I wrote this in 5 minutes. Comments? Suggestions? Critiques?

Very nice! I wrote this in I don't know how long. I don't do well with poetry.


Bravery

Standing in the light
Looking at the night
What is your fright?
The feeling that my path is not right.

Do anda keep going?

Standing still as the dead
Looking at the names of the dead
What do anda dread?
I fear the fatality of death.

Do anda continue?

When anda are faced with the grave
And yes, off course in the night
And Frozen with terror,
If anda keep going through the fright
We will name anda “brave”.

I made this when I have 14 years old, the teacher order to us take a novel and made a text of a important part of the book. i hope anda like it. it's called: His soul is like the burning hell and Is based on victor hugo's novel notre dame de paris.
..And she , looking at the men who ruined her life, try to be the most formal posible. And he start to talk of the crimes of esmeralda. for her he was a demon on a men's body, for him she was a witch who cames from hell. for all the men and woman who see all that it just another dead on name of war. after frollo's speech , he go to the most high point of the catedral, to see how that woman burns on fire. her screams make the poor hunchback stay angry, and in a impulse , he just throw away his master from the catedral. after that quasimodo rescues her body and runs away. after two years , in a cementery they find two body's , one of then with a stranger hunchback . when the men try to separeted the two body's they turn it's on dust.

another killer poem,my friend.