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so, i was wondering if i could get some criticism for my story

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wantadog said:
...Interesting....pretty well written for one thing.
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really? thx!
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Sutelc22 said:
there wasnt much 2 criticize.i thought it was very interesting,imaginative,and constructed very well.i need 2 start Penulisan again,if i could find the time.
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cool, thx alot, and gl with your Penulisan :)
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oboe_player said:
The sentences were a tiny bit choppy, but other than that it was great. I can't wait to read more! :D
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:D thx coolio! ^ ^
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hatjune said:
sure where is it?
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up there in the link :)
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