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Wrote this, what do anda think?

Don't judge too harshly because I was rushing like there's no tomorrow during this. This is still very meaningful nonetheless so it took a lot of courage to post my work.

The api, kebakaran inside her,
Burning bright.
She knows if it's not done now,
She won't make it through the night.
So she burns her book of unholy lies
With tears forming in her eyes.
As all her pain runs down her cheeks
A voice inside of her head shrieks;
"It's not over! Not finished! It will never be done!"
But she knows inside
That she has won.

© Shane F.

(yes it's very short but it means so much to me I had to copyright it haha)

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para-scence said:

That's very good! What is it about? To me, it reminds me of when anda fight with yourself. It's always a constant fight, but anda can overcome it.

Awesome, do anda write puisi a lot? You're very good. :)

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Ya you're take on it is pretty much the same as mine. Dealing with inner conflict was a big thing for me and anda have that feeling that there's someone else inside your head contradicting anda all the time and trying to overpower you. This truly is about overcoming that struggle.

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mintymidget210 said:

Oh my... this is great!
I can feel the emotion put into it.
I also Cinta how anda really loved your own work and copyrighted it. If I wrote something as good as this I would do the same.

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