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A song I wrote, It`s my first lemme know if it`s any good...thank you:D

I walked my way, while anda stood near,
I try to not look at anda that way.
Y`know it`s a free country, no need to blame
yourself; for the troubles he caused and your pain. (oh no way, no way)

Your blue eyes glisten with sad tears,
I`m afraid that`s the same I`ve seen the past years,
your golden locks, blow at the docks
as you, just sit sejak and watch
No nothings happening, oh nothings happening...

Your sofa, kerusi panjang is the same, the way anda left it
so tattered, so worn I can smell it.
The sweet cologne anda spray in the morning,
Is covered with the musk and dust and everything that follows.

He will not kill anda atau your soul,
He`s a killer anda were a fraud,
No other way to say it.
It came with a smile it then left with a cry
and that`s when anda say, nothings happening
No-ooo nothings happening.

If only anda realised,
your team mourns in pain
why did anda be so selfish?
Yea sure a gun is a gun,
and a pisau is a pisau and you
didn`t care at all.
It`s just a gun after all,
It`s not gonna hurt you...

So tell me this, and tell me the truth I need to know the logic,
So why did anda leave and drag us to hell,
without saying sorry.
Ofcourse nothings happening, no nothing ever happens,
anda just dragged us to hell with you...
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Well anda liked? maybe anda didnt lemme know please! Its called nothings happening and I will give anda a 2 pujian if anda can guess what couple its based around and 1 if anda know what tunjuk it is:)



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It's pretty good :)
sapherequeen posted hampir setahun yang lalu
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it is good but i agree with amethyst44... we need to know tunes and tempo and that kind of thing to get better feel of it.... i loved it all the same though, congrads Jisbonessed!!!!!! x
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amethyst44 said:
oh i can't guess what tunjuk its from atau what couple, but this is good. it'd be great to know how the tempo goes so that i can get a better feel for the song, but i think this is an awesome start. keep at it. :D
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Heyy thanks guys! Well it was based around Jane and lisbon from the mentalist!
Jisbonsessed posted hampir setahun yang lalu
Maachi said:
I Cinta the words!
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