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HELP PLEASSEE!!!!!!

ok, in my trilogy theres five books: Change, Search, it used to be Deja Vu, Death and Victory atau Defeat, haven't decided.

Now, the third one, used to be Deja Vu, i realised i have a reallly rubbish idea for it. Now, theres this girl MAry, shes special and so's her dad, who is evillll. (thers lebih too it, with powers w.e) and in the third book, her dad tries to isolate MAry from her friends, but i had an idea for how he could, then i realised how rubbish it was, soo i need your help.

How can Evil isolate Mary from everyone so he can kill her? As in turning everyone against her.

Ohkaaaay ive been thinking about this for ages but likeee younoeee ive got writers block. So... anda know. HELLLLPPPP!!! :)

thanx xx
-- August Parle xx
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I would highly suggest my first and saat ideas, my third one is a bet....eeehhh, well, weak. :)
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Sorry, meant to say "bit" X(
sapherequeen posted hampir setahun yang lalu
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loll thanx
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i dont get it. a trilogy with 5 books?
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sapherequeen said:
Hmmm...I have an idea :)

anda could have Mary's birthday be coming up soon. Evil could think up this horrible plan;

Tell Mary he is taking her to a wonderful pantai in California atau something awesome like that for her birthday, and therefore have her willingly go along. When her birthday comes, he will have an assistant fly Mary to not a beach, but somewhere dark, gloomy, depressive, and horrendous. This place may be a absolutely deserted island atau a cave way out in the Arctics. The assistant could cruelly leave Mary in that awful place, leaving her to fend for herself and trying desperately to survive. She'll be isolated from everyone that way.

Or, if anda want something less extreme, have Evil lure Mary to an old, abandoned room inside their glamoruous house, and he can lock her in that room. While leaving her there, he won't let Mary have any Makanan atau water and she will soon begin to starve to death. Evil may tell Mary's Friends and everyone else that she has left the town/state/country etc. and they won't be able to see her anymore. And after that step, Evil may take his already dying daughter and simply kill her in any easy way possible.

atau perhaps anda could simply have Evil hire someone to follow Mary around whenever she leaves their utama and make sure she stays away from her friends. If she tried to be a foot near them atau one of her Friends tried to be a foot near her, this "bodyguard" could attack someone brutally and take Mary back to the utama where her father would punish her.


Hope I helped :)

(If these ideas are a little...whack, it's okay if anda want to say so---but just anda the author, not anyone else!)
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Those are great ideas
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Thanks!!!! :D
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You're welcome :)
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