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Can anda read the first chapter of my story?
Okay, so i got an account on Mibba.com, and i started Penulisan a story called "Why Me?" about a girl who has to alih from Tennessee, to Illinois. She's psychic, and in this first chapter she learned that her boyfriend is cheating on her with her BEST FRIEND.
Here it is: link
Please tell me why atau why not anda like it, and tell me what i could do to fix it?
Thanks :)
Here it is: link
Please tell me why atau why not anda like it, and tell me what i could do to fix it?
Thanks :)
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