Well I have been noticiing that well........You know Nessie is getting bigger everyday and Jake is loving her lebih and lebih everyday she grows right.""Right What are anda getting at Edward.""Well I have been talking with Jake and well......He is starting to think of Nessie the way I think about you"..."WHAT!!!!" "Now Cinta anda should have known that this was going to comming." "I did not think it would be this soon.""Well he is...
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posted by TwilightNerd6
hei Guys!!!
This is my first so dont laugh (please)


I was lying as I thought to myself that I would be very upset if Edward left,even for a week.
Then suddenly I heard a bang on the door Bang!Bang!Bang!
"Daddy!Daddy!Daddy!"Renesmee screamed from outside.
"You'd better get that"I berkata sarcastically to Edward.Then he was off the katil in a half of a second.
"Three,Two,One"He berkata then opened the door slowly.
"Hey little monster"He playfully berkata to Renesmee as he caught her in his hands.
"Daddy, Do anda really have to go?"She asked with pain in her voice.
"Yes I do because i'm going hunting because I need...
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posted by team_robward
Chapter 8.
Dreaming:

I was in a forest. Everything was green. The grass, the trees, the moss, all green, different shades of green, but still green. No matter where I looked it was forest, it looked like there was no way out. I walked straight ahead for a while, always trying to find an escape. I thought about screaming, but I had a strong feeling that no one would hear me. I kept walking, and then all of a sudden there was bright sunlight behind the trees. I could almost see an opening, the trees were getting further apart, I was beginning to see blue sky through the all the lush bush.

I could...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
-Renesmee-

Once I was done shopping ('Alice would be proud' kind of shopping) in Port Angeles, we sat down at a restuarant, La Bella Italia, a name that seemed vaguely familiar. I shook my head; I definetly had Lost it.

* * *

Once we were done, we paid and left. I liked driving fast, something I had NOT inherited from my mom.

The saat we got home, Alice was there. She whisked me and my purchases out of the car, and before I knew it, she had everything laid out on the bed, and was looking at everything critically.

"Renesmee, anda make me so proud," she said, looking ready to hug me until I died....
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hay guys, enjoi this one, i had help from Friends at school.

The ride to the clearing was like every trip we take. It started out with Ben and Thai fighting over the front seat, and ended up with me there instead. All of us laughing, joking around, all of us having a good time…and then we got there. The smell hit us like a wrecking ball…more than one lot of vampires…and about a dozen lebih werewolves.
“They brought lebih with them…” Nate stated his eyes unfocussed as he looked ahead into the future. “There are three lebih female Vampires and one male…” he frowned as he processed...
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posted by jamiesue00
I was so exhausted on the plane ride utama I was asleep for most of it. Jacob never let me go; he had his arms around me the whole time. I was so grateful to have him in my life and for having a wonderful family that never gave up on looking for me. Every now and then I would wake up for a few saat and hear things like permanent damage and lasting effects, I was sure everyone wanted me to be okay. The truth was; I was better than okay I was great. It may seem strange being taken away and held captive for almost a week, but it made me lebih appreciative for everything and everyone in my life....
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posted by Bella_Swan3
-Emmett-

One of the most hilariously fun things of all time anda can do: embarrass Renesmee. She turns even redder than Bella used to, and that's definetly saying something. The teasing just has to be adequete.

Of course, Renesmee ALWAYS gets me back, but it's worth it. Sort of. She has a talent for revenge, involving getting a certain seven foot werewolf (hi, Jake!) in on it. The most baru-baru ini avengement she instilled, involved, er, (they had to get Edward and Jasper in on this one) throwing me off the cliffs. Jacob gave permission. He likes payback for his adorable, puppy-eyed imprintee.

Another fun activity: Getting revenge for her revenge. Let's just say that when she gets back, there's a surprise waiting for her.

I remember when she redecorated my bedroom, and when we got back from hunting, it looked like there was a merah jambu explosion in Rosalie's and my room.

She's imaginative, I'll give her that much.
posted by UchihaYuki
Today was Monday, that meant Me Edward, Alice and Jasper had to go to school, I sighed as I sat up and walked over to my huge closet, “At least we’re graduating this Friday...” I thought to my self as I picked out clothes, I found some old jeans and a long sleeved green shirt, probably the only non fancy cloths I owned, I laughed to my self, then I went to the bathroom and changed, Edward was outside checking the Weather so see if we could go to school when I went into the bathroom, Now he was sitting on our katil waiting for me. As soon as a rounded the corner and walked into our room...
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posted by jamiesue00
We went upstairs to talk to grandpa he was in his study. “I was wondering when anda were going to come and see me. What’s going on dear?” he said. “Well grandpa I’ve been sick for about four days, dizzy, throwing up and crying a lot.” I told him. “Have anda eaten anything strange in the last few weeks?” he asked me. “She has been eating roti and water for the last few days, and I can’t joke around with her because I’m afraid she might start crying again.”Jacob was so worried about me. “Okay, how about if I try and do some tests and I’ll call anda two in the morning...
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the seterusnya one will be up soon today, before i leave to the ZUMBA :D ENJOY

Bella's pov


“Bella, we shouldn’t go in there” Daniel berkata with fear and I looked at him
“I have been here before with Leann, it’s okay” I berkata but I saw that his face showed fear and pain. “what happened to anda here” I asked him very carefully.
He took a deep breath and than berkata with pain and hate
“to me, nothing. But my best friend disappeared in the forest, he was looking for his ball, but he never got back out”
“I’m sorry Daniel, but it’s been years now and I need you’re help” I berkata almost...
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posted by _madz_
hei guys
just letting anda know that I'm going on holidays for just over a week without internet so i can't put anything on for another 10 days!
im going to write tons when im away so there will be an extra long one on when i get back. (my teachers finally took a break from homework!!!)

thanks for your support!!


here is a parting parapraph!



I sat with her curled in my arms just waiting. I could hear the Volturi finishing their meal and both Alice and I stiffened when we heard the door open from down the hall. Bella couldn’t have heard but she felt me stiffen and cringed against me.
Alec walked...
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posted by ktbminnie12
Bella's POV

I woke up to Edward sitting beside me. I yawned and laid my head on his chest.
“Good morning,” I said.
“Good morning,” he berkata as he kissed me head.
“Ugh, what time is it?”
“Almost eleven thirty,” he berkata chuckling.
“Wow, I slept late. Good thing it’s Saturday,” I said.
“Yeah, well anda had a long night last night,” he said.
Last night, Alice came over to try out an outfit for the graduation party that night. She made me stay up to about midnight, trying out make up and an outfit. She had me out a blue dress baju and a pair of designer jeans. No doubt they were...
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posted by iluvtwilight123
I never thought that i would have to pick between the 2 of the 3 people i Cinta the most. Jacob and Renesme. I knew this would happen when it started and i tried to stop it but i couldn't.

But what would anda do if 2 people were making anda choose sides? Would it be normal to react and take a side atau let them firgure it on their own?

I waited until i couldn't take it anymore, as a tear rolled down my cheek and i ran as fast as i could away from the cottage.Away from the painfulm memory into the woods. If it was fate that brought me to this point then I couldn't run away from it.
posted by twilight-7
Jacob was still unconscious when I was back in the forest. Carlisle and Edward were having a conversation but they stopped abruptly when they saw me. It made me think it was about me.
“Billy’s calling Sam,” I told them. “He should be here soon.”
I sat down seterusnya to Jacob and stroked his head again. I didn’t know what else to do.
“We should go,” Edward said. I wasn’t looking at him so I didn’t know who he was speaking to.
“Kayla,” he said. “We should go.”
“Why?” I looked up at Edward. I wasn’t leaving Jacob.
“I don’t want to be here when Sam comes.”
“What’s...
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