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is this a good idea?

A girl has been at a boarding school all tahun and is finally going to see her brother. at her coming utama party she meets his best friend and secretly crush on him. he finds out and they start dating secretly. her brother finds out and is mad. he confronts them and threatens to tell unless she will do hima faver.
 white6 posted hampir setahun yang lalu
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sideshowbobbart said:
hm...it's good but the point is where are anda going it?
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malmcd said:
It's a great starting point! Cinta the idea!


Cinta MALMCD
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StragsLover said:
I like It! It is a clasic twist! Bro Sis Fight and Bro/sis need favor atau they tell awesome!
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wantadog said:
Favor?...
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DarkCEpitome said:
An interesting twist....but if anda want to go original, I suggest not making the twist too..casual atau classic. Try to go for something a bit outlandish, atau just try to go outside the box.
It helps a lot.

I do like the story, do see some potential success in it. :)
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Biebergurl10111 said:
Its interesting..i would read it if u made it into a book
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