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Would anda read this story if I wrote it and telah diposkan it on here?

I had a dream last night about the guy I like and it made me think of a book atau movie. If i wrote it and telah diposkan it on here, would anda read it?

Plot: Teens at a high school dance performance are taken hostage. Drama unfolds as young Cinta is revealed. Friendship, secret love, and bravery are put to the test as the night progresses into an unforgettable night for all involved.

Here is the preface:
It gets harder and harder to see Dominic each day. Every hari brings new pain, new longing, and new tears. I Cinta my boyfriend but Dominic has a certain affect on me that I can’t control. I am a terrible person….
When I’m not with him, I feel a relief from deception. But also, an opening into a deep pit that swallows me until I’m with him again. When I’m with Jason, I am partially taken from this hole. But there is still a awan looming over me, and the pit below me, threatening to menelan me at any minute. I try not to give in to the temptation if telling my Cinta how I feel and crushing the only man that has truly loved me. I struggle to make it through the darkness to the light that is Cinta and happiness. Sometimes I succeed, but then I’m pulled back into the omen of depression that swallowed my life in that first Drama Club meeting and turned it into the confusing black hole I now know. I need a sanctuary. But I don’t know where to find it. Even in my dreams, Dominic and Jason burrow their way unto my subconscious. Once I awake, sweaty and confused, I am slapped sejak reality and realize that I am in the same place I just was. Thinking if this, I cry myself back to sleep.
Back at school, a friend talks nonstop of Dominic. Her words haunt me. For every time I hear his name, my hati, tengah-tengah jumps and it thumps in my chest. I think Jason notices and I try to calm myself down, unsuccessfully. And she continues on as I try to tune out the Cinta that makes me want to rip out my hati, tengah-tengah and punish myself for being so wretched.
When I talk to Dominic, the world is right.
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u can definatly right but i wouldnt be intersted there enough Cinta stories in the world but thats just me i wont read any Cinta stories but i no other people who whould read it
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Annie-6-14 said:
That was so deep! How did anda come up with that! I woul really Cinta to read it! It's actually pretty addicting! anda have a real talent. I think A LOT of people can relate to that. But there is something haunting me. Is Dominic the bad boy, atau the sweet one. Has she known Jason all her life, atau just that School year? Otherwise, its great! A+
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TDIlover4ever said:
I'd read it :D
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i am Penulisan it right now :D
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and that's not the whole preface. Cut it off D:
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Jeffersonian said:
Depends, in some ways it sounds kind of cheesy, but what am I kidding I Cinta cheesy romance stories. Yep, I'd read it.
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rose12345 said:
I would Cinta to read it, i just know i'll Cinta it
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great! i shall post it on here!
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avatarluver990 said:
I would Cinta to read it! If I have the time :P but I would Cinta it read it :) I'm really into it already XD Cinta ur plot and preface ;)
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Here is the link for the first very little bit i have so far
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i am working on the cover for it and when i am done i will post that too
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link
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