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Can anda guys PLEASE give me your opinion?

I am Penulisan a book, and I want anda guys to give me your opinion about it. Here's the plot...
Aubrey and her brother Scott, get adopted to this nice couple with no children. They live in a very woodsy, small town. At Scott's new school, he gets in a fight with Max. His new parents are very disappointed in him, and decide to keep him away from Max's family as possible. Later, Scott finds that Aubrey is in Cinta with Max's younger brother. Later in the story, Aubrey finds out the heart-stopping truth Of Max's family. Even though she loves her brother, she loves Max's younger brother aswell. She wants to stay close to the other family, but its becoming harder due to her older brother, and the other family's major secret.
Would anda guys read it? Please give me your opinions.
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XDRoseLuvsHP said:
It sounds interesting. A little bit like a modern Romeo and Juliet, no? I'd say this story has potential. What genre is it going to be? Romance, I'd guess, but is there going to be adventure? Fantasy? Mystery? This can be very good. I'd suggest that when anda write it, make something really unique in the story. The major secret of the other family may be really unique. Then the story could be really good instead of just another modern Romeo and Juliet. I'm not saying modern Romeo and Juliet's are bad, I'm just saying if anda give it a new twist, it could be very interesting :) Good luck with your writing!
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Thanks! 2 of my Friends and my sister started Membaca it, and they say that its lebih like a twist on Twilight, since it has skinwalkers. NO VAMPIRES. I PROMISE! I Cinta vamps, but that would make it TOO much like Twilight. Lol. But the family twist is not the only twist. I guess anda could say, my book is lebih of a romantic mystery. Lol. Thanks for the luck!
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werewolflover said:
It sounds really good!Please post it,because I really want to read it:)
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Wow! Thanks!
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arya111 said:
yes
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Thanks.
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TeamRosalieHale said:
It def. has potentioal and would be something I would probably find interesting. I think it's interesting that anda have lebih than one mystery in the story. I like the entire concept overall, it really sounds good.
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Wow! Thanks for the nice comment!
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Ur welcome! :D
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lapushgirl101 said:
It has something that no one has done in a long time - Romeo and Juliet. Well, I can't say a long time because of The Lion King and a few other stories, but anda know what I mean. I would read it, but anda would have to make it work together and progress nicely to keep the audiences attention. Other than that, keep working!
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Thanks!
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tvdluvr said:
i would read it. im not usually into buku like this, but it sounds interesting and i would want to know what happens with aubrey. so, i think its a good plot, keep writing.
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Thanks! I just got most of the plot in a dream I had. I still haven't gotten to that part yet, but its going to be a slam. Thanks.
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