MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! ohk seriously, does this sound good?

There's a boy named Darren who's all popular and high up in Corpus Christi High School. (yeah, i go there, I just wouldn't be able to describe it otherwise) and that's all until he finds this girl called Willow, who's about fifteen, and he's sixteen. Thing is he finds her in the Lagoon in his school (yes, we have a Lagoon, not like a hot tub, I mean like outside this pond - stream - river - thing that we call the Lagoon) and he hauls her out of it. See he thinks she's dead but she wakes up, and she's wearing medievil (watever way anda spell it) witchy clothing. (you can see where this is going) and she happens to be a witch. And he takes her to his house. She tells him all about her and he just laughs and doesn;t believe her but she proves it to him and he believes her. He tries to keep her in his house until she's fully healed (yeah i forgot to mention she's all bruised and cut) and she tells him he's in danger and that she has to help him and there's this enemy of hers; an evil witch. And they have to fight it. La-de-da. Here's the prologue.

“Witch! Witch!” they screamed. Willow ran from the angry mob behind her. She could feel their anger, and their fear. For her there was just fear. She didn’t know what to do; they’d caught her in the act of healing a leaper. At first he thought that she was Christ reincarnated, which was ridiculous, but she made the mistake of laughing at his absurd thought. And he figured it out. He may have been a leaper but he wasn’t stupid.
“She’s over there!” Someone shouted, Willow glanced back, and saw the flickering flames in the distance, and the pointed teeth of pitch forks. She rolled her eyes and groaned, then set off running again. The crunch of gravel sounded under her feet, her Anklet of the Twins Apollo and Artemis jangled as she ran from the angry humans.
She looked up; the stars were watching her run from her former friends. Sometimes they whispered to her, telling her what to do in any situation. Willow ca